ANOTHER YEAR

Back on the usual spot. It’s nice to get out of the dark box in the attic.

The first minutes were rough as always – turned upside down, shaken around, played with like a toy, before being settled on the mantelpiece.

The youngest is tall enough to reach me now, so I had a couple of rude awakenings, plucked from my perch at risk of being dropped, until the parents came to my rescue.

A nice tree this year. I wish I could smell the fresh pine, but I’ll settle for the gentle glow – new lights I think. There was lots of laughter while the tree was decorated.

It was only on the big day itself I noticed mother crying. Later on Grandad turned up on his own. I assume it was old age and nothing worse, but the day was lessened without the presence of Granny.

There were more presents than ever. The youngest got a small drum kit from Uncle. The parents weren’t thrilled. Even through water I can hear the vibrations when he starts banging.

It will be back into the box soon, forgotten about until winter returns. I can’t wait to be shaken upside down again.


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Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.

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32 responses to “ANOTHER YEAR”

  1. Annie Avatar

    I so love the melancholy in this. Sweet moments meshed with a sad event. Lovely, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Annie 🙂

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  2. James Avatar

    The underappreciated member of the family.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James

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  3. joyroses13 Avatar

    Creative.story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much!

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  4. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    I love the point of view here. Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  5. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Seeing the family dynamics through the eyes of an unknown witness, interesting take! But how sad for him, to always be observing, and never able to participate or be heard, or even recognized as real.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy – very much a prison for him, but he clearly cares for them.

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  6. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Interesting take from the globe’s perspective. I have some stuff that’s been sitting for more like 5 or 6 years. Wonder what they’d say about the changes! Thanks Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I hope they would approve for the most part!

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  7. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    As I often say, even objects are human 🙂 Btw, wrote something on similar lines a few months ago, on occasion of our country’s independence day 🙂 https://jagahdilmein.wordpress.com/2017/08/15/the-rejuvenation/

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  8. Viola Bleu Avatar
    Viola Bleu

    Great that it was a couple of sentences before I knew whose POV this was written from and I enjoyed it – very clever!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Viola 🙂

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  9. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Snow globes have feelings too. Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith.

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  10. tharsheblogs Avatar
    tharsheblogs

    awesome. i read your blog before i come to the picture of the week, and it is a bonus to guess… thank you for your words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  11. pensitivity101 Avatar

    That first Christmas without a loved one is always hard. Nice tale Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  12. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    A heartwarming story through the eyes of the snowman. The joy and the sadness. I could imagine it and feel the sentiment. Very nice!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  13. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    Love the view from inside the globe. We really don’t think enough about how our decorations feel cooped up in the dark for 11 or months a year 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sarah Ann 🙂

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  14. athling2001 Avatar

    Sad and happy at the same time. Beautifully done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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  15. patriciaruthsusan Avatar

    A sweet story mixed with a bit of sadness. I loved how we learned about the family’s Christmas from observations of the snow globe snowman. Good writing, Iain. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Suzanne 🙂

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