IAIN KELLY

BY THE CROSSING

He sits and paints.

I look around the room. There are hundreds of paintings. They all show the same bridge.

Sometimes in sunshine, sometimes in rain, sometimes covered in snow. Sometimes the water underneath runs high, other times the level is low. In some the colours are bright green and blue, others are grey and dull.

Outside the cottage window the bridge can be seen. Today it is bathed in sunlight, the water a clear copper, the wild grass and flowers swaying in a gentle breeze.

Why does he paint the same crossing over and over again? Local legend says that before the bridge was built he lived happily with his true love, cut off from the rest of the world.

Then the bridge brought the outside world onto his doorstep, including the man who stole his love away from him.

And so now he sits and paints the bridge.

Perhaps he prays that one day she will return to him by that same crossing.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to theΒ Thursday Photo Prompt – CrossingΒ curated over atΒ Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

30 responses to “BY THE CROSSING”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    A thoughtful piece Iain.

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  2. notestowomen Avatar

    Beautiful story. I hope she returns to him someday soon.

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  3. joyroses13 Avatar

    Oh I love the sentimental feelings of this story. Great job!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Joy πŸ™‚

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  4. violaetcetera Avatar
    violaetcetera

    Very interesting thought. Bridges are mostly portrayed as something positive. Maybe this is not always the case.

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  5. willowdot21 Avatar

    A sad but beautiful story Ian πŸ’œ

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  6. Michael Avatar

    Sad tale Iain, but if one doesn’t have hope what else is there?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  7. Ashwini Nawathe Avatar

    Beautiful it is πŸ™‚

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  8. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    So sad and full of longing. I think he needs to stop painting the bridge and perhaps cross it to search for his love?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That would be a brave move. Thanks Sarah Ann

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  9. TanGental Avatar

    You old romantic

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Every now and then πŸ™‚

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  10. faithfullyyours2017 Avatar

    Luvly one iain!!! πŸ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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  11. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    It is amazing that bridges which should bring people closer together are also the means for them to move on.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Frank, they do provide a good opportunity for stories to be written!

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  12. Sue Vincent Avatar

    I’m holding on to the hopein this piece, Iain πŸ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sue, me too πŸ™‚

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  13. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    An interesting tale. Perhaps he is trying to recreate a memory or the result of his past situation. Perhaps every time he paints it, he imagines his love turning away from the other man, and back to him. It’s an idealization and a wish.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wonder if he paints her into any of the pictures. Good idea that Mandi.

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      1. mandibelle16 Avatar
        mandibelle16

        Yeah, that would be interesting. Thanks πŸ™‚

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