IAIN KELLY

SOMETHING OR NOTHING?

‘I’m not going down there.’

‘It’s just a shed.’

‘An ominous shed and a strange thumping noise.’

‘What do you think is going to be down there? Be rational.’

‘You’ve seen horror films, right? Where you sit and say “they shouldn’t go into the dark cellar, why would they do that?”‘

‘This isn’t a film, it’s our shed at the bottom of the garden.’

‘You go. I’m staying right here.’

‘Suit yourself.’

Vanessa strode down the lawn. Sound disappeared. She slowed. She heard the thumping noise. An owl hooted. A wolf howled.

She reached the door and turned the handle. It creaked open.

And then…

Copyright David Stewart

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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44 responses to “SOMETHING OR NOTHING?”

  1. Sadje Avatar

    Great building of suspense.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sadje

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome Iain

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    Makes up my own ending

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  3. Lynn Love Avatar

    Nicely done suspenseful build, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        Always a pleasure, Iain. Great to watch you touring with Barra Boy. Really pleased for you

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Thanks Lynn, hope you get a chance to give it a read if you can find the time! 🙂

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  4. Liz H Avatar

    (Laughing maniacally and rattling a large ring hung with rusty keys)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Lurk in sheds often? 😉

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      1. Liz H Avatar

        It’s kind of a hobby, and with Halloween just 2 months away…😈

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  5. trentpmcd Avatar

    lol, great cliff hanger.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trent

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  6. Michael Humphris Avatar
    Michael Humphris

    And then, … I saw bats and more bats,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael, could be bats!

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  7. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Gasp! You’re just going to leave me hanging? Good job.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You make the rules! 😉

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  8. msjadeli Avatar

    “Is that you, Mo Dean?”

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Or something worse…?

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  9. granonine Avatar

    GAAHhhh! I KNEW you were going to do that!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That 100 word limit!

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  10. CGraith Avatar

    If I envision the “and then” the moment when the long legged shadows show up, I’m feeling ver sorry for brave Vanessa!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It could be lights out for her!

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  11. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    Don’t just leave it there… I need to know what happened.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Sorry, 100 words only! 😉

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  12. draliman Avatar

    Uh-oh. Sometimes you’ve got to trust in films and not “investigate that odd noise”.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yeah, don’t act like your in a horror film!

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  13. Bill Avatar

    “…and then along came Jones, slow walking Jones…”

    Enjoyed this, Iain, even if you did leave me hanging. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  14. plaridel Avatar

    i guess you ran out of words and left us guessing what happened next. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I don’t make the rules 😉

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  15. notestowomen Avatar

    I can’t wait to find out what happened next. Great build up, Iain 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – this may be all there is!

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  16. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    And then freaking what, Iain?! lol I guess I’ll wait until you write the book. 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You could be waiting a while! 😉

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      1. Sascha Darlington Avatar

        lol Already have a lot on the burner? Good on you!

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  17. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Eeeeeep! What happens next. Great suspense here! I like the hints of humour too

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie 🙂

      Like

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