IAIN KELLY

THE GRAVEYARD AT THE END OF MY STREET

There’s a graveyard at the end of my street.

I’ve walked round it since I could walk. I’ve read the tombstones since I could read.

Over the years I have written the life stories of the people buried there.

There’s one grave that memorialises three generations of one family. The father, son and grandson. They all died within ten years of each other. It’s tragic for them. It’s worse for the mother who has lost them all. How has she managed to go on?

One day I’ll lay down there and join the ghosts of my imagination. In the graveyard at the end of my street.


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© Liz Young

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

This month I am taking part in the A to Z Challenge 2017 – a post each day based on the letters of the alphabet and a theme. You can visit my A TO Z CHALLENGE 2017 page here to read the story.

As this challenge will take up a lot of my blogging time I may not get round to commenting on everyone’s posts, but I hope to find time to read all your stories as usual, and still be able to participate in Friday Fictioneers each week.

74 responses to “THE GRAVEYARD AT THE END OF MY STREET”

  1. Kim Richardson Avatar

    What a lovely little short story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Kim, a bit heavy, but then the prompt was a picture of a gravestone so…!

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      1. Kim Richardson Avatar

        I didn’t get heavy from it. I saw a sense of history, belonging, acceptance – more like homecoming. Perhaps that’s my weird mind 🙂

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        I like that you got this from it! Thank you 🙂

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      3. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

        I agree with Kim. This has an almost sweet side to it!

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      4. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Thanks Alicia, very kind.

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  2. magarisa Avatar

    Peaceful and pensive piece.

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      1. magarisa Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  3. Sandra Avatar

    I wouldn’t want one of those at the end of my street, no matter how inspiring the inhabitants’ life stories might be. Like how this flowed.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra – that part is in fact true – I do have a graveyard at the end of my street in the house I’m in now. Thankfully it is far enough away it is out of sight most of the time!

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  4. NJ Avatar
    NJ

    Short. Sweet. Simple 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – much like your wonderful A to Z posts, in a different sweet way 🙂

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      1. NJ Avatar
        NJ

        Aww, that’s sweet of you. Thank you 🙂

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  5. neelwritesblog Avatar

    Why! This flowed like water. Well done. Lian.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Lovely comment, thanks Neel.

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  6. shehannemoore Avatar

    Ah, you capture the voices here. The way the stones speak. Nice piece.

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  7. swritings Avatar

    I really enjoyed this! Lovely piece!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, much appreciated.

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  8. Magaly Guerrero Avatar

    I wonder if when he joins them, he’ll get the chance to share all the stories he has written. I really love the premise of this story. It can grow into a never-ending tale…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you. Definitely potential for a series of stories.

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I destiny we all have… love the sense.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Bjorn

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  10. jellico84 Avatar
    jellico84

    I daresay we’ll all be there someday. Great writing !

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      One of life’s certainties. Thank you.

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  11. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    I have read some sad gravestone epithets, this tale joins them

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for reading.

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  12. Rommy Driks Avatar

    Graveyards are really fascinating that way. They have so many stories to tell to those who stop by.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They certainly are. Whole lives and deaths all collected in one place, and peaceful too.

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  13. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    There is something very poetic about your story. In fact, I think it could be set to music. Very good.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle, very kind words.

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  14. Eva Blaskovic Avatar

    Sad but so beautiful, and beautifully written. ❤

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  15. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Good stuff, Iain.

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  16. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Thoughtful, beautiful writing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sascha

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  17. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    That was a lovely read, Iain. It does seem that some have heavier crosses to bear than others but then, that is life.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dale.

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  18. Leaking Ink Avatar

    Beautiful. Last line in particular.

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  19. draliman Avatar

    I found that quite peaceful and a little wistful. We had a graveyard near my street too, we used to walk around it on Christmas Eve.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Great place to walk a baby in a pram, very quiet and peaceful!

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  20. csheldonblog Avatar

    I remember walking through the Crem and looking at the grave stones, they are so fascinating!

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  21. nonsmokingladybug Avatar

    “The ghosts of your imagination.” I like that, I like it a lot.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  22. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    I agree with Ali, your story is peaceful and a bit wistful. Sometimes graveyards are the perfect place to think about the past and possibly the future.

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  23. Christine Goodnough Avatar

    Really like this, botj the view of the historian and the acceptance of life and death.

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  24. Liz Young Avatar

    Graveyards are wonderful places to think, as I found when I took that photo. Your story uses the image with feeling.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  25. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Very lyrical this one Iain. Great way to tell a story. Ghosts indeed haunt long after they are gone

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Laurie, much appreciated.

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  26. plaridel Avatar

    you did it again. this is one of your best. nothing fancy. the narrative flowed smoothly to conclusion.

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  27. spicedmullings Avatar

    Its almost like a song. So pithy and so simple word pic of a normal life!💐

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  28. Fatima Fakier Deria Avatar

    We are all heading that way to out own graves. Makes one ponder about their life and Life in general.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Graveyards certainly are places that make you ponder life and death. Thank you for reading.

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  29. Indira Avatar

    We keep graveyards away to forget about death but it is a truth to be remembered. Beautifully written.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, very kind.

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  30. granonine Avatar

    Leaves the mind free to create lots of stories 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely 🙂

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  31. yuhublogger Avatar

    The character’s thoughts have been penned so well. Loved it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very kind, thank you.

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  32. mjlstories Avatar

    I like graveyards and I like the simplicity and symmetry of your piece. Works well.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  33. amiewrites74 Avatar

    Simple yet beautiful piece. I have always loved graveyards. Every stone has a story, the possibilities are endless.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true. Thank you Amie.

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  34. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    It’s a feeling that used to be very strong in some communities, wanting to know where they would be buried. The sign of people who live for generations in the same place. We’ve lost that now. Not sure if it’s good or bad.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There is something comforting about seeing several generations of families together in the same place, and for those left behind I imagine it is a nice thing to think of everyone remaining together.

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        That’s it really, I think. We are afraid of death and having people around you you used to know is a comfort—even if they’re dead too 🙂

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  35. John Davis Frain Avatar

    Such an interesting view. A tragic time for a mother/daughter/granddaughter, yet seen from a different angle from the person on the outside looking in.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks John.

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  36. lingeringvisions by Dawn Avatar

    I like this, but then what writer wouldn’t?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dawn, very kind 🙂

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