IAIN KELLY

AUTUMN LEAVES

Archie looked at the overhanging branches from the neighbours overgrown sycamore tree. Every Autumn the leaves fell into his garden, burying the flowerbeds and lawn. Every Autumn he had to clear them.

It had taken him all morning to sweep the leaves up. Now they sat in one big pile in the middle of the garden.

Agnes tapped the kitchen window. ‘Lunch.’

Inside, Archie removed his hat and gloves. ‘You can see your breath out there,’ he remarked. He stretched his back, stiff from stooped exertion.

‘They really should cut back those branches.’ Agnes said. ‘And you should let your son-in-law sweep them up. You’re not getting any younger.’

Archie rolled his eyes. ‘Are Julia and the boys still coming round this afternoon?’ he asked.

‘Don’t worry, they’re still coming.’

An hour later Agnes and Julia stood at the window watching Archie and the children in the garden. Leaves flew everywhere accompanied by squeals of delight.

‘I’ll send Gary round tomorrow to clear the leaves.’ Julia said.

‘Don’t bother,’ Agnes sighed. ‘You’d only spoil his fun.’


2012-09-september-24th-2017

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.

To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE

You can read more short stories featuring Agnes and Archie here: THE AGNES AND ARCHIE STORIES

52 responses to “AUTUMN LEAVES”

  1. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Wonderful story!

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  2. JS Brand Avatar

    I really enjoyed this Ian. As a grumpy old man and a grandad, it felt close to home.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, you and Archie would get on really well 🙂

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  3. tharsheblogs Avatar
    tharsheblogs

    this is lovely!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  4. lavmuses Avatar
    lavmuses

    You paint such a relaxing picture. I want to walk among the 🍃 too

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  5. LucciaGray Avatar

    Lovely story:)

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  6. prior.. Avatar

    ahhh – great fun depicted – could feel the leaves settle with the smiles…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s a lovely thought, thank you.

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  7. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    This reminded me of my grandpa! Good work, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m glad it sparked a happy memory for you 🙂

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  8. ceayr Avatar

    Terrific. Crunching or squelching through leaves are among life’s great joys, especially when shared with a grandchild.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE

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  9. Sunday Musings (Nature and Fiction Warning) – priorhouse blog Avatar

    […] jungle photo reminded me of reading Lain Kelly’s Sunday fiction piece this morning (here), which was inspired by a leaf photo for a Sunday Fiction […]

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  10. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Simply delightful – I watched the scene from the window as I read it.

    Click to read my PhoFic!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, glad you liked it.

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  11. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Excellent imagery in this one.

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  12. Maggie C Avatar

    A sweet vignette of autumn and family. Very nice.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Maggie 🙂

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  13. Rosemary Carlson Avatar

    This story made me smile!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rosemary, always good to hear it gave you a smile.

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  14. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    It seems that one mans pain is another’s pleasure…I remember so clearly how playing in great piles of leaves felt. It was good to read this story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael, glad it meant something to you.

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  15. James Avatar

    Endearing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James

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  16. Susan Avatar

    A rite of autumn passage

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely 🙂

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  17. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    I just finished writing mine and it’s funny that yours would be the first one I read afterward…but since yours is first, I guess it’s not *that* funny. Anyway, mine has the same concept, except kids here these days don’t bother jumping in the leaves so it’s nice to know that somewhere they still do. Even if it irritates grandpa. 🙂 I love the way you wrote it, btw.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha, a shame the kids don’t do that anymore – one of life’s simple pleasures 🙂

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      1. Sascha Darlington Avatar

        Thanks, Iain.

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  18. David Avatar

    Another nice tale full of gentle humour, Iain. Surely enough of these for a novel soon. 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I know the characters well, whether I could get a novel out of them I’m not so sure! Thanks David.

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  19. Dahlia Avatar

    Took me right back to my childhood – nicely crafted Iain 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Awww, thanks Dahlia 🙂

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  20. athling2001 Avatar

    Lovely story. I like how you unfold his feeling throughout the story.

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  21. hombrehompson Avatar

    Very nice portrayal of family life.

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  22. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Funny Ian. As much as Archie complains, he loves working outside. My Dad’s
    It,e that too. But of course, Archie having grandkids isn’t going to not let them jump in the leaves. He’s a good grandpa 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely, he loves it really 🙂

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  23. kutukamus Avatar

    A chaos so invaluable 🙂

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  24. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    I love it. Great story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Many thanks.

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