DECISION TIME

Pick a door. Go through it. The choice is hers to make.

She hesitates, shuffling on the illusory sidewalk one way then the other.

Images surface through glass panes.

Behind one door she sees her mother, smiling, beckoning, encouraging.

Through the the next she sees Bethany, her cute pudgy smile, her big blue eyes, her innocent smile searching for the comfort of her mother.

In the last door she sees him, his leering smile, his sense of danger, the loaded needle poised and promised.

She smiles and steps forward with certainty.

The choice inevitable, the pull too great, her future already written.

Copyright Dale Rogerson

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

I’m delighted to announce I will be once again partnering with The Book Guild to publish my next novel. ‘All We Cannot Leave Behind’ is due out in February 2024. Stay tuned for plenty more details and news over the coming months!

‘The State Trilogy’ and ‘The Barra Boy’ available now.

50 responses to “DECISION TIME”

  1. I like the allegorical use of the doors

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  2. That was pretty perfect. Well played.

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      1. You’re welcome

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  3. Haunting! Terrifying! Really spells out the pull of addiction so well. Great story.

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  4. Hopefully she chose her child.

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    1. In a logical world, it would be no choice, but… Thanks James

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  5. I fear she has not chosen the beneficial door… Well done, sir!

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    1. Afraid not. Thanks Dale!

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      1. I think that it was pretty clear. Wishful thinking on our part.

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  6. Oh, my! I had to let out a deep breath at the end. What a sad scenario, well played out. Great job this week. Lish

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    1. Thank you, very much appreciated.

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  7. So chilling!
    Seems the needle will win.😰

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    1. This time, another victim claimed. Thanks Liz

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  8. Love those houses. Nice job with the story. I’m not making any bets as to which one she took.

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    1. Perhaps it’s better not to know. Thanks Janet.

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  9. This almost feels like she is a ghost revisiting life. The allure of the needle must be a powerful one.

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    1. To those who suffer, it is. Thanks 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain.

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  10. In my years as a therapist, I was often told that heroin is the absolute hardest drug to kick. I hope she hasn’t chosen the needle, but I’m afraid. . . .

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  11. Dear Iain,

    This doesn’t sound the least bit promising. Well written and chilling.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  12. Oh Iain, very well done! My heart aches for her and wanting her so badly to choose the happy child, but …..

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    1. I’m afraid so. Thanks for reading.

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    1. Unfortunately so. Thanks for reading.

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      1. True. You’re welcome.

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  13. The choices we make. I like the use of doors.

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  14. For some, there’s no choice, sad as it must be.

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    1. Yes, for some there is no way out. Thanks Keith.

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  15. I wouldn’t have chosen the leering smile but I guess she did?

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    1. The smile and the needle combined – too much for her to resist that pull.

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  16. Oh… oh this is told beautifully and it is so so terrible.

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  17. hope she made the right choice. 🙂

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    1. We can only hope, but I fear not.

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  18. Oh, Iain … now I want to know which door she chose … Me working it out: It’s definitely not her mother. It should be the child. BUT it’s him! … am I right?

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      1. It was definitely her choice to make. So sad she didn’t choose wisely.

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  19. So chilling Iain, and a sad ending I fear 🫢

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  20. That’s a chilling one, well told!

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  21. Is the future told? Or do we have free choice? Some choices feel more like a fait accompli than a choice. Well played.

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  22. Right. Well. Now I want to know what’s going on!
    Seems the twist is she chose the leering, needle laden one – but …. ?

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  23. Such interesting choices.
    Good story.
    Congratulations on your publishing news.
    July 4 is Alice in Wonderland Day, a commemoration of when the story was first told to the Liddell sisters by Lewis Carroll in 1862.

    J Lenni Dorner (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) ~ Speculative Fiction &Reference Author, OperationAwesome6 Debut Author Interviewer, and Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge

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