IAIN KELLY

SIGN YOUR NAME

‘Add your name.’

There wasn’t much space left on the walls. What had once been grey concrete was now covered in garish name-tags.

I found a small corner.

‘Not there,’ Marguerite stopped me. ‘Front and centre.’

‘There’s no space.’

‘There’s always room for one more.’ The old lady pointed to a spot in the middle of the wall.

I sprayed my name. Another success story in her one-woman crusade to steer the local kids away from the gangs and the drugs.

‘You understand the significance of signing your name? You’ve made a promise to me.’

I nodded. Somehow, like all those before me, I knew I wouldn’t let her down.

Copyright Carole Erdman-Grant

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

64 responses to “SIGN YOUR NAME”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Such people exist, and thank heavens for that

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neil, we could do with some more of them.

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  2. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Congrats on being featured in the Hall of Fame 🙂

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Lovely story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sadje 🙂

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  4. Yamini Ali MacLean Avatar

    Hari OM
    OH yes, let there be more such ‘old ladies’ – and signees! YAM xx
    Q=Query

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 Thank you 🙂

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    The old lady in the story is a tour de force. We need more like her in the world. Lovely story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rochelle 🙂

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  6. trentpmcd Avatar

    Marguerite sounds like quite the lady

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      She is that, thanks Trent

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  7. magickmermaid Avatar

    Wonderful inspiring story!

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  8. Liz H Avatar

    Given the right opportunity, a spray can of life & committment, & a nod from Marguerite, a man can change his life!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It just needs that little push to start. Thanks Liz

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  9. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Graffiti with a purpose. Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      An art form in search of the right home. Thanks Keith

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  10. elmowrites Avatar

    This story is really lovely. There should be a Marguerite in every town; maybe more than one. Makes me want to buy an abandoned building and continue her work.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Aw, thank you so much 🙂

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  11. pennygadd51 Avatar

    Great story, and beautifully told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny

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  12. msjadeli Avatar

    Sounds like she isn’t as alone in the effort to help the youngsters in the community than was at first thought. The helpers can’t deny such a public signature either.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      She’ll hold them to it. Thank you!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  13. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Well told…We do need the help of many such individuals…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Michael

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  14. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like how they made a commitment by signing their names.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Frank

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  15. Tannille Avatar

    I can’t help be see her take over the city with the kids. 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      An ambitious twist! Thank you

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  16. Sandra Avatar

    Such a touching story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra

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  17. Vartika Avatar

    Every person counts. Beautiful story Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much

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  18. Rowena Avatar

    I really liked this Iain. A real feel good story.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rowena

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  19. Bill Avatar

    Wonderful story, Iain. Conscientious leadership is always a warming story. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Bill, we could do with more of it

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  20. granonine Avatar

    What a great character she is! Obviously she has garnered the respect of many young people. Good one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Linda 🙂

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  21. Tessa Avatar

    What a wonderful story. I think it would be a great idea in real life.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Tessa 🙂

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  22. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    It’s on the wall and none can deny that. A promise for keeps! Nice story.

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  23. Margaret Avatar

    Marguerite’s a wise lady. I like the idea of the graffiti being a positive sign instead of a destructive one. Great thought. Lovely story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Margaret 🙂

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  24. Danny James Avatar

    You better not!

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  25. Patricia Clair Avatar
    Patricia Clair

    I really loved this – one lady, many names.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Patricia, glad you liked it 🙂

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  26. plaridel Avatar

    bless her heart. i want to believe there are more people like her in this world. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      We could do with more. Thank you

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  27. creatingahome Avatar

    I love the positive vibe in your story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

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  28. draliman Avatar

    That’s a good idea 🙂 And I prefer the building in the photo to bare grey concrete.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, brighter is better here.

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  29. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    At least it’s for a good cause. Great take.

    Congratulations on the new upcoming book!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

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  30. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh nice twist on the graffiti wall tagging. I hope they do keep their promise.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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  31. GHLearner Avatar

    This is beautiful. People like her a holding the world together.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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