IAIN KELLY

DESTINATION

‘Where does it lead?’

‘Wherever you are supposed to be.’

Kevin peered down the road to where it disappeared, enveloped in a thick cloud of mist.

‘That’s not very reassuring,’ he said.

‘That depends. Where do you think you should be?’

Kevin thought back. He had done some good things, he had done some things he regretted. Who hasn’t? He looked at the ethereal young woman who was beckoning him on.

‘You’re sure about this? This isn’t what death looks like, is it?’ The woman certainly didn’t look like Death, the skeletal figure in a black robe depicted throughout history. She was young and quite attractive, with flowing dark locks and dreamy hazelnut eyes. Perhaps that was part of the trap, Kevin mused.

‘Will you walk with me?’ she asked, holding a pale hand out towards him.

‘I’m not convinced,’ Kevin resisted. ‘Perhaps if you could be more specific as to what lies beyond this misty tunnel of trees.’

‘It is a path no one has walked before,’ she answered mysteriously.

Her voice was soft and tempting, but Kevin wasn’t born yesterday. ‘I think I’ll leave it, thanks,’ he said, turning his back on her. ‘The lads are expecting me down the pub.’

Kevin sauntered away, not risking a look back.

Esmeralda watched him go. ‘You can come out now,’ she called.

Death peered round the side of the tree which had concealed him. ‘Thanks for trying.’

‘He’s a stubborn one. What will you try next?’

Death’s black cloak shrugged, ‘I’ll think of something. I was sure he wouldn’t be able to resist you.’

***

In the hospital the nurse ran out Kevin’s room, calling for a doctor urgently, ‘He’s awake, Doctor, after all these months in a coma.’


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to theΒ #writephoto Prompt – DestinationΒ curated over atΒ Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.

38 responses to “DESTINATION”

  1. willowdot21 Avatar

    This is brilliant, I admire Kevin , I like to think I would be resistant too. I never give in too easily. Great story! Death thou shall not claim kev ……. Yet. πŸ’œπŸ˜

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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  2. magickmermaid Avatar

    Kevin wins! Excellent story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  3. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Nice twist at the end there, Iain.

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  4. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Great one! Stay strong Kevin!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Janet πŸ™‚

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  5. ForgivingConnects Avatar

    Wow, this one really surprised me. Nice ending Iain! πŸ™‚ . Thanks – I love reading your stories.
    Blessings,
    Debbie

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Debbie, glad I was able to give you a surprise πŸ™‚

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  6. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Another good take on a prompt Iain. Great ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di πŸ˜‰

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  7. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    Very good ending, Iain. A nice twist.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta πŸ™‚

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  8. trentpmcd Avatar

    Looks like someone found a way to cheat death…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I wish he would share his secret

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      1. trentpmcd Avatar

        Around here they just say, “He’s too ornery to die.” πŸ˜‰

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  9. Jen Goldie Avatar

    Good story lain! Nice twists and turns all the way through! Kept me reading! Thanks πŸ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jen, most kind πŸ™‚

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      1. Jen Goldie Avatar

        You’re very welcome lain πŸ™‚

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  10. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Ha! It seems that Death has finally met an opponent that is wilier than it πŸ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Good ole Kevin πŸ™‚

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  11. Fandango Avatar

    Ah there’s nothing like cheating death. At least this time. Good for Kevin!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks πŸ™‚

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  12. Chris Hewitt Avatar

    Nicely written, made me laugh. Not sure which bit the most, the expected down the pub or the image of death hiding behind the tree.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Chris πŸ™‚

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  13. kzmcb Avatar

    This is well written and the ending unexpected.

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  14. Sneha Ganesh Avatar

    Woahhhh!! Excellent story

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  15. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Ohhh I didn’t see that one coming. Kevin is a wise soul!

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  16. Jennie Avatar

    Really good, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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