IAIN KELLY

END TIMES

Christenson fell to his knees, his hands raised to the skies, his face a scream of agony.

‘Show yourself!’ he cried.

Outside the storm tore at the earth. Debris battered against the protective dome. Trees, buildings, animals – all tossed asunder.

Inside the palm trees were still, the climate pleasant. Only the constant howling noise broke through.

How could anyone believe? No one had faith anymore. It was the end of times and He was absent.

‘For our sake, show yourself!’ Christenson beseeched the heavens.

A dark shadow passed over the sky.

Christenson watched in horror as the giant hand reached down and the first panes were crushed.


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Copyright J Hardy Carroll

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.


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67 responses to “END TIMES”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Dark and apocalyptic, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  2. pennygadd51 Avatar

    A dark and vengeful god, with a cynical sense of humour.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like the idea that God would be amused by the struggles of humankind. Thanks Penny

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    A perfect example of “be careful what you ask for.” 😉 Chilling and oddly funny at the same time. Sort of like Slim Pickins riding the bomb like a cowboy on a bucking bronco in “Dr. Strangelove.” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3edi2Wkr5YI

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ah, I love that movie Rochelle 😉

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  4. Michele Jones Avatar

    Suspenseful and sad. And it make you think, be careful what you wish for.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely, I’m sure any God would have a few questions to ask about how we humans have been behaving!

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  5. Tannille Avatar

    Don’t tempt fate. I would love to know more about this giant, this world.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, be careful what you ask for. I don’t believe in a God, but if there is one, surely they can’t be happy with what we’ve been up to!?

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      1. Tannille Avatar

        Yeah the odds aren’t great. I swing to the agonist middle and try to play it safe.

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  6. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Oh man. The dude is doomed. Good pacing here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – maybe it was all just a dream…

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  7. ceayr Avatar

    He might be okay, maybe there’s no giant person attached to the giant hand?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I believe that’s called ‘clutching at straws’ 😉

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  8. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I’m glad I didn’t read this while my pad was being battered by the storm last night!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Pretty wild up here too. No sign of a giant hand though!

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  9. Dale Avatar

    What the hell… If it is raging outside of the dome, be glad you are inside…Why ask for such trouble?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Some people are never happy! 😉

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  10. granonine Avatar

    Sometimes we need to be careful what we ask for. Good one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      We certainly do. Thank you

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  11. msjadeli Avatar

    Sounds like a perfect idea for an episode of The Twilight Zone. Good story, Iain.

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  12. Susi Bocks Avatar

    A bit apocalyptic, Iain. Nicely done! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Just a bit 😉

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      1. Susi Bocks Avatar

        Well, it was good writing. 🙂

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  13. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Which is why we need to build better and stronger domes, to keep gods out. They’ve been messing with us since the beginning of mythology. This is our world. We don’t need illegal immigrants coming down from the heavens.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes (ignoring the fact that we didn’t originally belong inside the domes in the first place, we took them over and kicked out the natives!)

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      1. Nobbinmaug Avatar

        Natives don’t know how to use domes properly.

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  14. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    The hand of god, or perhaps a giant mechanical drone controlled from somewhere in the universe.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Or just a Giant. Thanks Mike

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  15. Russell Avatar

    I suppose we should be careful what we ask for, aye? Great story Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Always! Thanks Russell

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  16. Sandra Avatar

    Well he did ask! This was actually very graphic, and quite unnerving.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra. Unnerved is good 🙂

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  17. draliman Avatar

    I’m not sure that’s exactly what he had in mind 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No, God doesn’t do subtle.

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  18. bearmkwa Avatar
    bearmkwa

    Puts the phrase ‘be careful what you ask for’ to shame. Great one!

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  19. GHLearner Avatar
    GHLearner

    The terror and desperation of the guy are beautifully described. He should better have stayed quiet though. I love the humorous horror of the ending.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I thought it quite amusing too! 😉

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  20. Liz Young Avatar

    Be careful what you pray for.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Or who you pray to. Thanks Liz

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  21. Lynn Love Avatar

    Be careful what you wish for, eh? You managed to evoke the end of the world in very few words – well done Iain. Cracking story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Part of me – even as a non-believer – would quite like something like this to happen at the end 🙂

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        It certainly would fill the places of worship – not for long of course

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  22. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oooooo that giant hand… I so want to know more. Perhaps the little human was complaining too much.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They do like a moan – I wouldn’t be surprised if any God was a bit fed up with them!

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  23. 4963andypop Avatar

    At first glance I mistakenly read: Christendom fell to its knees, which would have been apocalyptic enough. 😊

    I like you retributive God, busy destroying the world, but not too busy to lend a hand to this modern Noah, who I assume is a favorite.

    But you twist the knife with the consequence of God’s answer –it means Christenson is no longer protected from the whirlwind.

    Very Oedipal–consequences for pride–for the impertinence of demanding individual special treatment.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, basically God has had enough of the lot of us. I like your mis-reading, the name was supposed to give that hint.

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  24. James McEwan Avatar

    Be careful what you wish for – the End was inevitable. The dark shadows cast by some gigantic invading monster. Your story strikes fear into the world.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you James

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  25. Woman walking Max Avatar

    Wonderfully dramatic- I love the description of trees, buildings and animals being flung against the dome, I can imagine the man cowering inside. It could be a fire and brimstone sermon about man’s hubris !

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – it would be good if someone could come and have a word with our leaders anyway!

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  26. magarisa Avatar

    Scary! Such vivid writing.

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  27. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Reminds me of Lot’s wife looking back at the destruction of Gomorrah. Maybe it’s worse to be left behind than to burn.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Bjorn

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  28. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Be careful what you ask for.

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  29. subroto Avatar

    Be careful what you ask for. Maybe now is the time to a palm but I am guessing that he is fingered anyway.

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    1. subroto Avatar

      *time to read a palm*

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  30. trishsplace Avatar

    I agree with Laurie Bell – ooooooo! Spooky!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trish

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