IAIN KELLY

WHAT ARE LITTLE GIRLS MADE OF?

She saw him through the window as he approached the cafรฉ.

The arrogant strut, the charming smile, the nonchalant wave.

She stopped toying with the sugar shaker and placed it back in the rack and clasped her hands together to mask her nervous tension.

How had she not seen it in the first place? How could she have been blinded by his boyish charms?

The bell tinkled, he stepped inside. She didn’t stand to greet him.

His smile faltered, he saw the look in her eyes, he knew he was busted.

Now she would show him what this little girl was made of.


Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more detailsย HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

Seeing the sugar shaker reminded me of the old rhyme, which goes:

What are little boys made of?
ย ย Snips and snails
ย ย And puppy-dogs’ tails
That’s what little boys are made of

What are little girls made of?
ย ย Sugar and spice
ย ย And everything nice
That’s what little girls are made of.

I decided to write a character of a little girl who was made of sterner stuff for the modern world!

To read stories of 100 words based on this weekโ€™s prompt, visitย HERE.

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73 responses to “WHAT ARE LITTLE GIRLS MADE OF?”

  1. Sadje Avatar

    Cheers for her!

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  2. ceayr Avatar

    I don’t claim to be an expert on the fairer sex, but I never bought all that sugar and spice tosh!
    Neat story, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s not my experience of them either! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    It sounds like he deserves whatever he’s about to get. Well done. I thought of the nursery rhyme immediately.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle, it sprung to mind, and then I immediately realised that this is not what little girls are made of! I know, I have one! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  4. michael Avatar

    He is busted, she does right. Now I am thinking about how to rewrite the rhyme for modern life๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Let us know if you come up with something Michael! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Love it when the rose coloured glasses are off!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      She means business ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. trentpmcd Avatar

    Maybe sugar and spice, but don’t cross her twice, for everything nice and fine hides a steely spine. I’m sure he deserves her wrath.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Nicely done, Trent! Thanks.

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      1. trentpmcd Avatar

        The new version for modern times ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks, I enjoyed the story.

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  7. bearmkwa Avatar
    bearmkwa

    Nice one! Mom used to say I was made of nails covered in honey… whatever the H* that meant.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I like the contradiction!

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  8. joyroses13 Avatar

    Haha! Love it! Go girl!
    I was just joking the other day with a friend. They were giviny me a hard time about my love for sugary lattes! I said I was just living up to the poem! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, I’m sure you are made up of all things nice! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        Aren’t you kind! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Tannille Avatar

    I think she might put salt in his coffee instead of sugar. Oops… ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He’ll be lucky if he gets away with just that! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Liz H Avatar

    We do deliver our Truth with a boot in the butt, when necessary.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Don’t we little boys know it! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. Liz H Avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Sugar and chilli powder! Beware, young man!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think it’s too late, he’s walked straight into this trap! Thanks Keith.

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  12. Dale Avatar

    Methinks he’s done something to bring out the not so sweet side of her!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Think of an aggressive spice and you might be closer to what she is made of ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. Dale Avatar

        As the mother of a major pepper-head, I can think of quite a few spices ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  13. larry trasciatti Avatar

    At least now she knows his true colors~

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, she found him out alright.

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  14. Dora Avatar

    Boys will be boys no doubt, but every once in a while a girl will make them pay for it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And so they should! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  15. Susan A Eames Avatar

    I like how you’ve managed to write a huge story in so few words!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Susan ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. HonieBriggs Avatar

    Well done, Iain. We all have to be made from “sterner stuff” these days, don’t we?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      We certainly do. Thanks Honie ๐Ÿ™‚

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  17. neilmacdon Avatar

    If he survives this, he may be a wiser man

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a big ‘if’.

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  18. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    I can see a full character just from this line: “The arrogant strut, the charming smile, the nonchalant wave.” Great piece.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – yeah, we all know the type I’m talking about! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  19. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    You nailed this. Her playing with the sugar container…the whole sugar and spice thing. Her not willing to be betrayed anymore. Excellent!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha, it all tied together ๐Ÿ™‚

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  20. Diary of a Dublin housewife Avatar

    Atta girl ๐Ÿ˜‰ haha

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks

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  21. draliman Avatar

    That took the arrogance out of his strut ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      More of a limp on the way out.

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  22. granonine Avatar

    Excellent, Iain! I REALLY want to know what happens next!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I can’t it’s too painful ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  23. plaridel Avatar

    i hope he has enough charm to win her over. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I don’t fancy his chances! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  24. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh yeah, you go kick his butt, girlfriend! Gosh I remember that poem, never believed it either

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Like most nursery rhymes – complete nonsense! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  25. Tessa Avatar

    Good for her. Cheers!

    Liked by 1 person

  26. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Nursery rhymes and children’s tales and songs bare closer inspection and some need rewriting, you’re absolutely correct!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – you are the expert in this field! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  27. msjadeli Avatar

    I could see her face and I could his face seeing her face. She should have held onto the sugar container and dumped it over his head before walking out.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, a likely conclusion!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™‚

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  28. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    It sounds like she’s more spice than sugar, which is not bad at all.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You do want a bit of spice for sure ๐Ÿ™‚

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  29. pennygadd51 Avatar

    What a smashing story, Iain! You’ve written it with exquisite precision. Lovely. That’s put a smile on my face!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Penny, very kind ๐Ÿ™‚

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  30. subroto Avatar

    That’s a perfect flash fiction story. Very well done indeed.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

      Like

  31. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I think little girls are made of pepper and steel… with a thin layer of sugar on top

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Sounds like the right mix ๐Ÿ™‚

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  32. magarisa Avatar

    Great writing. I saw the scene unfolding before me. He underestimated her!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That was his biggest mistake! Thanks

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  33. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Great story! Yes, there are no words for how much that sexist little ditty bugged me growing up. Now I’m older and I’m like … sure. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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