IAIN KELLY

FORCES OF ATTRACTION

Always gazing up at the stars, that was Charlie’s problem, dreaming about particles, planets and the cosmos, absorbed in studying the gravitational pull of black holes and their theoretical evaporation.

Larry stamped his feet, shivering in the cold air, watching Charlie adjust the camera pointing up at the clear night sky. ‘Seriously, this is how you want to spend another Saturday night?’

As Larry spoke what had been Charlie’s fleeting interest in the undefinable and theoretical forces of the attraction between two human beings evaporated.

Charlie looked up at the stars, the universe and the science behind it all and she wondered.


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Copyright Ted Strutz

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

A small piece to mark the passing of Stephen Hawking, who inspired, and will continue to inspire, so many.

88 responses to “FORCES OF ATTRACTION”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    I loved the forces of attraction joke

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neil.

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  2. prior.. Avatar

    wonderful in a tribute to Stephen Hawking…
    and fun way to spend a saturday night.
    Reminded me of when I knew I was really growing up – I did not have to party on the weekends anymore – ha

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, yes fun at the time, but if I was offered the chance to do it again, I would prefer a quiet night in with a good book 🙂

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      1. prior.. Avatar

        now that sounds really good – 🙂

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  3. Jan Vanek Avatar

    This sentence: “…the undefinable and theoretical forces of the attraction between two human beings evaporated.” Wow. I loved that. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jan 🙂

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  4. Sandra Avatar

    Such a lovely tribute. I heard about an exchange between Stephen Hawkin and someone else whose name I missed, where the other person said “If there is such a thing as a parallel universe, does that mean that in a parallel universe I might be more intelligent than you.” “Indeed you might,” said Hawkin, “and in yet another universe you might even be funny.” 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      What a great reply. A lot of the tributes from fellow scientists this morning refer to him being a great communicator because of his disease he had to speak plainly and succinctly to get his points across – a lesson that could be learned by a fair few in the world today.

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    2. rgayer55 Avatar

      Wow, I gotta find me another universe.

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  5. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Wondered what? Another fruitless pursuit? 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, wonder in the sense of awestruck. Possibly fruitless, but we all must have our dreams 🙂

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  6. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    And Charlie has chosen the better part. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rochelle

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  7. quiall Avatar

    Stephen Hawking is one of the bright lights in the sky now. He will be missed.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      An inspiration to many, and not just those in the world of science.

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  8. James Avatar

    As a young man I considered a career in astronomy but I’m terrible at math. It takes more than wonder, alas.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You can still gaze up and dream though James.

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      1. James Avatar

        I do sometimes, but more often than not I just write about my dreams.

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  9. Rowena Avatar

    Iain, this is a beautiful piece of writing. Like the others, I also loved: “As Larry spoke what had been Charlie’s fleeting interest in the undefinable and theoretical forces of the attraction between two human beings evaporated.” I feel a bit sorry for Charli because loving the stars, the planets and physics can’t replace the wonder of loving and being loved. Perhaps, they’re not a good match. I must admit I wouldn’t be impressed if someone was looking up into space all the time we were on a date instead of looking into my eyes.
    On a personal note, thank you for making this tribute to Stephen Hawking. A close friend of mine is in the late stages of Motor Neurone Disease and he has been a real encouragement to her and the community while I guess, there’s also that question about why he lived for so long? He was 76 which is a good innings for any male. I also noticed that he was born only 3 years before my parents and I haven’t accepted that they’re old yet. That was another wake up call.
    Hope you have a great week.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rowena. Charlie is still young, so perhaps she has still to meet the right one who will open up a whole new world for her here on Earth! I agree with you about Stephen Hawking. He will rightly be remembered for his scientific work but his incredible long life coping and thriving despite such a debilitating condition is perhaps his greatest achievement.

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      1. Rowena Avatar

        And his greatest mystery!

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  10. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    Great tale and a lovely tribute to the best physicist of our times.

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  11. subroto Avatar

    Nice one and with a science joke as a bonus. Totally true what they say about great minds (ahem). Looks like there will be more tributes to Stephen Hawkings for this prompt.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It is an apt photo for the news today.

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  12. Liz H Avatar

    So sad to see Hawking’s passed, but he out-passed us all in age and genius.
    And so sad, Larry is firmly in the the Friend Zone. Just couldn’t compete…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He is up against the whole universe after all!

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  13. pennygadd51 Avatar

    You’ve captured the interaction between the two characters very well.
    Larry is never going to be right for Charlie. If he’s keen, he needs to put on his thermals, and his gloves, and his woolly hat and say something intelligent! And, Larry, buy Charlie ‘A brief history of time’ for her birthday.
    Nice work, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, you’re right, but I think Larry might be kidding himself if he thinks he can make that much effort – or say anything intelligent enough 🙂

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  14. EagleAye Avatar

    Seems like Larry might consider getting interested in astronomy or seeking someone more simple to date.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, I think he may be out of his league with her.

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  15. Lynn Love Avatar

    Just one line and Larry has condemned himself to travelling a lone through the cosmos. Probably for the best Charlie finds out the truth now. Great story Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn, I’m sure there will be someone out there for Charlie. For Larry, I’m not so sure!

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        My pleasure Iain

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  16. jillyfunnell Avatar

    Very enjoyable description og an earthly mismatch.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jilly.

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  17. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    So good, Iain. Nice tribute to the late great Hawking and a nice little inside into the forces of attraction 😉
    I like that your Charlie is a girl.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks you Dale 🙂

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  18. Kelvin M. Knight's blog Avatar

    A star-gazing tone to this story if ever there was one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Kelvin

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  19. granonine Avatar

    Great twist there, using the feminine pronoun. All the pieces fell into place 🙂

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  20. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    Go for it, Charlie! Find a man who shares your dreams and your wonder.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for reading Sarah 🙂

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  21. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Beautifully done. The tribute, the carefully chosen words. The delightful end.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Alicia

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  22. Susan Avatar

    A beautiful story and tribute.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Susan

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  23. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    What a great tribute Iain. And you go Charlie, never compromise on your passion, boys will come and go, but the stars will always remain there with you 🙂

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  24. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar

    A great tribute to a great man and a lovely story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Irene

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  25. draliman Avatar

    I like the way you used gravitational and physical attraction. As for the two of them, I’m not sure if Larry should be more supportive or if Charlie should try doing something they Larry enjoys every once in a while!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you. I guess it just wasn’t meant to be for them.

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  26. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Way to go Charlie! Lovely tribute to Stephen Hawking, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neel

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  27. liz young Avatar

    It always helps relationships to share your interests.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It does make things easier.

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  28. curtmercer Avatar

    Ha, you surprised me there near the end with Charlie being a female. Well done and good take on the prompt!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Curt

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  29. Calico Crayon Avatar
    Calico Crayon

    Interesting story. I liked how it twisted at the end. It really made the title relevant.

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  30. Vivian Zems Avatar

    A lovely tribute to Hawking. The mysteries of the universe still entice.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely. Thanks Vivian

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  31. plaridel Avatar

    “It would not be much of a universe if it wasn’t home to the people you love.” – that’s my favorite quote from him. may he rest in peace among the stars.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He had so many great phrases, that is a brilliant one, thanks for sharing.

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  32. rgayer55 Avatar

    Houston, I think we have an incompatability issue.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Larry may as well be an invisible box…

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  33. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Nicely done, Iain. I think Charlie needs to find someone who wants to watch the stars as much as she does. Sometimes physically attraction just isn’t enough.

    Excellent tribute, too. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sascha

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  34. magarisa Avatar

    Fortunately for Larry, he won’t have to spend any more Saturday nights in the cold, looking up at the sky. Lovely tribute to Stephen Hawking.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s not for everyone. Thank you.

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  35. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Charlie needs to find someone who enjoys staring at the stars on a Saturday night! Larry just doesn’t cut it. Nice story as always! =)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Brenda 🙂

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  36. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love the twist at the end… the attractions fade when someone gazes at the sky…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Some things just can’t compete! Thanks Bjorn

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  37. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    Love it. Charlie is better off without him, Larry will never understand her. The third paragraph is so strong, ‘…Charlie’s fleeting interest in the undefinable and theoretical forces of the attraction between two human beings evaporated.’ – human relationships aren’t as easy to understand as some scientific theories

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They are definitely just as confusing as understanding the universe! Thanks Sarah Ann 🙂

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  38. patrickprinsloo Avatar

    Tough luck Larry, you’ve screwed up.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, I think he’s lost out bad here.

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  39. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    I immediately thought of Stephen Hawking in this piece, guess it was the reference to black holes. It is hard when you find you don’t have the connection you expected in someone you were so attracted to in the beginning.. Loved this, Iain. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Fatima

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  40. athling2001 Avatar

    Seems like he would have made some much more headway, by just keeping quiet. Great take.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      True, some things are best left unsaid!

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