IAIN KELLY

THE CONTRACT

Sitting in the cafe with a view of the Houses of Parliament, he double-checked the decoded message.

A simple cipher using ‘The Ambassadors’ by Henry James – the numbers referred to the pages of the book, the first letter of the third line on each page combined to give the location.

He had it right. ‘Marx Highgate’: the cemetery across the city, the grave of Karl Marx. His money would be there.

He slipped on the glasses, part of his disguise, and prepared to fulfil Mrs. Newsome’s request.

It was not his job to ask why, he just had a contract to fulfil.


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Copyright CE Ayr

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

71 responses to “THE CONTRACT”

  1. Susan A Eames Avatar

    Clever take on the photo prompt – nicely chilling.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Susan

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    A contract is a contract. This sounds like the beginning of a story of intrigue. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  3. ceayr Avatar

    Interesting how so many of us saw this innocent shot as the basis for intrigue.
    Nicely worked tale, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE

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  4. neilmacdon Avatar

    Congratulations on using the book and the note

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not forgetting the glasses!

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  5. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Another day, another killing! Good one.

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  6. Sandra Avatar

    A cool character. Whatever he has to do will, I think, be executed dispassionately.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Undoubtedly. Thanks Sandra

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  7. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    I enjoyed your take, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta

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  8. Tannille Avatar

    Could be to beginning to something big. Great use of the prompt.

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  9. granonine Avatar

    Perfect prompt for a tension-filled, scary mystery/spy story. Well done, Iain 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Linda

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  10. magickmermaid Avatar

    It does sound like the beginning of an exciting story!

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  11. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Ooh, mystery and intrigue. This feels like a teaser that begs to be expanded.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Maybe one day 🙂

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  12. msjadeli Avatar

    I imagine hitmen are just like this.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  13. Nan Falkner Avatar

    I wonder how anyone could become a criminal and be able to kill others for money. This goes against every single thing we learned in kindergarten! Scary story and I’m sure this is spot on for the true actions of a hit man. Yikes!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Nan, it certainly seems an odd line of work to end up in!

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  14. M K Zebra Avatar

    Good use of the photo, you did your research!

    Hope his money wasn’t taken by any vandals.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – that’s true, not the best idea to leave it lying around like that! 🙂

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  15. Abhijit Ray Avatar

    Great job of deciphering the code. Real spy thriller feeling.

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  16. Liz Young Avatar

    What kind of contract, I wonder? Nothing legal, if he’s being paid this way!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Definitely dodgy! 🙂

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  17. draliman Avatar

    People who “fulfil contracts” without asking why always give me the chills…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Anything where it’s better not to ask any questions should always start alarm bells ringing!

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  18. Woman walking Max Avatar

    A clever mini spy story, I want to know, what happens next ?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s for another time! Thank you 🙂

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  19. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    It’s a brave person that mucks about in that cemetery! Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Certainly this week it is, there seems to be a lot of assassins and spies hanging around!

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  20. Dale Avatar

    You have to be cold-hearted to do this type of job… Shudder!
    Well done, sir!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Certainly not for those with a conscience. Thanks Dale

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  21. plaridel Avatar

    now, that’s he’s a real professional for you. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Some people are just meant for certain career choices 🙂

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  22. Russell Avatar

    You’ve got to respect a professional. Nice read Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Russell

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  23. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Fabulous spy snippet. What is the money for I wonder. You’ve got me hooked.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neel

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  24. James McEwan Avatar

    I like how you used the period of the book, and added the mystery.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you James

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  25. Kelley Farrell Avatar

    Well done! I don’t suppose he ever asks why when fulfilling a contract

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s better not to in his line of work 😉

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  26. subroto Avatar

    Nicely decoded. I am promoting you to the rank of master code breaker.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      In reality of course, I’m terrible at breaking codes and riddles!

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  27. patriciaruthsusan Avatar

    For the sake of his contract, I hope the money is still there. Eyes seem to be everywhere these days and I seem to remember reading Highgate Cemetery is in a rather rough part of the city. A good, well-written story, Iain. 🙂 — Suzanne

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Suzanne. I’ve never been, but a rough part of the city would fit my story well.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  28. Girl in Niagara Avatar

    Love your take on it. Suspenseful. Guess I need my glasses, I thought it said Maxx, not Marx.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thank you 🙂

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  29. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    Perhaps he might find that the target is someone who will change his life? loved the way you used secret codes in the story. I wanted to, but failed to develop it. Nicely done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  30. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I think he will tempted to take it all for himself… and he will end up with a pianowire round his neck

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A common end in this line of work!

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  31. ForgivingConnects Avatar

    Hi Iain – Lovely. I also wanted to connect to let you know I’ll be taking an extended blogging break. Not sure if and when I’ll be back (you can read more on my latest blog post.) if you’d like to reach me, email is best at weloveyou@forgivingconnects.com. Would be nice to stay in touch.

    Blessings – all the best with your writing,
    Debbie

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      All the best for your NYC adventure Debbie – I hope it gives you everything you are looking for! Do keep in touch – in just over a week my new novel is released and I would love to hear what you think of it. All the best, Iain

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  32. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Great start to a fuller tale. get it written I’m intrigued!

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  33. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    A well-scripted vignette. You left me intrigued.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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