Agnes loves Christmas.

As soon as they finish forking out a small mountain of sweets to the trick-or-treaters at Halloween, Agnes starts her Christmas build-up.

It starts small. A few ‘extra’ items in the supermarket shop: a decoration here; a little snack food there. Then wrapping paper, cards, presents.

Before November is out, Archie is sent to the loft to fetch the decorations.

The tree and lights will go up on the first of December, but they must have snow to accompany them. This year, there’s a problem.

‘It’s global warming,’ Agnes huffs, ‘it ruins everything.’

So here Archie is, spraying his front lawn with fake snow, while the neighbours look on with glee at his travails.

Agnes comes downstairs the next morning to find Archie still sitting at the breakfast table.

‘Why haven’t you left for work?’ she asks, concern for her quiet day of Christmas decorating growing.

‘Can’t,’ says Archie. ‘Car’s snowed in.’

And he takes a long sip from his morning coffee and settles down by the warm fire.

Copyright Yinglan

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in around 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge hosts Priceless Joy and Joe. For more information visit HERE.

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29 responses to “FIRST SNOW”

  1. Oh I loved this Iain, it was so funny!
    Reminds me of one Christmas Day when we were awake early and there was snow outside. We quickly got dressed and rushed out to make a snowman, scraping snow off the cars to complete. We left ‘Eric’ on the doorstep and went back to bed. When we woke up, the snow had all gone, but Eric stood proud and clean in front of our door. The neighbours thought it was a windup, and nobody believed us that there had in fact been snow on Christmas morning. Eric would still have been there at New Year if it hadn’t rained. Happy memories.

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      • I kind of like seeing them, though always shake my head and tut-tut! December is plenty early enough and my other half would wait till Christmas Eve to put the tree up is he had the choice. As you say, brightens the dismal evenings


  2. Archie is a sharp one. I reckon that he will give you a few more tall tales to tell us.


  3. Archie has found a good reason to stay away from work. Anyway he does most of the things out here. Agnes cannot win all the time.

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