CALM SEAS

His work done, it was time to drift away on calm seas.

The baggage of his long life lifted from his weary shoulders as the gentle tide pulled him towards the blue azure sky, tinged with orange and pink.

A good ending, he thought, a good way to bow out.

He looked at his fellow passengers, each in their own contemplation. His eyes alighted on the man in the black hat. Stares locked. A malevolent smile crept across the stranger’s face.

He felt the adrenalin start to flow, that first pulse of exhilaration that told him a new adventure was about to begin.

He was not done yet.

Copyright Brenda Cox

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Last weekend, I was invited to attend my first ever writing conference. Plenty of meeting fellow writers and industry experts, and I gave a presentation on my own experiences of publishing and selling my own books. You can read a bit about it in my blog here: THE 9th SELF-PUBLISHING CONFERENCE.

‘The State Trilogy’ and ‘The Barra Boy’ available now.

43 responses to “CALM SEAS”

  1. And it seemed such a good plan too

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    1. Just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in, sort of thing. Thanks Neil

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  2. The malevolent smile …feels like a writing prompt or title.

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    1. Would make a good title 🙂

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  3. Oh this is great writing. Really engaging!

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    1. Thank you, much appreciated.

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  4. Intriguing… left me wondering what indeed will happen next. 🙂 <3.

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    1. Me too, I’ll have a think!

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  5. It’s only the beginning…

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    1. Let the adventure begin!

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  6. Mwahahahaha!
    Let the vengeful carnage begin…again!
    (Black hat man must be stopped!)

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    1. It’s all about to kick off! 🙂

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  7. The way of living is wave after wave of challenges and your story is a wonderful metaphor for it. I’m glad the MC found his next one before drifting off. Good story and great news on your writing adventures.

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. You’re very welcome.

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  8. Oh no! What a great twist. Well done.

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  9. And there I was, thinking he was dying happily, and suddenly wham!

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    1. Yes, still time for one last adventure.

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  10. Nice. Welcome back.

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    1. Thanks James, a couple of busy weeks kept me away, but always nice to jump back in.

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    1. Still life in him for another adventure or two!

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  11. This is very intriguing. I was disappointed when it was over. He wasn’t finished after all but I got the sense he wasn’t too disappointed. Let the new adventure begin. Great job!

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    1. Thanks Brenda. Indeed, I think he is ready for another adventure to begin 🙂

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  12. you left me hanging. i expect a sequel to follow. 🙂

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    1. I’ll have to get thinking! Thanks 🙂

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  13. The really amazing thing here is that your MC seems excited about one last battle before he’s done 🙂

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    1. Yes, he’s not ready to go just yet – he obviously enjoys life, and the battle! Thanks Linda

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  14. Just as he thought it was over…! I’m intrigued.

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    1. It’s not over until the… etc…

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  15. Sailing quietly off into the sunset isn’t for everybody.

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    1. I’m sure there are many who would like that one last chance for an adventure.

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  16. Oooooo this is fascinating. I want to know more.

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  17. Dear Iain,

    I guess he has a few more miles to go before he sleeps. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  18. Just when he thought he could retire…..good one🙌

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  19. You really pulled me into this – nice! And congrats again on the book and the Writers Conference sounds like a wonderful opportunity.

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  20. I’m glad he came to the conclusion that he wasn’t done yet.

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