IAIN KELLY

A NEW SHANGRI-LA

At the end of the rough track through the mountains there was only inhospitable forest on steep hillsides.

The young monk Lopsang watched mystified as the village elder Tenzin propped up the sign with twigs.

‘Why are we warning people away? There’s nothing there.’

The wise man finished his work. ‘Because if we tell them not to come thousands will be sure to venture here to see what we are hiding, and when the tourists come the government will have to develop the road, facilities, housing. The money will roll in.’

‘But why use twigs?’

‘Backpackers like a touch of ‘lost world’ authenticity.’


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Copyright Bjorn Rudberg

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

110 responses to “A NEW SHANGRI-LA”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Cynical and wickedly funny, Iain

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neil.

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  2. Anita Avatar

    Brilliant idea! Development and tourism go together. Wise Monk indeed 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Anita 🙂

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  3. Varad Avatar

    No wonder they call him the wise one. Nice one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 wise in many ways. Thanks Varad.

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  4. ceayr Avatar

    Laughing.
    Your story is as clever as Tenzin, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE, always good to raise a smile.

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  5. pennygadd51 Avatar

    Lovely story, Iain, and it made me smile. You’ve written a great concluding line, too!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny, glad you liked it.

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  6. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Even Buddhists take marketing classes, I guess. Good story

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Monks still have to make a living. Thank you.

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  7. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    Reverse logic at its best.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Works every time.

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  8. larry trasciatti Avatar

    There’s nothing so tempting as a forbidden fruit

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Exactly. Thanks Larry

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  9. Fandango Avatar

    Made me think of the Joni Mitchell lyric, “They paved paradise and put up a parking lot.”

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Great song, and a story that is till being repeated over and over again.

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      1. Fandango Avatar

        Sadly so.

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  10. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    What a bunch of cynics! But they’re right.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a fool-proof plan.

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  11. jillyfunnell Avatar

    Cynical but realistic, unfortunately. Especially the bit about the twig and the authenticity.

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  12. jillyfunnell Avatar

    Great title as well, sorry, Iain, I meant to put that but pressed the button too fast.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jilly, appreciate your comment 🙂

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  13. granonine Avatar

    I really like this. Novel idea, true portrayal of human nature.

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  14. prior.. Avatar

    ahhhh…
    say do not touch and we always want to!

    love the psychology here – and even the cool reason for the twigs.

    🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  15. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Goodness! What a smart old man. I love that you focused on the random sticks holding up the sign.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s all in the details. Thanks Alicia

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  16. Alice Audrey Avatar

    This plan could work.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  17. kindredspirit23 Avatar

    Money-grubbing monks? Oh My!

    Here’s Your Sign

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s globalisation for you 🙂

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      1. kindredspirit23 Avatar

        It most certainly is.

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  18. Jan Vanek Avatar

    Wise, old Tenzin! He knows humanity well! 😊

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      We are so predictable!

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  19. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Ha… the lure of what’s forbidden… we actually walked a bit passed that sign, but it turned out to be a dead end.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No Shangri-La or lost world? Disappointing 🙂

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  20. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    I adore this take, Iain! And let’s face it, a monk’s gotta do, what a monk’s gotta do!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dale, much appreciated 🙂

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  21. Calico Crayon Avatar
    Calico Crayon

    This was funny, You need to design it in such a way we look barely literate. Are you with me Lopsang?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He will do whatever the wise monk tells him 🙂

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  22. Edith M. Field Avatar

    A superb story, Iain. I loved it!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Edith

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  23. plaridel Avatar

    hopefully, reverse psychology will work its magic in this case. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a sure fire winner 🙂

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  24. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Ha ha ha, this one is really wise.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  25. goroyboy Avatar

    Reverse Spirituality Lol

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  26. Meena Avatar

    Great story Iain. The monk is worldly wise if not spiritually!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wonder which is more important? Thanks Meena

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  27. draliman Avatar

    Haha, what a clever chap. He has people all sussed out and no mistake 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely 🙂

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  28. J. E. Kennedy Avatar

    Very wise man indeed! The last line made me laugh out loud. Great, fun, story.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, good to know it gave you a laugh 🙂

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  29. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Tell them not to and they will! Excellent Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith

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  30. Russell Gayer Avatar

    The wise old monk is playing them like a fiddle. Reminds me of putting up a “Wet Paint” sign. People can’t wait to touch it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, exactly. Thanks Russell.

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  31. Lynn Love Avatar

    Ha! Love that! What a very wise man. And why not have the tourists rolling in if it gives them a new road? Great tale Iain

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn, everyone wins, except perhaps the natural world that was undisturbed before hand.

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        My pleasure Iain

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  32. Norma Avatar

    Damn humans! we do the things we are not suppose to do. And go to places where we aren’t suppose to be.
    Nicely done, Iain. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Norma

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  33. Sandra Avatar

    Such a wily old chap!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Certainly is. Thanks Sandra.

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  34. James McEwan Avatar

    The philosophy of a wise man. However, I think once his mountainous peace is invaded he may regret his wise words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure he has a quiet spot where he can remain in peace – counting his money! Thanks James.

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  35. liz young Avatar

    A very wise monk.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Definitely, thanks Liz

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  36. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Ha! How very commercial of him. A funny piece Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Laurie

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  37. Jelli Avatar
    Jelli

    So true. We always seem to want what is forbidden to us… started with that dang tree….

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, yes and ever since we keep making the same mistake. Thank you.

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  38. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    This monk should have become a politician. I enjoyed what you did with this story

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He’s too smart to be a politician! Thanks Michael.

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  39. Ann (bunnygirl) Avatar

    A very wise man!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Ann

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  41. subroto Avatar

    Har! Har! The old monk knows a few tricks for sure. He should set up a hot dog stand too where he makes one with everything.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh I’m sure he’s got a plan for merchandising and refreshments too! 🙂

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  42. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar

    LOL. A bit of reverse psychology in play here. I can see why Tenzin is the wise man. Good story Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Irene

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  43. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    Now is Tenzin wise or cynical, or both? A wonderfully engaging story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think healthily both 🙂

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  44. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    I enjoyed the way this read so freely. The conversation was engrossing and contemplative.
    Yet, there was a tongue-in-checck whimsy too. Nicely done, lain.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Isadora, glad you enjoyed it.

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  45. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    I love his idea. Great, fun story.
    The last line is genius.🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Moon 🙂

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  46. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Ah, love the philosophy! I bet it will work. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha 🙂

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  47. Dahlia Avatar

    Haha- he is a smart old man! Excellent stuff Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dahlia 🙂

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  48. Dan Bohn Avatar

    Tenzin’s twigs are a lot better that the old “Built it and they will come” approach. Have someone else built it. Very wise man. Super story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yeah, get someone else to do all the heavy lifting 🙂

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  49. athling2001 Avatar

    What a smart old man. And practical, too. He be careful what he is wishing for, however, because government brings much more than improved roads and housing. Still, maybe the rest that comes is worth the improvements.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure he has it all planned out! Thank you.

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  50. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Aaahhhh…reverse psychology.
    An amusing tale, Lain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dawn

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