IAIN KELLY

WHERE DOES THE TIME GO?

It doesn’t seem that long ago. The place hasn’t changed, but you have. We used to come here as a family and you ran around the cobbled street and dashed in and out of the old shops and took a trip on the old trams and we had lunch in the cafe and watched the aeroplanes outside the window.

You’re older now and so am I. I still visit and sit in the cafe and think of you. When you visit next year I will bring you back here and introduce my grandchildren to the old street that still echoes with your laughter.

Copyright CE Ayr

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above). A surprise this week when I saw this prompt – it’s taken in the Riverside Museum in Glasgow that I regularly visit with my kids. The museum houses the Transport Museum – cars, trams, buses, ships and more. I used to be taken to this museum when I was little by my parents, when it was housed in an old warehouse. Zaha Hadid designed the shiny new building which it moved into around 2010-11. It’s near my work and I run past it most lunchtimes too. We’ve missed visiting this summer thanks to the pandemic, but will one day be back when it reopens. So a little bit of sentimental musing this week, with a little bit of future fiction, and a few photos from some of our visits too.

The exterior of the museum, from a visit in 2016 with my boy.
Noisy siren still a favourite to this day with the twins!
Catching the steam train.
Running along the same street featured in the photo prompt, circa 2017.

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.


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85 responses to “WHERE DOES THE TIME GO?”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    So full of longing, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You can’t get those precious years back. Thanks Neil.

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    I would never have known that was in a museum. Thank you for sharing that. Lovely, wistful story. Time stops for no one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Unfortunately not, and it rushes by so quickly, especially watching kids growing up so fast. Thanks Rochelle.

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  3. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    A story with the feeling of reminiscing Iain, COVID has denied us so much, but fortunately not the ability to write

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  4. pensitivity101 Avatar

    I know what you mean about kids growing up. I don’t have any of my own, just nephews and nieces two and three times removed, but when I think my first nephew is now 53, it makes me feel so old!!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, we’re not getting any younger!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        Tell me about it!!!!!!

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  5. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    I like the tone of this piece. Much more sentimental that your usual, more genuine. Great work.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it as I’m writing a novel in a similar style, so good to get some practice in.

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  6. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Such a poignant piece Iain. Your footnote makes me want to visit the museum, maybe next year when I’ll be up your way again – hopefully!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s worth a visit definitely – though go on a week day when the schools are in so it’s not too busy! 🙂

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  7. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Great story. How cool is that place. Thanks for sharing your photos, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You’re welcome Janet, thanks for reading 🙂

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  8. magickmermaid Avatar

    Beautifully written. So evocative. And your children are so adorable!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – they have their moments! 🙂

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  9. pennygadd51 Avatar

    So that’s where the photo is set! Lovely piece of writing, Iain, nostalgic and philosophical. The photos are good too.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Penny 🙂

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  10. notestowomen Avatar

    Beautiful story, Iain. Nice photos. Hopefully, you will be able to visit again soon.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – I hope so too!

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      1. notestowomen Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  11. doodletllc Avatar

    Thank you for lifting the veil on the photo…looks like a magical place…love the memories your story evokes.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  12. joyroses13 Avatar

    Love the sentimental feel. Sums up how parents feel as their kids grow! The personal touch with the pictures was great! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  13. msjadeli Avatar

    Wonderful story of handing down cherished traditions and memories. It’s what family is all about ❤ Nice pics of a cool-looking place.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  14. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love how you saw old memories in the pictures too, and I thought it looked a bit like a stage-set which made me think of memories too.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Bjorn

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  15. Dora Avatar

    Memories keep us coming back to old haunts, don’t they? Well, happy memories, anyway. Nicely done, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dora 🙂

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  16. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    I saw this and thought for sure it was a film/television set. Museum makes sense. It’s beautiful that you bring your kids to the same museum your parents brought you as a kid. Someday, they’ll bring their kids.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I would like to think so. Thanks.

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  17. larry trasciatti Avatar

    such a fine nostalgic family moment

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Larry

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  18. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Thats a lovely piece Iain, the building looks amazing from the outside.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It is amazing, and quickly became a city landmark by the river.

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  19. granonine Avatar

    A lovely atmosphere, and one I can fully understand as the mother of people who have started entering their 50s :). Really enjoyed this.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Linda 🙂

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  20. plaridel Avatar

    there’s a portuguese word for this. it’s called saudade which doesn’t have a direct equivalent in english. well done as always.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, and thanks for the new word 🙂

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  21. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    “The place hasn’t changed, but you have.” is a good line. There’s a strong sense of memory. Great story.
    P.S. I like the additional pictures.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  22. Tannille Avatar

    This place looks awesome. Loved your added photos.
    Great story. Time flies.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      If your ever in Glasgow, you should stop by! 🙂

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      1. Tannille Avatar

        Absolutely! Not in winter though, it would kill me!

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  23. Anita Avatar

    Such a touching tale.
    A father and his memories.
    Echoes & sounds are still alive along with his memories. Hope the grand-kids can hear & understand.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita

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  24. jillyfunnell Avatar

    Whoever she is, he misses her very much. Lovely poignancy, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jilly

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  25. Bill Avatar

    What wonderful, thoughtful memories. Thanks also, for filling in the gaps, Iain. Very well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Bill, much appreciated.

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  26. draliman Avatar

    Very wistful. Nice photos too!

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  27. Vartikaforu Avatar

    Beautiful story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  28. Sue Avatar
    Sue

    Beautiful story. It left me longing for more.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sue

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  29. Liz Young Avatar

    Wonderful that its been there so long!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, when it moved into the new building they took the old street and moved it almost (fake) brick for brick!

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  30. Dale Avatar

    First of all: This was a beautifully written story of longing and reminiscence.
    Second: Thank you for sharing your personal story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dale, glad you liked both parts!

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      1. Dale Avatar

        Very much so.

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  31. Psychic-Medium-Author Ronda Del Boccio Avatar

    The past only comes back in our minds. Good one.
    Ronda

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Ronda

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  32. tidalscribe Avatar

    I loved that museum, even though I only had one BIG kid with me!

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  33. Danny James Avatar

    I’m sure she will enjoy the visit

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Danny

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  34. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Awwwwww This was lovely! What fabulous memories to share! 🥰

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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  35. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    Very nostalgic. I can relate with my daughter growing older too. Those years do go by so fast. Gosh, I’d never have thought it was a museum. It really looks like this side street I wandered into once in London.

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    1. Fatima Fakier Avatar

      Although the old-fashioned cars are a clue!

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Fatima, it is such a precious time that disappears in a flash.

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  36. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    Here’s to memories and good revisiting …
    I’d comment more coherently but I’m currently a puddle of cuteness-overload from the adorable photos you enclosed …

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, they have their cute moments 🙂

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

        Yep! 🙂 I bet!

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  37. subroto Avatar

    Lovely nostalgic story. And thanks for sharing those memories.

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  38. goroyboy Avatar

    Thanks for sharing the pleasant memories Iain. Hope all is well with you.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, nice to hear from you. All fine here, hope all well with you too.

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  39. Lynn Love Avatar

    Aw, Iain, that’s lovely and such beautiful photographs too – what gorgeous children! We used to regularly take my son to a science museum in Bristol when he was small. I remember all that running around, that small-person enthusiasm for things. Now my son is taller than me, about to start college! The years do seem to pass quickly, don’t they? Hope you get to visit the museum soon

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn. We’re not quite at the college stage yet, but I already look back and miss those days of them being this small and curious. Hope you are well and have been coping through the crazy summer.

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        It’s a cliche, but the time when they’re small does seem to pass quickly. We’re coping okay, thanks, though it’s all rather oppressive, isn’t it? Covid, the economy, the Brexit shambles… I’ve voted against this lot of @£*&£@#+£s so many times I’ve lost count, but the country isn’t with me, so I just have to stand by and watch it happen. Or just try to write and ignore it all! Hope you and yours are coping okay

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