IAIN KELLY

RIGHTEOUS REVOLUTION

Elevating elevators lifting the righteous rich towards Heaven. Glittering gold and shimmering sheen. Momentous money mountains. Malevolent me, here to enact vicious vengeance.

They can’t / won’t / must not get away with it. Litigious lawyers run rings round rigged rulings. Judges adjudicate in favour of backhand bribes.

The little man misses out. The little man suffers serious consequences. The little man loses living and life.

Flash the badge. A cop’s career careering to a catastrophic climax. The bilious billionaire will buy it big time. A bullet will shatter the glass house. Towers will tumble, truth will triumph.

Me, the martyr to cure the cancerous malignancy and reignite righteous revolution.


Copyright Liz Young

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

After a break from the Friday Fictioneers Fun, it’s great to be participating again, and to see, and read, so many familiar faces. I hope everyone is well and I hope to be back on a more regular basis in the months ahead. The summer wasn’t all rest and relaxation though, as I finished my next novel and am delighted to have signed a contract to publish it with The Book Guild Ltd. You can read more about ‘The Barra Boy’ HERE, and look out for publication in Summer 2022.

To read stories of 100 words based on this weekโ€™s prompt, visit HERE.

69 responses to “RIGHTEOUS REVOLUTION”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    A ribald romp through rectifying resolve. Welcome back, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neil, lovely to be here.

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  2. Anita Avatar

    This is what happens. Reality.
    The small fish pay the price.
    But, glass-houses do crumble. They cannot get away. Martyr’s sacrifice won’t go in vain.
    All need to pay for their karma.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Wow! What wonderful language.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sadje ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        Youโ€™re welcome

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  4. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Awesome alliteration and loads of other clever stuff I have no words for, brilliant stuff Iain and their time will hopefully come as we see it all come crashing down.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s certainly time for a change. Thank you!

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    I’m so happy to see your face back in the squares! Methinks there’s a terrorist in the midst. Wonderfully written.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle, lovely to be back and see so many familiar faces still going strong ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Glad to see you back Iain. Loved your take.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di, lovely to be here ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Yamini Ali MacLean Avatar

    Hari OM
    Crikey – did you write this one on the eleventh of this month??? Marvellous meander through mental mayhem! YAM xx (who is a huge fan of alliteration.)

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  8. notestowomen Avatar

    Welcome back, Iain ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      1. notestowomen Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  9. magickmermaid Avatar

    Love the alliteration! Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much!

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  10. Dale Avatar

    Wonderfully done, Iain. Fun times with the alliterations! Not so fun for the intended target…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! hope you have been well ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Dale Avatar

        I have, thank you. Doing the best I can like everyone else ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. granonine Avatar

    Iain, it’s good to see you back here.

    Your post is poetic in its alliterative advances to each and every new line ๐Ÿ™‚

    Looking forward to your new novel!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Linda! hope you have been well and stay tuned for more news on the novel in the months ahead!

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  12. Ain Starlingsson Avatar
    Ain Starlingsson

    Haha! Delightful wordsmithery….

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much.

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  13. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar

    Wow, an amazing feat of alliteration! And a whole thriller movie in 100 words. I, too, have been away for awhile, and it’s great to return to pieces like this — they ignite my mind.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Eugenia, hope you have been well ๐Ÿ™‚

      Like

  14. msjadeli Avatar

    Iain, welcome back! I was happy to see your face in the line-up today. Congratulations on signing a contract with a publisher. That’s so wonderful!

    I can tell you had a lot of fun writing your tale, yet underlying the wordplay is a good political intrigue.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, nice to be back and catch up with the familiar faces!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  15. Dora Avatar

    Iain,
    We missed you! Today’s prompt had us thinking along the same lines it seems. Loved your take and the poeticisms drove it all forward fluently. Congratulations on finishing your new novel and snagging a publisher! May it be a robust success.
    pax,
    dora

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Its nice to be missed! Thanks Dora, good to be back and heres hoping for the novel!

      Liked by 1 person

  16. athling2001 Avatar

    Wonderful response. The language is as rich as the finery.

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  17. trishsplace Avatar

    I love how you’ve done this, Iain. Love the alliterative couplets.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trish, hope you are well.

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  18. susanrouchard Avatar

    Beautiful alliterations. Great rant against capitalism. Thanks Ian.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Susan ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  19. GHLearner Avatar

    It’s lovely to see you back, and back you are with a vengeance. Yay to every word, and all these alliterations leave me in awe. And congrats on contract and new book!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much, good to be back again ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  20. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Pure gold and a masterclass in alliteration. Welcome home, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, its good to be back ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  21. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    Welcome back! We’ve missed your writings.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, its nice to be missed ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  22. plaridel Avatar

    welcome back! we’ve missed your wit and dry humour.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  23. Tannille Avatar

    So much said in so few words…
    Welcome back!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! Good to see everyone again.

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  24. Russell Gayer Avatar

    This one made me chuckle, Iain. I’m reminded of the narrator in the old 60s Batman TV series.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Russell, love those old Batman shows.

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  25. oneta hayes Avatar

    If I were still teaching I could use you for a resource. I did get lost in it a bit. Forgot the story, lost in the language.

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  26. draliman Avatar

    An alliterative masterpiece ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  27. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    That’s an awesome alliterative article!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  28. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Wow, so much said. Superb alliteration and a pleasure to read, though the message is a powerful one. Looking forward to reading your novel, Iain. Welcome back to FF. Iโ€™ve recently returned myself. =)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Brenda, good to see you here, hope you are well.

      Like

  29. pennygadd51 Avatar

    I fear the little man will lose life to no avail. Misleading media, and purchased publicity will ruin reputation.
    Good to have you back, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  30. Vartika Avatar

    Wonderful !!

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  31. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh, there is certainly a story here to be told!
    Great to read your work again, Iain. Welcome back!

    Liked by 1 person

  32. jenne49 Avatar

    I can feel the fun you’re having with the words – wonderful. But the threat of meance too. Nice one.
    And good to see you back.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanls Jenne ๐Ÿ™‚

      Like

  33. Woman walking Max Avatar

    Good to see you back Ian. A creative take, like the alliteration very much — very clever and pacey.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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