IAIN KELLY

DEAD ROSES

Dead roses in winter, withered and defeated.

The Grand Armée reduced to an icy hell. The villages they entered had nothing to offer. They had stripped them bare of what little they had on their way to Moscow.

Starving, frost-bitten and dog-tired, he stumbled on. To drop now meant certain death. No comrade would burden themselves with a brother-in-arms. Every man for himself.

A terrifying shriek. Inhuman. A horse sacrificed for meat. Others had turned to cannibalism.

The eagle flew on the breeze, the tattered flag a symbol of the army’s shame. He would return it to Paris. What else was there to do?


Copyright Dale Rogerson

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Also linking to Fandango’s One-Word Challenge for today: Retreat.

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65 responses to “DEAD ROSES”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Bleak and atmospheric, Iain. I like where you went with this prompt

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Neil.

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Excellent Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di

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  3. ceayr Avatar

    You captured the despair well, Iain.
    Une histoire très forte, mon brave

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Merci, mon ami.

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    A bleak scene well constructed. Good job.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  5. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Reminds me of the winter scene in Ridley Scott’s The Duellists.

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  6. magickmermaid Avatar

    Such despair. Brilliant!

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  7. Dale Avatar

    I could feel his despair. Wonderfully written atmospheric piece!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Dale 🙂

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  8. Mason Bushell Avatar

    A very desolate and bleak atmosphere perfe4ctly created here. I wonder what the beast is that slew the horse. Being in Russia the Almasty know also as the Yeti, maybe?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      In times of desperation, all men turn to beasts. Thanks Mason.

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      1. Mason Bushell Avatar

        Yes, I believe they do!

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  9. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Hopefully, his determination carried him to his journey’s end. A chilling piece in more ways than one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith. I wonder what was left for those that did manage to make it home.

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  10. pennygadd51 Avatar

    You have packed this with hard-hitting images that really tell the story. The sacrifice of the horse was particularly vivid and harrowing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Penny.

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  11. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

    I’ve seen that movie. 😉 Powerful prose!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Susan

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  12. liz young Avatar

    This conjured up those haunting TV images of Russian troops in WW2 – well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Liz

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  13. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    Dark and filled with despair but oh-so-good.
    Be Safe 😷 … Isadora 😎

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Isadora

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  14. msjadeli Avatar

    Great atmospheric piece, Iain. War is an ugly business for all except the fat cats lining their pockets with gold.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  15. notestowomen Avatar

    Your story was one of despair and determination in the midst of such horror. Very well written, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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      1. notestowomen Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  16. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Christ that was brutal, desperation leads folk to wretched paths I guess. Good stuff Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, brutal is the word, can only imagine what it was like to live through something like that

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      1. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

        Quite, I’d be absolutely rubbish at survival if i’d been born even 30 years before I actually was!

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  17. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    Vividly told, Iain. Especially as it was not bound to one time, not one war, but the existential realities of soldiers sacrificed to the hubris of their ‘leaders’. And the terrible costs of war galore. Well penned!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

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  18. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Can’t beat Old Man Winter. Such an evocative story. Great use of words.

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  19. subroto Avatar

    A little vignette from Napoleonic Wars and history springs to life. Vivid descriptions puts one in the scene itself. Nice one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

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  20. draliman Avatar

    That was pretty grim! Very atmospheric, with a sense of hopelessness mixed with a determination to make it through.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Grim times, maybe we haven’t got it quite so bad after all.

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  21. granonine Avatar

    Excellent, Iain. A graphic picture of that disastrous attempt to overthrow Russia.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Linda

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  22. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Iain! This is one of your very best. Bleak. Rhythmic. So much said in 100-words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Alicia, much appreciated.

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  23. Dora Avatar

    You excel at such atmospheric story-telling, and this bit of historical fiction is such a vivid example of it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Dora 🙂

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  24. plaridel Avatar

    it seems like a harrowing scene from napoleon’s retreat. well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It is indeed. Thanks.

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  25. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Told so well, and in so few words…And history repeated itself, but with a return to Berlin.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  26. jenne49 Avatar
    jenne49

    War despairingly summed up, Iain. You capture it all.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

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  27. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    What a hellish scene indeed. Your descriptions are incredible of the army’s retreat from Moscow in the dead of winter. Carrying the flag, in hopes of returning it to Paris, gave your character the impetus to push forward I’m thinking. Excellent writing as always, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much Brenda, always appreciated 🙂

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  28. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Gosh this is dark. Such a horrific march.
    You described the bleak emotion and setting perfectly. Very visceral

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie – roses in winter meant bleak for me!

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  29. Bear Avatar

    My Gr. Grandfather, WW1-2 Vet, would tell of the necessity of killing their pack horse for meat to survive. He would also add that they crawled inside the carcass just to stay warm through the night. all these years later, I think of that.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s hard to imagine such hardship.

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      1. Bear Avatar

        Yes, it is. He would always cry when he spoke of it…and he only spoke of it if you didn’t clean your plate at meal time… The only exception for me was tomatoes because of allergy.

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  30. michaelwynnauthor Avatar

    Well played Iain, powerfuly and chillingly eocative of horrible times

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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