IAIN KELLY

RESTLESS SPIRIT

Tap, tap, tap.

Dr.  Henry Folkestone watched as Abubakar put down his instruments and looked back at the expedition leader.

Together the put their shoulders against the huge rectangular boulder and heaved. Gradually the ancient stone moved, the sandstone scraped along the floor. Dust and dirt swirled in the fetid air.

This was the moment Henry had been working towards for years. The tomb of the great Egyptian Pharaoh Hatshepsut lay beyond this door, buried with her jewels and gold. The British Museum of Ancient History would claim the majority of the discovery. The fame that would come with the discovery was enough for him.

Finally they made a gap big enough for Henry to fit through. He took the flaming torch and stepped through. Flickering orange light fell on the dark tomb for the first time in centuries. It illuminated cobwebs, old wooden bowls and spoons. He jumped at the skeleton in the corner, the empty black eye sockets staring at him, a gaping mouth mocking him.

Deeper inside the pyramid a golden casket shuddered. The restless spirit of Hatshepsut lay trapped still, waiting for the day she could unleash her power over the Earth once more and take her revenge.


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29 responses to “RESTLESS SPIRIT”

  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    I enjoyed this, Iain. I think we all fear the power of the unknown after world, especially when people try to preserve it and keep it alive.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, yes, some things are bedtime left undisturbed!

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  2. ceayr Avatar

    Nicely atmospheric, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE

      Like

  3. Jennie Avatar

    This is so good, Iain. Thank you!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennie 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain. 🙂

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  4. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Wonderfully creepy mood to this one. And boy, makes me want to see her get her revenge!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yeah, it might not be pretty! 🙂

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  5. prior.. Avatar

    yes – some things are better left alone- and undisturbed – and this is a great example of that
    🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. prior.. Avatar

        🙂

        Like

  6. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Creepy, atmosheric, intriguing, what not? Very well written, Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neel

      Like

  7. James Avatar

    Echoes of the most recent “Mummy” movie starring Tom Cruise.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I saw that one, it was a entertaining enough but a bit of a disappointment. Not sure if Universal are going to continue with the franchise it was meant to launch.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. James Avatar

        I think they cancelled it. I also heard the Cruise had it written in his contract that he could re-write the script as he saw fit, which he did making it a much more “Tom Cruise-centric” film, probably at the cost of the movie’s quality.

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  8. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Excellent story! Very atmospheric.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  9. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    A great atmospheric story once again Iain.

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  10. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    oooo! Very good. I can feel things awakening!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha, it could get messy! 🙂

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      1. Sascha Darlington Avatar

        Messy can be interesting. Actually it usually is. 🙂

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  11. athling2001 Avatar

    Whoops! Bad news coming. Great story.

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  12. Dahlia Avatar

    Wonderful atmosphere Iain, I felt as if I was there!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dahlia

      Like

  13. Vernon Avatar

    Old Henry better be careful because there is nothing like waking up a restless spirit. 😯

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