IAIN KELLY

INVASIVE SPECIES

The spores floated through the air.

No one knew where they had come from. Some said outer space, some said underground, some said the remotest part of the Great Steppe.

Some revered as they passed overhead, some reviled. Portents of doom mixed with euphoria. The Great Coming of either a God or a Devil.

Alarms started ringing when they formed a blanket in the sky.

It was too late by then.

They exploded. Red goo splattered the buildings and streets and dissolved anything it hit. White shards like javelins stabbed and pierced.

Wherever it came from, global victory was complete in a matter of minutes.

Copyright Trish Nankeville

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

‘The Barra Boy’ is available now. You can find all the information for getting a copy HERE.

49 responses to “INVASIVE SPECIES”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Great use of the flowers’ appearance, Iain

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  2. trishsplace Avatar

    Good. I like an alien invasion story 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trish

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  3. Sandra Crook Avatar

    Very imaginative, Iain. A touch of the Stephen King/Ray Bradbury’s there.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, Bradbury was in my mind. Thanks Sandra

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Now there’s a sci-fi to rival Day of the Triffids. I could picture the sky filling and then exploding. Oh my. Imaginative and downright creepy. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle 🙂

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  5. trentpmcd Avatar

    I had similar thoughts, but a little more subtle in tactics…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, definitely have that look about them. Thanks Trent

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  6. Liz H Avatar

    Never be fooled by a pretty face, or a beauteous bud! It could happen to any of us. Clever use of the picture prompt!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Liz, wise words!

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  7. Bear Avatar

    What a gruesome way for the earth to end. yuuck! 🙂 Great story.

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  8. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    A bit of the Sci-fi world in this, Iain.
    I must admit I don’t get sci-fi but I see others
    have enjoyed it so I’ll say bravo through their comments.
    Isadora 😎

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  9. granonine Avatar

    Icky red goo all over the world–sheesh. I wonder who gets to do the clean-up 🙂

    I finally read “The Barra Boy” last week. I enjoyed it SO much! Your characterizations of people are spot on, making them real and relatable. This was such a human story. And I loved the ending. I don’t think there could have been a better way to end the story 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ah, thanks so much Linda, really glad you enjoyed it. So nice to hear such positive feedback! Do let people know and help spread the word 🙂

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      1. granonine Avatar

        Absolutely will. Already have 🙂 I think I was expecting more sci-fi, so it was delightful to have you take such a different turn on this book. Not that I don’t like sci-fi.

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        One of the advantages of not being a ‘successful’ writer and not having an agent or publishing deal – I am free to write whatever I want! Deciding what I should have a go at next just now.

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      3. granonine Avatar

        Have you ever thought about a historical novel?

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      4. Iain Kelly Avatar

        One of the options yes. I think something set in the past certainly, even if not dealing with a big historical event.

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      5. granonine Avatar

        I will be eagerly looking forward to what you decide 🙂

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  10. msjadeli Avatar

    It’s just as likely to end that way as any other. I like how you cultivated the tension and menace of the plant.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I just saw some innocent looking flowers, you clearly saw a lot more! Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, perhaps we look at the world in different ways!

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  12. CGraith Avatar

    You’re scaring me…joking…well half joking. You have described a theme in many alien invasion stories….do we say “peace” or “get off my planet”? The two camps could well end up in a war long before the aliens make their first move!

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  13. pennygadd51 Avatar

    As easily as that, eh? It’s an imaginative way for aliens to conquer the earth!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It always seems quite easy for aliens to invade Earth in the movies! Until some plucky hero comes along to save the day!

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  14. Bill Avatar

    That is quite a creative take on the prompt, Iain. Well done.

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  15. starsinclayjars Avatar

    That’s funny – the first time I saw the photo it reminded me of Covid! A different kind of invasion!!! Good take.

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  16. plaridel Avatar

    i hope underground cities were spared. civilization didn’t have to end this way.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m not so sure…!

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  17. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    I’d go with the out of space theory.

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  18. oneta hayes Avatar

    I like the revered/reviled contrast all through the story. Explosive ending. But I did expect that.

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  19. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Ooooo genuis use of the plants for a great scifi horror here. Love it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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  20. creatingahome Avatar

    Oh dear.
    I love the different take on the prompt. Did not see that at all.
    Interesting.

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  21. authorfleurl Avatar

    Wow! Love this! Aliens invading the world…since I watched seasons 1 & 2 of A Quiet Place, I’m into all this invasion stuff. Nicely done!

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  22. michael Avatar
    michael

    Horrible but well thought out.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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