IAIN KELLY

HUNTING SEASON

White gives way to green. Cold to warmth. Life returns.

I feel invigorated. Hibernation is over. Fresh blood runs through veins.

Months since anyone came through. It’s been lonely recently.

I’m eager to entertain. Soon the tourists will return.

The young and adventurous. The healthy and vital.

The thrillseekers. I’m happy to oblige.

The highway will open again.

Final checks. Rooms cleaned. Fresh sheets. Walls painted.

Into the office. Hit the switch. Neon light.

Motel. Open. $12 a night.

Just like Daddy before me. Keeping the family business running.

The swamp no longer frozen. A watery grave once more.

The axe is sharp. It’s not needed for firewood anymore.

All is ready. Now I wait.

It’s hunting season.


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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story in around 150 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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60 responses to “HUNTING SEASON”

  1. oglach Avatar

    Really well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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  2. magarisa Avatar

    What a gory family business! I shudder to think how many bodies went into that swamp

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think some of the family might have ended up in there too…

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      1. magarisa Avatar

        Horrifying.

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  3. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    The axe is I expect for cutting firewood.😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Sure, just firewood, nothing else 😉

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  4. LaRonda Moore Avatar

    I love this Iain – such vivid imagery!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Eva 🙂

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  5. neelwritesblog Avatar

    Very vivid imagery. Well written Lian.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neel.

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  6. Reena Saxena Avatar

    What a picturesque description….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Reena 🙂

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  7. Michael Avatar

    You created beautifully that sense of expectation through the change of season..well done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael.

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  8. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Very vivid. I love the way you’ve structured the lines.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it, trying to do something a little different.

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  9. JS Brand Avatar

    That’s an extreme, but effective, way of avoiding a bad review on Trip Advisor. Terrific writing though.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha true, a lot of people check in there, no one ever writes a review… 🙂

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  10. anintrovertedblogger Avatar

    Very well written! I wonder if it’s only the not so nice guests he does this too?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not sure what criteria he uses, but it would be best not to cause too many complaints! Thank you.

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I think I’d rather stay at Bates Motel! Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he may have seen that film… 🙂

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  12. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    I am kind of scared. who are you really ?
    Amazing build-up, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Just your average Joe who likes to dream 😉 thanks for your kind comment.

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  13. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Oh my gosh! Chilling! It reminds me of that movie, Psycho. Great story Iain! The twist at the end is chilling!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks PJ. Definitely a hint of Psycho in there!

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  14. Annie Avatar

    Yikes! Nice rhythm, an ironic intro to something potential grisly!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Annie. Grisly is a definite I fear!

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  15. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Yeah, tell me where that motel is so I know not to stop there on my next vacation! Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No stars on trip advisor last I checked!

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  16. Jade M. Wong Avatar

    I love how creative you are Iain! The way you were able to concoct this eerie murder story from this photo. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jade, very kind 🙂

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  17. shivamt25 Avatar

    This post went so gracefully from most pleasant to outright Hitchcockian. Loved it!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! 🙂

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  18. James Avatar

    Well that’s particularly nasty. I don’t like swamps anyway but this seals the deal. Never visiting one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Best avoided. Thanks James.

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  19. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Somehow I knew that was going to take a dark turn, but you still surprised me with it. And thanks for the warning not to stop by this guy’s hotel!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Your welcome, keep driving, there’s plenty more motels down the road! 🙂

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  20. Ellespeth Avatar

    !
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      In a good way? 🙂

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  21. goroyboy Avatar

    Uh oh, Nice transition Iian

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  22. Ameena k.g Avatar

    I log ethe anticipation in the narrator’s voice, he Is one eager worker! 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He’s certainly looking forward to it 🙂

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  23. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    A different kind of hunter indeed. A vampire type creature or just a Norman Bates type human? Interesting tale!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I was going for the Norman Bates type. Thanks Mandi.

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  24. milliethom Avatar

    I really like the way your story plays out Iain – and I didn’t see that ending coming! Hunting season has taken on a different meaning here. A gruesome tale with an intriguing main character. I’ll avoid staying in motels from now on. Very well written.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, I’m sure most motels are not run by people like this… hopefully! Thanks Millie.

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  25. McGuffy's Reader Avatar

    I was afraid of this! I like the way you unfolded this story. I could see it coming, but kept thinking, “Nooo…” Well done in anticipation and suspense.
    The Snow
    Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Annie, glad you liked it.

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      1. McGuffy's Reader Avatar

        I am following you, now.

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  26. Singledust Avatar

    nice slow innocent build up to something more below the surface, nice!

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  27. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

    That certainly sounds alarming and thrilling too. I wonder what wickedness he’s up to.

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  28. NJ Avatar
    NJ

    Okay, this gave me the chills. I should have known that when I’m reading your posts I have to be aware! Glad to read them 😁

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, maybe stay away from motels for a bit 😉

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      1. NJ Avatar
        NJ

        Haha, you bet 😁

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