IAIN KELLY

STRAWBERRY SWING

She’d had the idea while watching a gardening magazine show – apparently plants had emotions and responded to music and words.

Perfect. She stripped down the old grand piano, rejigged the strings and hammers, filled it with grade-A compost and planted the seeds.

She soon had a playlist – Rachmaninoff and Chopin went down best from the Classics, and of her modern repertoire The Beatles, particularly ‘Strawberry Fields Forever’.

Things wilted over anything post-2000 and Wagner.

After a rendition of ‘Strawberry Cake’ by Johnny Cash they were ready to be picked.

Dessert that night was the sweetest Strawberry American Pie she’d ever tasted.


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Copyright Anshu Bhojnagarwala

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

116 responses to “STRAWBERRY SWING”

  1. jennifermacaire Avatar

    clever and fun!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennifer

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    I wondered about doing a plants and music thing too. I’m glad I didn’t. Yours was better

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neil, it seemed to be the way to go for me

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  3. Sandra Avatar

    They might well wilt over anything past 2000. Such an innovative take. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra

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  4. Abhijit Ray Avatar

    Strawberries growing in a piano has to be the sweetest. No wonder dessert was tasty that nigh.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Abhijit 🙂

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  5. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Yum!!!! Pass the whipped cream!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Now you’re talking 😉

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  6. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    I enjoyed this, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta 🙂

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  7. joyroses13 Avatar

    LOL! A fun. sweet story to start the day with!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You’re very welcome 🙂

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Well played fun. So bye-bye, Miss American Pie…;) Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rochelle 🙂

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  9. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    I use Wagner to kill aphids. “What makes your roses so beautiful?” the neighbors shout over the din.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He has his uses after all!

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  10. trentpmcd Avatar

    I was going to say something about your “wilted over anything post-2000” comment and Coldplay, but then I saw your title for the story and decided “never mind”….

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’ll be honest, I was struggling for songs that included ‘strawberry’ in the title!

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      1. trentpmcd Avatar

        The Beatles was the obvious, but after that, I’m sure it wasn’t easy!

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  11. granonine Avatar

    I love the way you wove the music into the story. Nice one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Linda

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  12. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Interestingly, raspberries thrive when listening to Wagner and that Sheeran chappy.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Don’t they end up tasting a little bitter?! Thanks Keith 🙂

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      1. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

        Quite probably!

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  13. Susan A Eames Avatar

    Nice one – very clever!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Susan

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  14. Tannille Avatar

    Grand promotion for one of those niche cafes perhaps?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh yes, it would get the art-y folk in for sure! 🙂

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  15. ceayr Avatar

    I started to laugh as you just threw song titles at this.
    A big raspberry from me!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It was strawberry or banana, there are not a lot of fruit based songs to choose from!

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  16. pensitivity101 Avatar

    nice……. I can almost taste those strawberries!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Di, they taste better when you’ve put the effort in yourself!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        I know! We didn’t have much success with strawberries, but tomatoes, onions and green beans, YUM! However, we did have a go and I had a beautiful big strawberry just right for picking, and the damn blackbird got there before me!

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  17. Liz Young Avatar

    A fun take on the prompt – and that pie sounds delicious.

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  18. M K Zebra Avatar

    My final year project at university was not totally dissimilar to this, but with less impressive results. 😉

    Do you think you could grow some good chilli plants if you played the Spice Girls?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, love it! 😉

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  19. larry trasciatti Avatar

    So nice..I’ve always believed that music can make a real difference for plants

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      One of those things that’s always rumoured to be true.

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  20. draliman Avatar

    A lot of 2000-era music will wilt me too… nice one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, yes, I have to admit to being a bit lost with most modern music!

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  21. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    Deliciously done! 🙂

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  22. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    American pie the day the music died… but it sounds delicious

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Tastes not too bad too 😉

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  23. plaridel Avatar

    it looks like it was all worth the effort. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Rewarded for all that effort 😉

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  24. Alice Audrey Avatar
    Alice Audrey

    I’m visualizing trying to play a piano with soil in it’s strings.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It may need a lot of tuning

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  25. pennygadd51 Avatar

    I’m so glad you saw a light-hearted story in the prompt. I found the image of the desecrated grand piano very distressing! You wrote your story with a lovely, delicate touch.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny, glad you enjoyed

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  26. Anna Rymer Avatar

    You achieve so much with 100 words! Wonderfully told and a lovely idea, a step up from organic! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Anna 🙂

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  27. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Funny stuff Iain, animal like music so why not plants? Love this one!

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  28. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Delightfully whimsical.

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  29. Jackie Avatar
    Jackie

    “Things wilted over anything post-2000 and Wagner.” I bet they wouldn’t mind The Decemberists or The Bare Naked ladies. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Well, each plant has their own tastes 😉

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      1. Jackie Avatar
        Jackie

        🙂

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  30. Dale Avatar

    What a fabulously original take, Iain!
    Love it! How about some Strawberry Wine (Pat Benatar) 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The perfect accompaniment!

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      1. Dale Avatar

        😁

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  31. ForgivingConnects Avatar

    This is great, Iain. So creative! Funny, because I just finished practicing the piano—I’ve been taking lessons for 1 1/2 years. 🙂
    Lots of blessings.
    Debbie

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I hope you succeed, I failed unfortunately, a long time ago!

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  32. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    I want it toooooo 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not sure she is sharing 🙂

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  33. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    I had a botany professor who swore that music affected his house plants, and I wouldn’t dismiss it. Plants can sense all kinds of vibrations, and other things that aren’t obvious at first sight. They don’t have a nervous system like we do, but they can transport information, mostly chemically and mechanically. They even can communicate with each other. Great story, I love it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much – I shall have to try singing to my plants more!

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  34. 4963andypop Avatar

    Enjoyed it! Id prefer strawberry shortcake with whipped cream, myself!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Well, if you grow your own you’re welcome to use them as you wish 😉

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  35. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    I must try this, as I love strawberries, but I felt for Wagner,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The blackberries love him 😉

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  36. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Very clever… Sounds like those strawberries are filled with music! I’m allergic to strawberries, but I think I would risk it for these ones

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      *other fruits grown in pianos are available 😉

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  37. Russell Avatar

    And now I’ll have to go pick up some strawberries! Thanks Iain.
    (though they surely won’t be as good as your piano strawberries)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They’re healthy too, so a treat all round 🙂

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  38. Danny James Avatar

    Now I’ve got an ear worm.

    Let me take you down
    ‘Cause I’m going to Strawberry Fields
    Nothing is real
    And nothing to get hung about
    Strawberry Fields forever

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not a bad one to have

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  39. Anshu Bhojnagarwala Avatar

    That’s brilliant Iain… Piano to music and strawberry to dessert… Wow

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Anshu

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  40. Woman walking Max Avatar

    A witty and entertaining story – made me smile – especially the plants wilting over Wagner !

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  41. patrickprinsloo Avatar

    I love this, especially the [post 2000 comment.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Patrick

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  42. JoHawkTheWriter Avatar

    Tasty story Iain

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  43. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    You did a really good job of blending the music and botany themes. I had a start about using an old piano as a garden bed, but it wilted on the vine.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I just about managed to make it work I think!

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  44. James McEwan Avatar

    Yes this reminds me how music is food for our souls.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It certainly can help to sustain us.

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  45. Jo- Creative PTSD Gal Avatar

    I’ve heard music/talking to plants helps growth but to experiment with different tunes is an awesome take on this story. Great job.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jo 🙂

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  46. Lynn Love Avatar

    As someone who is constantly talking to her plants, I think she is onto something here. Lovely piece of Writing Iain, and I really want to taste that strawberry pie recipe

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn, ever thought of playing some music to them as well? 🙂

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        Well, I might. Thing is, the only classical music I own is in the minor key – Gorecki’s Symphony of Sorrowful Songs, Vaughan William’s Fantasia on a theme by Thomas Tallis, Barber’s Adagio for Strings. Look them up – all depressing! Would some Cure work? Siouxsie and the Banshees, New Model Army, The Sisters of Mercy … 🙂

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  47. Shirley McCann Avatar

    Can’t beat good music. Loved the references.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Shirley

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  48. StuHN Avatar

    So, bye by ms. piano driven pie
    drive those berries to my tummy
    taste so good you’d almost fly

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Wonderful, thanks for joining in!

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  49. Margaret Avatar

    I’ve heard the theory about plants liking classical music. Also that if you talk to them they grow better. Someone told me that’s because we’re breathing carbon dioxide over them. I think your idea sounds much better. It’s a fun story too.

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