E IS FOR ECHTERNACH, LUXEMBOURG

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A STORY OF ELATION IN ECHTERNACH, LUXEMBOURG

The violinist onstage, the world renowned Daniel Hope, took the applause. As it gradually died away he raised the instrument to his chin and an expectant hush descended. The opening notes of Brahms’ Violin sonata No. 1 in G major, op. 78 quietly soared from the sliding bow. The piano accompaniment joined in. The duet drifted over the silent audience inside the Trifolion’s main auditorium.

Éléonore Thill sat enraptured in the front row. She focused on the nimble fingers caressing the strings along the neck. They moved effortlessly, holding and releasing, dancing to the rhythm that the bow played. She knew some Brahms. She had played violin on this very stage, but only in school concerts and never to a full house.

When she had accepted her place at the Echternach Music School she thought all she desired had been fulfilled. She had moved to the large town from the small village of Hachiville in the north, where she was born. Her parents could not afford to accompany her so she moved in with her Aunt. In Hachiville she was a star among the population of two hundred people. Her precocious skill with the violin was seen and heard every evening. She was the main attraction at all the social gatherings. Echternach was no monstrous metropolis, but the school alone had five times the population of Hachiville.

The bright-eyed ten year old who had started at the school was six years older now, and six years wiser. She had become used to being judged proficient if unspectacular. A career as an orchestra player was what her teachers saw for her, perhaps part of a quartet if she gave herself fully to the art.

It was not through lack of desire that Éléonore always ranked just below the very top students. In her heart she knew she was producing all that she was capable of. There was nothing more to give. Only the very top, less than one percent, would end up like Daniel Hope, travelling the world, playing the great venues as a solo artist. The other requirement that Éléonore lacked was the look of a true musical genius. Though others tried to tell her appearance didn’t matter, she knew it held her back. She was not slim, she was not tall, she was not elegant. Her features were not balanced, her hair was not flowing nor shining. Daniel Hope stood on the stage, his body moving gracefully in synchrony with the music and the instrument. Éléonore could only dream of replicating such movement.

As the beauty of the notes floated over her, Éléonore allowed herself to picture Carnegie Hall packed with New Yorkers desperate to hear her command the instrument; or the Weiner Musikverein in Vienna; or the Tchaikovsky Concert Hall at the Bolshoi in Moscow. One day she hoped to finally travel outside the borders of Luxembourg and see these places for herself. For now, her dreams were based on the performances she could glimpse from the internet.

The final notes of the sonata faded away, faintly echoing across the hushed room. The applause began to ring around Éléonore. She joined in. The ovation grew and those around her stood on their feet. In her dreams she had stood on those famous stages, taking that applause. Now she unlocked the brakes on her wheelchair and swivelled down the narrow aisle. Some glances were thrown her way as she wheeled away, she felt the heads turning to look at her as the applause petered out.

She no longer cared. Just as when she had been a small child in Hachiville, music was her escape from the crippled body she had been born with. Strangers could stare all they wanted, inside she was alive. One day she may get the chance to play at the Echternach International Music Festival, or she would not. So long as there was music, Éléonore Thill would do more than survive. She would live.


Written as part of The A to Z Challenge 2018. Click HERE for more details of the challenge.

Each day in April we will visit a different town or city in the European Union, whose name will begin with the letter of the day – today it’s a trip to the International Music Festival in the town of Echternach, Luxembourg – for a story based on a theme also corresponding to the same letter.

Over the course of the month and 26 stories, we will visit all 28 member countries to complete a farewell tour before Britain leaves the political union next year, touching on the history, politics, culture and people at the heart of Europe.

For a full list of stories and places visited, visit here: THE A TO Z CHALLENGE 2018.

120 responses to “E IS FOR ECHTERNACH, LUXEMBOURG”

  1. A very pleasant and uplifiting story, Iain. I like the way how the story ends. Well done.

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  2. As usual, I have Classic FM playing in the background, the perfect accompaniment to your beautifully written piece.

    My Friend Rosey – E is for Employment

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    1. Thanks Keith, a perfect mood-setter!

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  3. That was a really touching end to the story. Very moving. My daughter has been learning violin for the past 6 years and is a competent little violinist in her own right. This story strikes to the deeps in me as hearing my daughter practising in the evening is my way of relaxing after I come home tired from the office everyday. And yes, music is a real escape from the drudgery of life.

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    1. Thank you. That sounds like a wonderful way to relax!

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  4. Another winner, Iain. I’m so enjoying your stories.

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    1. Thank you so much Martha, so pleasing to hear 🙂

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  5. Uplifting and beautiful. I could feel the determination flowing in her. Music can do that to you. Wonderful write, Iain.

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    1. Thank you Annie 🙂

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  6. I live in the music real or imagined all through the day. My fingers itch to practice veena every hour of the day by breaking out of the more mundane tasks. Loved your super descriptive piece. Keep writing and delighting us all,

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    1. Thank you so much – I only wish I had the talent to play an instrument well!

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  7. I’ll never be a musician, but your story reminded me of the time when I attended a live performance of the late classical guitarist Andres Segovia in San Francisco in 1978. It was just him and his guitar, no sound system, no amplification. He was amazing. I can’t imagine why people enjoy what passes for popular music these days when people like Segovia created such masterful works.

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    1. I’m with you James, I will never master any instrument, but I do appreciate those who can. Unfortunately that doesn’t seem to be a qualification for many of the celebrity pop musicians these days…!

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  8. As promised, you gave us a non-war story filled with hope and inspiration.

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  9. A touching, promising tale, Ian. Could see her wheelchair pass by me…

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  10. Oh, Iain, as the mom of a son with physical disabilities, this brought tears to my eyes! Lovely and moving.

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    1. That means a lot, thank you so much, and I’m glad it meant something to you.

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  11. It sounds like Éléonore has had many obstacles to overcome, but she has the determination to succeed. Well done.

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    1. Thanks Sascha, she has indeed.

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  12. I loved the story. I remember playing the piano and pretending I was at Carnegie Hall. After I finished my piece, the audience would roar with applause all complete with a standing ovation 😉 Of course this was just in my head. My mother use to say, “I was experiencing Vision’s of Grander.” Which I was, but it was a lovely vision. Now of course I have two boys up there on the stage and yes they even performed in New York and China. They are professional Ballet dancer’s and when I’m in the audience I always make sure they get a standing ovation. Lovely piece of writing.

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    1. Thank you for sharing your lovely story too, you must be so proud of your boys! I too still imagine I might one day play to a crowd, alas my limited piano playing will never make the grade!

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      1. I thought you might play some kind of instrument. Only a true musician could put that into words like you did. My oldest son plays the piano. He’s amazing !!! I would try to play with him and I would just fall off the bench laughing because how could I think I could ever keep up with him!! All my kids did something in the arts. My daughter sang aria’s, beautiful voice. But alas a career in the arts doesn’t put food on the table or at least much food on the table, which is a real shame. She’s a nurse at her day job. The boys/men are the only ones who dance professionally and now understand the phrase, “Starving Artist.” 😉

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      2. Haha, practical life, like money, always gets in the way! What a talented family you have – you must have done something right bringing them up 🙂

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      3. They get their talent from their grandmama, (my mom)…I started them young and I didn’t let them ever think that they couldn’t do that. I told them to take the road that’s less traveled. Be the trail blazer’s. Life’s more fun that way…It’s been a lot of work, but it also has been so rewarding to watch them grow as performer’s. When he went to China, I was like, “Who goes to China and dances professionally !!!” I grew up a girl from the south side of Chicago who worked for the railroad. I fell in love with my high school sweetheart. He’s a suit in the city and I’m a mother and homemaker. Farthest I’ve been is San Fran and that was with my dancer boys who were dancing with San Francisco Ballet for a summer intensive. It’s been a great run and I hope it never stops 🙂

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  13. I loved this Ian. Her differently abled body is in no way an impediment as her spirits soar high and the passion she has towards her art wil take her places someday.

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    1. Thank you, so pleased you liked it 🙂

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  14. Wow, I did not expect that she would be in a wheelchair. You captured her longing and desire perfectly and it’s true how music can transport you beyond your struggles and limitations. Another excellent post.

    https://katseaholm.wordpress.com/2018/04/05/e-is-for-escape/

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    1. Thank you Kat, I’m glad the reveal worked, I wanted it to be a surprise at the end.

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  15. This is so beautiful. I could visualize the scene as she sets down and swirls in! Love your writing!

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    1. Thank you so much fro visiting again, Lakshmi, much appreciated 🙂

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    This was beautiful and moving. Appearances count where they shouldn’t. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.

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    1. You’re very welcome, thank you for reading and your lovely comment.

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  17. What a great zinger at the end. I love it. Elation, Éléonore, and Echternach! Bravo.

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    1. Thank you Denise, glad the ending worked for you 🙂

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  18. What an entrancing story with a surprise ending. My son was gifted on the string bass but without the passion which he knew would doom him. My daughter had passion without the gift on the violin. It is a rare musician who gets both. Truly enjoyed this story.

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    1. Thank you Jacqui – unfortunately I lacked both!

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  19. As the sister in law of a developmentally disabled man , I appreciated that ending so much. It was perfect.

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    1. Thank you Alana, that means a lot 🙂

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  20. Your musical knowledge and description of a concert transported me straight to the concert in Echternach. Lovely story. I think the wheelchair will draw extra attention to her and she will eventually realise her dream once she gets over her angst.
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    1. Here’s hoping. She certainly has the determination to make it.

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  21. Oh what an unexpected change of tone. You did promise it, yet still you managed to surprise us. You continue to keep us on our toes, both as readers and writers. Lovely 🙂

    A-Zing this year at:
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    1. Thank you Debs, glad you liked the change 🙂

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  22. I really liked this one, a nice uplifting piece to read 🙂

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    1. Thank you Kate, I needed at least a couple of uplifting stories 🙂

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  23. Bravo Iain, very well crafted with a touching twist at the end. Tricky subject to do justice to and the ending was solid.

    Here’s to the next letter of the challenge.

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    1. Thank you Gary – onwards, it’s flying by so far!

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      1. I trust that is not a case of “Famous last words.” You are right though, so far things are running smoothly here too. Tricky letters ahead mind!

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  24. An inspiring read. Music opens a parallel world for our soul and I could see her determination and pride through your words.

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    1. Thank you so much, much appreciated.

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  25. I am enjoying learning about each place through your narratives!

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    1. Thank you Sarah, hope you keep enjoying 🙂

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  26. What a lovely, unexpected twist! Still having fun with the global tour, it’s the most economical way to travel!

    @IsaLeeWolf
    A Bit to Read

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    1. Haha, yes, doesn’t cost a penny 😉

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  27. Uplifting ending. You’re quite the writer sir.

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    1. Too kind, thank you.

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  28. OH, wow! I love the wheelchair detail. Wonderful. And I just love, love, love Brahms. One of my favorites.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  29. This is beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes.

    Jayden R. Vincente
    Erotic Fiction Writer

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    1. Aw, thank you Jayden, so nice to hear it brought such a reaction.

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  30. Iain! This was full and wonderful. I didn’t want to miss a word. Great story!

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    1. Thank you Jennie, always appreciated.

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain.

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  31. I enjoyed reading this so much, I didn’t want it to be over. Eleonore’s determination at the end is inspiring. She’s not going to let go of what she loves just because she doesn’t fit the mold of what society thinks a musician should look like. I feel the ending you chose can bring hope to a lot of people.

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    1. Thank you so much for a wonderful comment, I’m so pleased you liked it and the message of hope 🙂

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  32. Anupama K. Mazumder Avatar
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    I was initially attracted by the colourful image, but was hooked on by the story. Wow.
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    1. Thank you, so glad you liked it.

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  33. Didn’t see that twist coming. That was clever, Iain. And hope Eleonore lives her dream. Disability is nothing in the face of determination!

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  34. This was a different story from the everyday A to Z take. I like a happy story

    Tongue Twister for F

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    1. Thank you, nice to share a happy ending 🙂

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  35. If music be the food for love play on. Love her determination, despite the odds. Thats the way to be. This struck a chord in more ways than one.

    Natasha
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    1. Thank you Natasha, so pleased it meant something to you 🙂

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  36. Absolutely fantastic! I didnt’ see coming that last twinst. It worked beautifully.
    And I think it’s true. How do we measure our extraordinariness?

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    1. Excellent, I’m glad the ending surprised you as it was supposed to! Heading over to catch up on your latest entries soon 🙂

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  37. Such a lovely story – so poignant and full of strength and beautifully crafted as well. Bravo.
    Tasha
    Tasha’s Thinkings – Movie Monsters

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    1. So kind, a lovely comment to receive, thank you.

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  38. This was just engrossing. Your narration drew me into the tale so much that the twist at the end took me by surprise. And I agree. If music has helped her to live so far, it will take her to that stage she wishes for. I honestly hope so. 🙂

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    1. Thank you, so pleased that the ending seems to be having the effect I wanted it to. 🙂

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  39. What a great story and did not see that coming. You truly feel for the girl and music is so important to everyone in the world. Every person, tribe, town, country etc… listens to music

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    1. Thank you Brigit. You are right, music is the universal language we all share. Glad you liked it 🙂

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  40. Beautiful and uplifting story to read. Great job.

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    1. Thank you so much, glad you liked it.

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  41. The story was in effect a melody I must say! Perfect notes there. Music indeed is the best therapy and the surest friend to depend on to take you through the struggles of life!

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  42. What a captivating story, so uplifting ❤

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    1. Thank you Erika 🙂

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  43. Was able to watch Anne-Sophie Mutter twice, and it was magic. As somebody who lives with disabilities, I found the end of the story very touching.

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    1. Thank you Viola, that means a lot.

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  44. You do a great ending. I read this earlier today, and had to come back for a second read 🙂

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    1. Thank you, that’s quite a compliment! 🙂

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  45. I loved this! Reminded me so much of a little girl I know about, whose name also starts with E, her name is Ella. 🙂

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    1. Ah, that’s sweet, I’m sure she is a star too 🙂

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  46. Totally uplifting Iain.

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  47. What a great story with a surprise end, well done!
    How do you come up with those ideas?
    Looks like we complement each other: your stories take places in locations I don’t cover because I have never been!
    Have a great weekend!

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    1. Thank you. For these posts I picked the locations then a little research into them – with this one it was discovering they held an annual music festival that was the key. Glad you liked it – it’s good we don’t go to the same places, such a big world to cover. Have a great weekend and see you for more on Monday 🙂

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  48. Another great post, thanks for sharing.

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  49. Great twist and additional layer at the end to an otherwise great story.

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    1. Thank you, glad you liked the twist.

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