IAIN KELLY

YOU CAN’T PARK THAT HERE

Sunglasses on, roof down. One arm on the door, one on the wheel. B-Lo (real name Brandon Archibald Lowescroft-Smith) pulled up into the parking space in his pristine new (mini) Chevrolet. The chilled beats from the stereo added to his smooth vibe of cool.

‘Hey,’ he nonchalantly raised his plastic sunglasses onto his head and winked at Barbara May Sue, cartwheeling on the lawn.

‘Hey, B-Lo,’ she coquettishly waved back.

Loud squeaking broke the spell. Timmy sidled up in his walker, dribbling down his chocolate-stained face. He parked next to the Chevy and wiped a grotty hand on the paintwork.

‘Tah tah, ba ba, bee bee,’ Timmy gurgled.

Man, B-Lo hated his new little brother.

Copyright Lisa Fox

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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42 responses to “YOU CAN’T PARK THAT HERE”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar
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  2. Liz H Avatar

    And so the rivalry begins! 😂😂😂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It will last a lifetime!

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      1. Liz H Avatar

        As it should!

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  3. msjadeli Avatar

    Iain, such a wonderful scene-setting, and setup for your punchline. Good stuff 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  4. elmowrites Avatar

    Aw, love the budding romance between big bro and the girl nextdoor, but I get a nasty feeling she’ll think his brother is ‘cute’ and then the real drama begins!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Oh, layers of confusion to come!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks 🙂

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  5. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    Hysterical! Cramping his style already!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’ll never end now, always having to have him hanging around!

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  6. Sadje Avatar

    Haha! Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome

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  7. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Little brothers can be a pain, I know ‘cos I had two to contend with!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m sure they always looked up to you! 🙂

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Nothing like a baby brother to cramp one’s style. Cute story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  9. notestowomen Avatar

    Cute story, Iain. Looks like he’ll have stiff competition from baby brother.

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  10. ceayr Avatar

    Children as adults, nice one, Iain!

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  11. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    LOL…cute story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  12. plaridel Avatar

    what’s a little brother for? more to come, i guess. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A lifetime of it!

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  13. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Little brothers are the worst. B-Lo’s going to have it rough. His little brother’s already scatting. Ladies love a good scat man.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’ll take your word for it! 🙂

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  14. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    I am the youngest of three sisters. Too bad older sisters! Too bad! On the other hand, we’re the best of friends now.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m glad you all survived as friends! 😉

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  15. Dale Avatar

    Haha! Love this Iain. Nothing like a baby brother coming in to blow the mood…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Always cramping his style. Thanks Dale.

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      1. Dale Avatar

        That’s how it works!

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  16. poetisatinta Avatar

    Haha Iain that made me laugh – so true to life, when I was young I really did not appreciate having a brother turning up 😃

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 I’m sure you loved him eventually!

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      1. poetisatinta Avatar

        Ha it took a long time 😃

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  17. athling2001 Avatar

    Least he has the cool car! Well done.

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  18. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Bahahaha I love this Iain. Player got frozen out by his little bro. Hilarious

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie 🙂

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