IAIN KELLY

THEIR TRANQUIL PLACE

Their own quiet spot: the water brown from the muddy bed; the beach a mixture of sand and silt; the tree that grew out horizontally from the water’s edge before curving up towards the heavens.

It was here they had first stolen away together, away from the group of friends hanging around the park in the village. That first embrace, that first nervous kiss.

It was here that they had kept returning to, unable to keep away from each other, unable to keep their hands off each other, unable to stop the desire to be together: to kiss; to feel; to eventually, naturally, blissfully consummate their love for each other.

Here was their tranquillity, their escape, where they could be themselves, hidden from the prying eyes of the world.

They they barely spoke to each other at school to avoid rumour, and in amongst a group of friends their only contact was furtive and stolen glances.

Until one day they had been found, lying together in their quiet spot, mid-embrace, mid-kiss, lying on the silty-sand next to the muddy brown water. They heard the laughs, the shouts, the whistles, the anger as they separated and fled.

It was from the tree that grew out from the water’s edge before curving towards the heavens that they were found hanging. Their, cold, dead hands still entwined.

The two boys who could only find their tranquillity by leaving the cruel, unaccepting world behind.


tranquil
Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt – Tranquil curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

45 responses to “THEIR TRANQUIL PLACE”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    This is so sad Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        I was checking our purple for my post, and didn’t realise it can be associated with the gay community. Makes your post more poignant.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        One of those things that adds a little if you know it, but doesn’t lose anything if you don’t.

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      3. pensitivity101 Avatar

        It was very subtle when I realised.

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  2. trentpmcd Avatar

    May there be a time when two lovers never have to worry what will happen when they are caught.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Here, here. Thanks Trent

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  3. joyroses13 Avatar

    Oh man! I had a feeling something was coming as I tried to not let myself get too swept away in the happiness at the beginning but didn’t see that coming. So very sad, once again your fiction becomes too real. Very well written!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Joy, this one seems to have got a lot of reaction

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        You are very welcome, it is a such a relevant topic in today’s times.

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  4. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Reblogged this on Sue Vincent's Daily Echo and commented:
    First in this week…

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  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    It was too beautiful for there not to be tragedy at the end. Love should never have to hide.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  6. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    The place certainly offers peace and privacy for intimate moments. Nicely told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Abhijit

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  7. magickmermaid Avatar

    Beautifully written!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  8. What Words May Come Avatar

    Ahhh… Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Kevin

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  9. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    So tragic, Iain. A beautiful piece.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta

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  10. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Another Iain twisted ending. Very well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Janet.

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  11. joylennick Avatar

    So utterly sad and unnecessary, and so effectively expressed.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Joy

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  12. BarbCT Avatar

    😭😭😭😭😭😭 Beautifully written, Ian!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Barb

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  13. Jewel Ingalls Avatar

    Absolutely brilliant.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Jewel

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  14. Create Space Avatar

    Very captivating. Unexpected twist and so sad!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad you liked it, thank you

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  15. Fandango Avatar

    A brilliantly told and tragically sad tale.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, much appreciated.

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  16. Michele Jones Avatar

    How sad. At least they had that special place for a while. Perhaps some day all will be accepted as they are.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Here’s hoping. Thanks Michele

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  17. Ennle Madresan Avatar
    Ennle Madresan

    Agonizingly tragic.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Ennle

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      1. Ennle Madresan Avatar
        Ennle Madresan

        Most welcome.

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  18. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Uh oh.. I’m beginning to think we killed them all this week! Excellent write iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Violet

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  19. Jennie Avatar
    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain.

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  20. athling2001 Avatar

    Quite a shock there at the end. How sad.

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