A NEW SHANGRI-LA

At the end of the rough track through the mountains there was only inhospitable forest on steep hillsides.

The young monk Lopsang watched mystified as the village elder Tenzin propped up the sign with twigs.

‘Why are we warning people away? There’s nothing there.’

The wise man finished his work. ‘Because if we tell them not to come thousands will be sure to venture here to see what we are hiding, and when the tourists come the government will have to develop the road, facilities, housing. The money will roll in.’

‘But why use twigs?’

‘Backpackers like a touch of ‘lost world’ authenticity.’


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Copyright Bjorn Rudberg

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

110 responses to “A NEW SHANGRI-LA”

  1. Cynical and wickedly funny, Iain

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  2. Brilliant idea! Development and tourism go together. Wise Monk indeed 🙂

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    1. Thank you Anita 🙂

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  3. No wonder they call him the wise one. Nice one, Iain.

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    1. 🙂 wise in many ways. Thanks Varad.

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  4. Laughing.
    Your story is as clever as Tenzin, Iain!

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    1. Thank you CE, always good to raise a smile.

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  5. Lovely story, Iain, and it made me smile. You’ve written a great concluding line, too!

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    1. Thank you Penny, glad you liked it.

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  6. Even Buddhists take marketing classes, I guess. Good story

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    1. Monks still have to make a living. Thank you.

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  7. Reverse logic at its best.

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  8. There’s nothing so tempting as a forbidden fruit

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    1. Exactly. Thanks Larry

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  9. Made me think of the Joni Mitchell lyric, “They paved paradise and put up a parking lot.”

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    1. Great song, and a story that is till being repeated over and over again.

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  10. What a bunch of cynics! But they’re right.

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    1. It’s a fool-proof plan.

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  11. Cynical but realistic, unfortunately. Especially the bit about the twig and the authenticity.

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  12. Great title as well, sorry, Iain, I meant to put that but pressed the button too fast.

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    1. Thanks Jilly, appreciate your comment 🙂

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  13. I really like this. Novel idea, true portrayal of human nature.

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  14. ahhhh…
    say do not touch and we always want to!

    love the psychology here – and even the cool reason for the twigs.

    🙂

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  15. Goodness! What a smart old man. I love that you focused on the random sticks holding up the sign.

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    1. It’s all in the details. Thanks Alicia

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  16. This plan could work.

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    1. That’s globalisation for you 🙂

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      1. It most certainly is.

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  17. Wise, old Tenzin! He knows humanity well! 😊

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    1. We are so predictable!

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  18. Ha… the lure of what’s forbidden… we actually walked a bit passed that sign, but it turned out to be a dead end.

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    1. No Shangri-La or lost world? Disappointing 🙂

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  19. I adore this take, Iain! And let’s face it, a monk’s gotta do, what a monk’s gotta do!

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    1. Thank you Dale, much appreciated 🙂

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  20. This was funny, You need to design it in such a way we look barely literate. Are you with me Lopsang?

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    1. He will do whatever the wise monk tells him 🙂

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  21. A superb story, Iain. I loved it!

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  22. hopefully, reverse psychology will work its magic in this case. 🙂

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    1. It’s a sure fire winner 🙂

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  23. Ha ha ha, this one is really wise.

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  24. Reverse Spirituality Lol

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  25. Great story Iain. The monk is worldly wise if not spiritually!

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    1. I wonder which is more important? Thanks Meena

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  26. Haha, what a clever chap. He has people all sussed out and no mistake 🙂

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  27. Very wise man indeed! The last line made me laugh out loud. Great, fun, story.

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    1. Thank you, good to know it gave you a laugh 🙂

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  28. Tell them not to and they will! Excellent Iain

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  29. The wise old monk is playing them like a fiddle. Reminds me of putting up a “Wet Paint” sign. People can’t wait to touch it.

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    1. Ha, exactly. Thanks Russell.

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  30. Ha! Love that! What a very wise man. And why not have the tourists rolling in if it gives them a new road? Great tale Iain

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    1. Thanks Lynn, everyone wins, except perhaps the natural world that was undisturbed before hand.

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  31. Damn humans! we do the things we are not suppose to do. And go to places where we aren’t suppose to be.
    Nicely done, Iain. 🙂

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  32. Such a wily old chap!

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    1. Certainly is. Thanks Sandra.

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  33. The philosophy of a wise man. However, I think once his mountainous peace is invaded he may regret his wise words.

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    1. I’m sure he has a quiet spot where he can remain in peace – counting his money! Thanks James.

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    1. Definitely, thanks Liz

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  34. Ha! How very commercial of him. A funny piece Iain.

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  35. So true. We always seem to want what is forbidden to us… started with that dang tree….

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    1. Ha, yes and ever since we keep making the same mistake. Thank you.

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    This monk should have become a politician. I enjoyed what you did with this story

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    1. He’s too smart to be a politician! Thanks Michael.

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  37. Har! Har! The old monk knows a few tricks for sure. He should set up a hot dog stand too where he makes one with everything.

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    1. Oh I’m sure he’s got a plan for merchandising and refreshments too! 🙂

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  38. LOL. A bit of reverse psychology in play here. I can see why Tenzin is the wise man. Good story Iain.

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  39. Now is Tenzin wise or cynical, or both? A wonderfully engaging story.

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    1. I think healthily both 🙂

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  40. I enjoyed the way this read so freely. The conversation was engrossing and contemplative.
    Yet, there was a tongue-in-checck whimsy too. Nicely done, lain.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Thank you Isadora, glad you enjoyed it.

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  41. I love his idea. Great, fun story.
    The last line is genius.🙂

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  42. Ah, love the philosophy! I bet it will work. 🙂

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  43. Haha- he is a smart old man! Excellent stuff Iain

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    1. Thank you Dahlia 🙂

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  44. Tenzin’s twigs are a lot better that the old “Built it and they will come” approach. Have someone else built it. Very wise man. Super story Iain.

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    1. Yeah, get someone else to do all the heavy lifting 🙂

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  45. What a smart old man. And practical, too. He be careful what he is wishing for, however, because government brings much more than improved roads and housing. Still, maybe the rest that comes is worth the improvements.

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    1. I’m sure he has it all planned out! Thank you.

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  46. Aaahhhh…reverse psychology.
    An amusing tale, Lain.

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