A NEW START

He woke up and opened the curtains. The sunlight dazzled him, as another glorious day began. He opened the window and took in a breath of the fresh air, exhaling exaggeratedly. A new start lay ahead.

He had slept well, the best rest he could remember for a long time. He thought his mind would have been disturbed, but he only felt an overwhelming sense of calmness. There were no dreams or nightmares or visions of her blood-spattered body lying broken at the bottom of the gully. Only now, as he waited for the kettle to boil, did he think back on the previous evening.

They had spent the day walking up the steep tracks along the side of the mountain, gradually ascending to the top in time to catch the sunset as planned. It had been a pleasant day, almost pleasant enough to make him reconsider. In the end though, as they had stood, arm-in-arm on the crest of the peak, he had resolved to go through with it.

As she nattered away inanely, ruining the peaceful moment of beauty, he knew it was time for them to part.

Other walkers and climbers had descended already, not wishing to make the trek down in the encroaching darkness of twilight.

It came easier to him than he had thought. He had no reservations and it was over with one swift shove. She teetered for a moment, her hands clawing, reaching out to grab onto him. He merely stepped out of her reach. The look of terror in her eyes hadn’t caused him to change his mind.

And then she had disappeared over the edge. There had been that piercing scream, followed by a sickening thud. Then nothing but blissful silence.

The doorbell rang at the same moment as the kettle clicked. He frowned, an early morning delivery perhaps. He walked to the door and opened it.

‘Mr. Davis?’

He nodded. Panic gripped his heart, but he maintained his calm exterior.

‘Police, sir. A few questions, if you don’t mind.’

‘Certainly, officer. About what? My wife is still asleep in the bedroom.’ A polite smile, appearance unruffled.

‘Well, sir, turns out your mistress is tougher than you realised.’


new-day
Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt – New curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

66 responses to “A NEW START”

  1. Joy Ogbugoh. Avatar
    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Joy 🙂

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  2. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Brilliant. Very taut. I loved the ending too.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neel, much appreciated

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  3. Hélène - Willow Poetry Avatar
    Hélène – Willow Poetry

    Oh, oh, caught! Good story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Helene 🙂

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  4. tidalscribe Avatar

    Brilliant, a double surprise!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad it surprised you 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, a spot of bother

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  5. willowdot21 Avatar

    Great sting in the tail Iain , loved it! 🤭💜

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  6. joanne the geek Avatar

    Brilliant ending!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Joanne 🙂

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  7. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    This mistress one tough cookie. They man could sleep peacefully one night thinking his problem is done and dusted. Now he has bigger problems to deal with. Nice end.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Abhijit

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  8. jenanita01 Avatar

    Brilliant tale for Valentines Day!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, I’m all romantic! 😉 Thanks for the reblog

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  9. Ritu Avatar

    Great twist☺️

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Ritu 🙂

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  10. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Wow, he’s in trouble in more ways than one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He has a lot of explaining to do, but he will have plenty of time to think about what he has done!

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  11. Kate @ everywhere and nowhere Avatar

    Haha that’s great, love that ending 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Kate 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Di 🙂

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  12. Liz H Avatar

    Final line, plot twist. Awesome!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Liz, glad you liked it 🙂

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  13. TanGental Avatar

    Ha! Very Rebus..

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A compliment I think!

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      1. TanGental Avatar

        I should assume so if I were you!

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  14. Suzanne Avatar
    Suzanne

    You write in a very readable way. I was completely pulled into the story and wondered where on earth it was going. The ending was so unexpected. It lifted the story into unexpected territory. I like the way you finished it in such an open-ended way so that reader can supply the ending they choose.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Suzanne, much appreciated 🙂

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  15. notestowomen Avatar

    He’s got some explaining to do, for sure. Great plot twist, Iain.

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  16. Sadje Avatar

    A nice twist. He deserved to be caught.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He certainly did.

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  17. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Ha! Loved the ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  18. Anjana Avatar

    Wow Iain! What a roller coaster ride it was! Great take on the prompt. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Anjana

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  19. Jennie Avatar

    Wow! Well done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome. 🙂

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  20. freiedenkerin Avatar

    Uuuups! What a surprise! 🙂 Well done!

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  21. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    I enjoyed the ride you took me on. A contented man who had a refreshing nights sleep turns out to be a soulless murderer. Love the surprise ending. His “new start” has a whole new meaning.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      His wife may enjoy the new start too! 🙂

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  22. Michele Jones Avatar

    Great ending. He never saw that coming.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michele

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  23. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Uh oh.. Beautiful twist Iain….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Violet

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  24. Susi Bocks Avatar

    Nice! Glad to see he won’t get away with it. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  25. Hélène - Willow Poetry Avatar
    Hélène – Willow Poetry

    Absolutely beautiful. That mistress sure knows how to ruin a guy.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – I think he will find little sympathy 🙂

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  26. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Almsot instant Karma… nice 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sue 😉

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  27. joyroses13 Avatar

    Ahh! Now this ending made me smile! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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