COMPULSION

I didn’t want to be sitting here. I want to be over there, where she is, inside that room with her.

Instead, I’m staring through binoculars, trying to catch a glimpse of her, a tantalising tease that will satiate my desire for another night.

People will judge me, call me names – a freak, a pervert. Let them. They don’t know what it’s like to have such a compulsion, an obsession, and to be denied it.

A light flickers in the garage as the door slides up. I see her. I catch my glimpse.

One day, that Lamborghini will be mine.

Copyright Roger Bultot

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Had the pleasure of an author event at my local library last week, talking about ‘The Barra Boy’ and my writing. Libraries are such a vital lifeline to many, young and old, and need to be protected and supported.

‘The State Trilogy’ and ‘The Barra Boy’ available now.

60 responses to “COMPULSION”

  1. Haha! Good ending

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      1. You’re welcome

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  2. Dear Iain,

    Nice misdirect. This made me smile. Love the pictures from the library. The Barra Boy is an enjoyable read.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks Rochelle. My wee book has gone a lot further than I ever imagined 🙂

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  3. Haha. I did not see that coming.

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  4. Nice twist with that last line. Great story, too.

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  5. I think by the time most of us can afford a Lamborghini, we’ll probably not be able to manoeuvre ourselves into one. Nicely done.

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    1. I don’t think I’ll ever be able to afford one, plus not very practical for the streets of Glasgow!

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  6. I see what you did there!
    (Lowers binocs, blows an errant eyelash off the lens)

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  7. lol. Does his crush ever leave her garage so he can get a closer look as she drives by?

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    1. It’s when he decides to break in to the garage that things will go really wrong for him.

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  8. Oh what a teaser! I’d like to be mad about the twist, but instead I’m laughing. Good one, Iain.

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    1. I’m glad it’s laughter 🙂

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  9. Teehee 🤭 good one.

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  10. What a delightful surprise at the end. Thank you

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  11. Love the twist!! A beautiful car is truly a beauty to behold.

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    1. They are strangely attractive for a mass of inanimate material…

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  12. One day… put it on the list with speedboat, house in the sun, Rolex watch etc…

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    1. Yeah, it’s a long list! 🙂

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  13. Gotta admit, you got me. I love the twist. I think if I had a Lambo across from my house I’d be always trying to get a glimpse of it too. 🙂

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    1. Glad I managed a little surprise 🙂

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  14. Tense, thriling, funny – as usual. Good work.

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  15. Neat twist – and congrats on your library evening.

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  16. Lamborghini? Are you sure? Okay, I believe you!

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    1. It’s not a euphemism…

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  17. Ah, to dream. The impossible dream.

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    1. Maybe one day… even if it’s just ‘borrowing’ it for a spin.

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  18. oh, what a twist. you caught me off guard. 🙂

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  19. Great twist for the end. Well done.

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  20. 😄I was not expecting that ending – well done 😅

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  21. Love the twist! I empathize! LOL

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  22. Ha! I wasn’t expecting that! Very funny!

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