IAIN KELLY

CÂINE

‘What is it?’ Gheorghe asked, poking at the pieces with the end of his pen.

‘Bones, stripped bare of any flesh.’ answered Mihaela, the forensic officer in charge of the scene.

‘Human?’

‘Canine.’

Small blessing, Gheorghe thought. He had worked for the UN at the end of the Bosnian war. He had seen mass graves of human remains. Still, it was a crime and he was the detective on call. The tip-off had been anonymous.

He tried to pick a fragment of bone up. It crumbled in his gloved hand.

‘Brittle. They’re disintegrating.’ Mihaela remarked.

‘What would do that to bone?’

‘Hydrofluoric acid. Tests will tell us for sure.’

‘How many do you think?’

‘Looks like a few thousand, if each container had one inside it. We’re still opening them.’

Gheorghe turned away from the pungent chemical smell. It stank, but not as much as the scandal he had stumbled into the middle of.

The Mayor of Bucharest had promised to rid the city of stray dogs.

Now Gheorghe knew how he had done it.


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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story in around 150 – 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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32 responses to “CÂINE”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Yes. We are still opening the cans of acid that disintegrate life. Research in process ….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Reena.

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  2. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Poor dogs.. 😦

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m afraid so.

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Great story! Just a sad story.

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  3. any1mark Avatar

    At least, it wasn’t part of a Chinese restaurant. Nice angle on the prompt, but I’m more of a cat person anyway.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Is that cats as pets or cats as restaurant food?! Thanks Mark 🙂

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      1. any1mark Avatar

        They are not fat enough for harvest yet

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  4. Liz H Avatar

    Dastardly deeds in the name of politics!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I know, who would believe such a thing could happen?! Thanks Liz.

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  5. Fandango Avatar

    How can anyone be do cruel and callous?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m afraid we humans have stooped much lower than this on many occasions through history.

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      1. Fandango Avatar

        Unfortunately you’re right.

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  6. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    This just proves man is the cruelest of all life forms. Good writing, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Was it ever in any doubt? Thanks Neel.

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  7. Michael Avatar

    A most interesting response Iain, loved your reasoning.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  8. James Avatar

    Yikes. Poor dogs. On the other hand, feral animals are dangerous. A difficult call.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Pragmatism versus compassion.

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  9. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    I hope that they do not find bigger containers, for I fear for anyone he does not like,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Good point, now he has a taste for it.

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  10. joyroses13 Avatar

    Oh horrible, but at the same time, a good story! Just very glad it was fiction! A big dog lover here! We had 4 dogs at one time for awhile. That got a little crazy, but you gotta love them! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a practical solution, with little waste, but not very compassionate. Hopefully it remains a work of fiction.

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  11. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Efficiency is a double-edged sword!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Efficient, but lacking in compassion somewhat! Thanks for reading.

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      1. anuragbakhshi Avatar

        Yeah, that’s what I meant, he was efficient, so many would have celebrated him, but at what cost? 😦

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  12. Anagha Yatin (@anagha_yatin) Avatar

    Feel like calling up Animal Help line…poor dogs!
    Very creative take Ian.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – no real dogs were harmed in the writing of this story!

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  13. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Sticks and stones may hurt my bones… but acid?

    Click to read my FFfAW!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, I imagine it would sting a little…

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  14. PamelaS.Canepa, Writing and Living Avatar

    Scandalous! I am seething after reading this. You went for the jugular, Iain. Good job!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think you have the right response to the story. Thanks Pamela.

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