IAIN KELLY

FARMER BARRY

When he was a small boy, Barry loved playing with the toy farm his father made for him. He tended to the small cows, sheep and pigs, drove the tractor, mucked out the stables and fed the horses.

Sometimes his father would join him, but after his parents divorce he sat playing on his own.

Being from a working class family, Barry knew he would never be able to have a real farm. He was also put off by the hard work.

It had taken him a few years, but now he had the farm he dreamed of.

He worked in the abandoned warehouse as Farmer Barry,  tending to his collection of stuffed animals. The college course in taxidermy and a knack for livestock rustling had given him the means to create his life-size playset.

Lifting the stuffed fox outside the fence to protect the sheep, Barry sighed. The end of another busy day. He tapped his father on the head. His dad’s glazed, still eyes didn’t respond, just like when he used to play with Barry and his toy farm.

‘Goodnight, Dad,’ said Barry. ‘See you in the morning.’

He flicked the light off.


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48 responses to “FARMER BARRY”

  1. The Indecisive Eejit Avatar

    Yikes! That actually gave me the shivers lol Very good!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, it had the desired effect!

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  2. angietrafford Avatar

    Very creepy stuff indeed

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Angie.

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  3. Lavanya Avatar
    Lavanya

    Wow, that’s real creative. Nicely done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  4. Jennie Avatar

    A great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie, glad you liked it!

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  5. ceayr Avatar

    Laughing! Love it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks CE, I have been playing a lot of ‘farm’ recently with my son. Hoping the similarity to this story ends there.

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  6. Eva Blaskovic Avatar

    Feels a little like The Landlady by Roald Dahl.

    Great job of creating such a full story in so few words. Lingering aftereffects with this one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not read that particular story but do like Roald Dahl. Thanks Eva 🙂

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  7. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Umm, Psycho? Great story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He may have some issues.

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  8. James Avatar

    Well that was grim. If Barry’s put off by work, what does he do to fund his little enterprise, work as a legitimate taxidermist during the day?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Quite possibly, although one to avoid if you ever need an animal stuffing!

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  9. Fandango Avatar

    The stuff…or stuffing…that life is made of. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thank you.

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  10. Liz H Avatar

    Oh my God. You got me (again)!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      1. Liz H Avatar

        No no no…thank YOU! 😀

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  11. JS Brand Avatar

    Brilliant! I don’t know how you get ideas like this, but I’m pleased you do. I had a work colleague whose hobby was taxidermy; he always seemed to be silently appraising the people around him. After reading your story I’m feeling relieved that we didn’t socialise outside work.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, hope he didn’t do anything like this!

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  12. Susan Avatar

    Delightfully dark. Does Barry have any farmhands?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Strong possibility, a few local unexplained disappearances perhaps…

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  13. Varad Avatar

    Whoa! That took a turn towards the bizarre. Good one, Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad you liked it Varad.

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  14. Rosemary Carlson Avatar

    We seem to have the same themes in our stories lately, Iain! This time, taxidermy! I enjoyed your story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rosemary.

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  15. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    This seemed like a little bit of E A Poe, lovely

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      High praise, thanks Michael

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  16. Joy Pixley Avatar

    A surprising and creepy ending, eeww! Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy 🙂

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  17. Sonny Price Avatar

    Well done! Can’t remember when I last chuckled and shivered at the same time. 🙂 Wonderful writing as always, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sonny, very kind.

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  18. neeltheauthor Avatar

    Great ‘stuff’, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  19. Sheena Avatar

    Psycho farm. Only the creepy music is lacking. Yikes!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, I’m sure we could find some 🙂

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  20. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    At first I thought this was going to be a nice, heartwarming story about the working class kid growing up to achieve his dream, but no. Great story! Very creepy.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like that you thought it would have a positive ending! Well, he’s happy at least 🙂

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  21. athling2001 Avatar

    Woah! Scary guy. Great story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes he is! Thank you.

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  22. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    That went suddenly creepy. I love it. Good story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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