WHEN WE DANCE

When she danced, she left behind the grey walls and barred windows. She broke free from all that restrained her and held her back. Her world came to life in glorious technicolour and barriers fell away.

She could feel the music flowing through her. It was more than an urge or a desire, it was her whole soul. It was who she was. It was what she was born to do.

The grey walls closed in again. The music faded, the world returned to monochrome.

She looked down at her broken, paralysed body. She felt the pain of the impact. Screeching tyres, shattered glass, crumpled metal. The moment the dance had stopped.

Copyright Dale Rogerson

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

My new novel All We Cannot Leave Behind is available to order in paperback and ebook from all good booksellers, along with The State Trilogy and The Barra Boy.

53 responses to “WHEN WE DANCE”

  1. Such a touching story.

    All the happiness, colour & movement -> to -> sadness, monochrome & paralysis.

    Very well narrated.

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  2. Maybe, just maybe, she will find a new dance to do

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    1. There has to be that hope. Thanks Neil

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  3. Incredibly moving and painfully beautiful, Iain.

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  4. Beautiful and agonising, Iain.

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  5. Dear Iain,

    Your use of color, and the lack there of, told her story well.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. Oh, how heartbreaking. Beautifully told, Iain.

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      1. My pleasure, kind sir.

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  7. I’m not sure if her ability to remember so vividly, both the dancing and the crash, is a blessing or a curse. Nice texture to this story, Iain.

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  8. Oh dear! What a heart-wrenching story of loss. Sometimes it takes just one moment to turn our life around. Well-portrayed.

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  9. A fine piece of writing. Love this, Iain!

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    1. Thank you so much Rosemary, much appreciated.

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  10. A poignant, well told story.

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  11. A stunning contrast.

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  12. Oh,my. Such a change, all in a moment of time. I’m glad she can still hear the music and dance in her mind.

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    1. Hopefully she will learn there is reward enough in that. Thanks Linda

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  13. simply, one of your best. well done.

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  14. This is beautifully poignant. Brilliantly narrated. If she can still feel and hear the music in her mind, that is a happy place to be.

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      1. You are welcome 😊

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  15. Oh, what a tragic ending. All the colour and music taken from her in a moment. So well told.

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  16. From pure joy to utter despair. A touching tale. Iain

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  17. Beautiful and heart-wrenching. Well done!

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    Sad and yet a powerful piece of writing

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  19. This story spoke to me, Iain. I was a dancer for many, many years.

    My knees are damaged because of it. To dance once more would be glorious, yet, I must accept my fate.

    Touching and Poignant …

    Isadora 😎

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  20. So joyous and sad at the same time. Wonderful story telling. Her mind is strong with such vivid memories, maybe she’ll find another way to dance and experience joy in life agaiin.

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    1. Thank you, let’s hope so

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  21. Oh wow. This is heartbreaking
    All that colour and life lost in but a moment. Lots of emotion in this short piece Iain

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    1. Thank you Laurie, and many thanks for the review of the new book, much appreciated and so pleased you enjoyed it.

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  22. This gave me chills. Heartbreaking. Well done.

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  23. You moved us through this well with the gut punch at the end. How everything can change in one tragic moment.

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  24. Ouch – I could feel her joy and then the pain.

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  25. The first part reminded me of a poem I had written some time ago. It was based on a friend who loves dancing. She is just as you described when she dances. Your story made me think of her when I reached the shocking, tragic end of the story.

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  26. From beauty to tragedy in 100 words, this was very well done and I felt the rollercoaster of emotions with her throughout.

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