IAIN KELLY

FRUIT OF THE LOOM

His big hands would never be able to string up the intricate spindles, though she welcomed the attention of those capable hands on other occasions.

His strong legs could push the treadles faster but he adored the shapely toned thighs and calves constantly pedalling the loom gave her.

They each had their field of expertise: hers was driving the loom; his was driving the horse and plough.

His rough power, her skilful intricacy – when they came together they enhanced and complemented each other.

And now she felt that combined life in her belly: the fruit of their loom.


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Copyright Sandra Crook

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

92 responses to “FRUIT OF THE LOOM”

  1. Tannille Avatar

    Great take on the prompt Iain!

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    lovely relationship

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    The fruit of the loom and the fruit of her womb. Love the descriptions. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rochelle

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  4. Varad Avatar

    Loved the imagery here, Iain. A fruitful relationship indeed.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Varad 🙂

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  5. Lady Coloresque Avatar

    Adorable. I loved the story you fabricated.

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  6. trentpmcd Avatar

    Nice imagery. Complimentary threads coming together…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Trent

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  7. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Somewhat erotic at that.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, how much so is up to the reader. It’s there if you want it!

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      1. pennygadd51 Avatar

        There in plenty if you look for it!

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  8. pennygadd51 Avatar

    I like the way you characterise the two strands of husband and wife, and have them woven into the tapestry together with their child. And you do this while simultaneously using the loom literally as part of your story. Skilful writing!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Penny, such a nice comment! 🙂

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  9. notestowomen Avatar

    I really enjoyed reading this Iain. You skillfully weaved a beautiful love story between a husband and wife and how they worked well together and complimented each other and now they are about to welcome a new addition to the family. Well done!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much, very kind 🙂

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  10. Rachel Bjerke Avatar

    What a sweet story, nicely done 🙂

    -Rachel

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Rachel 🙂

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    An idyllic relationship. If only…!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, if only it could be that straightforward! 🙂

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  12. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Ever so clever, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Violet 🙂

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  13. granonine Avatar

    Iain, you really nailed it with this one. Beautifully done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Linda, much appreciated.

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  14. StuHN Avatar

    Lovely piece, Iain. I have to admit, the last line made me go “aww” and chuckle at the same time. Not sure it’s a global brand, but Fruit of the Loom make underwear here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep a global brand, although I think they make all kinds of clothing, or at least used to, but the little joke is intentional 😉

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  15. plaridel Avatar

    it’s poetry in motion. your words conjure cleverly in my mind what was happening.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  16. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This feels like the beginning of a great family tale.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Bjorn

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  17. BarbCT Avatar

    Wonderful piece of artistry. You are such a skillful artist with words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much, such a generous comment!

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  18. Dale Avatar

    So, next book will have some erotica in it, eh, Iain?
    This was delicious.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wasn’t planning to, but apparently there is a market for it…! 😉

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      1. Dale Avatar

        Oh honey… lemme tell you… 😉

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  19. msjadeli Avatar

    A very balanced and entertaining story, Iain.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You are welcome.

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  20. ceayr Avatar

    This soppy stuff is becoming a habit, Iain!
    But expertly done

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I must be getting softer in my old age!

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  21. JoHawkTheWriter Avatar

    Nice play on words Iain.

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  22. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    That’s a sweet story ending with a fun play on words. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  23. Alice Audrey Avatar
    Alice Audrey

    It has the great intimacy of a young marriage.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Those were the days…lol

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  24. Abhijit Ray Avatar

    A couple made for each other. Nicely done.

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  25. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Awww, so romantic.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Who doesn’t like a bit of romance?! 🙂

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  26. draliman Avatar

    Lovely story, a couple made for each other.
    And your “fruit of the loom” was less violent than my guy’s 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, yep, I went for a bit of romance this week!

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  27. Sandra Avatar

    Beautifully done, Ian. And I loved the title.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sandra

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  28. Woman walking Max Avatar

    A beautifully told story, I really like the harmony of it. Perfect ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  29. subroto Avatar

    I was waiting to see who would use that title 🙂
    Lovely story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Never look a gift horse in the mouth, that’s my motto 🙂

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  30. Gisselle Hernandez Avatar
    Gisselle Hernandez

    Such a nice scene you painted here, the reader could absorb herself into it. Lovely!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Gisselle 🙂

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  31. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh this was lovely. A clever story well crafted. And a nice ending

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Laurie

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  32. tedstrutz Avatar

    Great last line!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Ted!

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  33. 4963andypop Avatar

    Nice title and interpretion of what it means. Their attraction to one anotherweaves through this piece.

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  34. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    This is so good and I loved that little play on words at the end.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sascha, glad you liked it 🙂

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  35. Shirley McCann Avatar

    A sexy, perhaps erotic love story. Nice job.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Perhaps, just a hint 😉

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  36. Russell Gayer Avatar

    You old romantic you. 🙂
    Perhaps you should read the story entitled, “How to Write How To Books” in my first book. The narrator discusses a tale called “The Wrath of Grapes.” It’s about a Fruit of the Loom (underwear) character gone bad.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like the sound of that! 🙂

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  37. talesfromthemindofkristian Avatar

    I like that take on the picture. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. talesfromthemindofkristian Avatar

        You’re welcome, Iain. All the best. 🙂

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  38. Bernadette Braganza Avatar
    Bernadette Braganza

    A lovely pair. Just like a needle and thread.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  39. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    Erotic in an earthy way. The writing itself was captivating.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Fatima

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  40. lisarey1990 Avatar

    This is so romantic and the way the plot all ties together is very well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Lisa

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  41. Margaret Avatar

    Very good. Fantastic last line. Clever, clever.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Margaret

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  42. Lynn Love Avatar

    Lovely, sensual language and imagery, Iain. Who knew ploughing and weaving could be sexy? Great writing

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thanks Lynn!

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  43. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    Clever, romantic and sensual. What a wonderful piece of writing, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  44. magarisa Avatar

    A well-structured, descriptive piece. Great build-up to thr ending!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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