IAIN KELLY

THE OPPRESSED

The rain poured down. It was freezing. We stood around waiting.

There came the fanfare and we all looked towards the balcony.

He appeared, his arm raised, a smile on his face. He was surrounded by acolytes, the same people who had days ago been denouncing him on all media outlets.

‘Hail to the King! Hail to the King!’ rang out from the PA system.

At the front of the crowd his supporters took up the chant.

Reluctantly, so did we. It was not the time to show disobedience.

The rain turned to hard ice. Battered down by the hail, we bowed to our leader. His power had never been greater.

He went back inside his grand palace. We turned and trudged away through the mud and sleet.


Written for #FOWC, hosted by Fandango on his blog This, That and the Other. Today’s prompt word was: Hail. Click on the link to read contributions from other writers.

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18 responses to “THE OPPRESSED”

  1. Tina Stewart Brakebill Avatar

    Well that hits a little close to home. 😩 Nice job.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I don’t know who you could possibly be referring to…. 😉

      Liked by 2 people

  2. joyroses13 Avatar

    A little too scary!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s a scary world!

      Like

      1. joyroses13 Avatar

        Yes it is!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Mason Bushell Avatar

    I hail thee Iain, for your Clever double use of the prompt word. Good story well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Mason, much appreciated!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Mason Bushell Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  4. magickmermaid Avatar

    Great take on the prompt! (Hopefully not the future for many!)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Wouldn’t that be nice!

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Liz H Avatar

    As if ripped from the headlines…of Fake News.
    Pray it ain’t so…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m hoping it is just fiction.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Liz H Avatar

        From your keyboard to God’s laptop.

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Fandango Avatar

    It’s not an impossible scenario, but hopefully an improbable one.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s looking less likely, at least in America.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. scr4pl80 Avatar

    OMG don’t even put that idea out there!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I bet he’s dreamt it though.

      Liked by 1 person

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