IAIN KELLY

THE PERFECT SPOT

It was her perfect spot. She had to be patient, let the sun come round to the right place so that it shined right through the branches. Then ‘click’, she would snap the picture. The light was always just right, no matter what the conditions. She did it everyday for years. It helped her, calmed her, sheltered her from the chaos of the world.

Then one day the diggers arrived. They tore down the woods. The trees vanished, concrete replaced the forest floor. Buildings sprung up. She stood in the same spot. The sun was hidden behind the new shopping centre. The noise of the world entered her head. She had no protection from it.

On the day the local councillor opened the new centre, she didn’t appear at her perfect spot. No one ever saw her again. No one noticed she was no longer there, just like the trees. She disappeared, along with her perfect spot. The light was extinguished.


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Copyright Sue Vincent

This is a response to the #writephoto Prompt: Light  – curated over at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo. Click on the link to read other stories inspired by the image.


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27 responses to “THE PERFECT SPOT”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Nobody else can understand the emotional dependence built on certain objects, situations or scenarios.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Especially for those who can find the modern hectic world a challenging place. Thanks Reena.

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      1. Reena Saxena Avatar

        I was reading somewhere that objects which are loved and which are ignored exude different energies. Matter is supposed to have a degree of sensitivity.

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  2. Shivangi Avatar

    Oh… so many buildings. People have to strive for even a ray of light! Excellent Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m afraid that this happens in too many places. Thank you.

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      1. Shivangi Avatar

        I know concrete jungle is cropping up mostly everywhere…

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  3. Tina Stewart Brakebill Avatar

    You’ve taken my melancholy mantle for the day! Sad but beautiful.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Tina 🙂

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  4. Girl in Niagara Avatar

    A poignant story Iain. With so much development going on everywhere this is a reality for many people.

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  5. Sue Vincent Avatar

    So sad… but so true of many beautiful places being buried beneath concrete. Especially those places where we are not building from need but for money.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      So many brownfield sites already exist that should be used first, there is no excuse.

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        I agree with you absolutely on that, Iain.

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  6. willowdot21 Avatar

    This is especially true where I live, they are eating up the open fields and green spaces. All we see now is concrete , no colour no life no hope.🌹🌹

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There is always hope, but we need to do better!

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        We certainly do Iain 💜

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  7. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

    Aww, this was so heartbreaking. Unfortunately, this happens all over the place nowadays. 😥

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  8. magickmermaid Avatar

    Sad but true 😦 Perfect spots are being demolished everywhere.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m afraid so. Gradually we seem to be coming round to understanding that we can’t keep on doing it.

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  9. memadtwo Avatar

    This cuts very close to the bone. (K)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Glad that it had an effect on you.

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  10. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar

    Full of emotion. Well done.

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