THE BRIDGE BETWEEN LOVE AND DEATH

The bridge at dusk. A romantic affair, a couple joined arm-in-arm, leaning against the side wall, exchanging stolen kisses and private smiles.

How she longed for that to be her life. Instead she waited for her contact. Five minutes past the hour. They were late. How long before she aborted?

The couple resumed their evening promenade. She thought of their night of love ahead. She would lie alone in the cheap motel room and hear the drunk arguing with himself through the wall again.

The throttle of the bike engine was incongruous. The gunshot was silenced. The splash went unnoticed. The bridge lay empty.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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56 responses to “THE BRIDGE BETWEEN LOVE AND DEATH”

  1. The assassin’s is a hard life. You write a crisp, neat story of two parallel lives intersecting, both ending in tragedy.

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  2. Sad ending. She does not make it to her motel then?

    Empty bridge that is the sole witness of the crime…

    There may be CCTVs installed on the bridge?

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    1. She does not. I suspect any cctv may prove to be useless too!

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  3. That’ll teach her to daydream. Actually, I almost wrote something along the same lines. Mysterious bridges at night have such a long history of intrigue.

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    1. They certainly do. A trope of the spy genre.

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  4. Suicide, or assasination by contact? Heavy mood built throughout and the question remains unanswered and thoroughly satisfying!

    Way to keep us hooked in and running long after story’s end, Ian! Nice.

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    1. Thank you so much Liz

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    Michael Humphris

    A story that teases my mind, who died and why

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    1. That is the question Michael

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  6. That leaves us wondering just who the target was! Nicely done, Iain.

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  7. Makes me wonder if the couple was as innocuous as they seemed… Intriguing story, Iain.

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    1. Yes, exactly that! Thank you

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  8. Wow. A lot happened in a short time in that story. Love and death, perhaps betrayal. Questions left behind. Yet, satisfying to read.

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    1. Thank you, I like a story that leads to questions.

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  9. interesting title you chose

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  10. Nicely done, Iain. Still not sure who was offed, but I suspect it was the MC.

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    1. Perhaps needs a chapter 2 to reveal the answer

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  11. Out with a bang. You packed a lot in this story. Well done, I.

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  12. Very atmospheric, and mysterious. What an ending. I suspect she let her concentration slip at just the wrong moment.

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    1. Yes, a rookie mistake for a spy. Thanks Margaret

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  13. A romantic couple, a despondent girl and a shooter. Quite a mix. Intriguing.

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  14. Dear Iain,

    Romance was not to be hers. Quite a drama in 100 words. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  15. The line about the drunk set the mood on its ear. Great tension build-up. Kudos

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  16. The empty bridge in the end speaks volumes. The assasin waited until the couple moved away. Never be sorry for yourself when you’re on clandestine missions. Dark and good!

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  17. Really well done, Iain. You had me in the moment, feeling the atmosphere, tense with the waiting.

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    1. Thanks Linda, much appreciated.

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  18. Oh dear! Though it doesn’t s ound as if she had much of a life anyway.

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    1. I wonder of it was her choice to have that sort of life. Thanks Liz

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  19. methinks, it was a bridge she shouldn’t have crossed. 

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    1. Very true, very true. Thank you.

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  20. Ooooo not the meeting she was planning for or dreaming about. Ouch. That’s one way to silence a person. Nicely done. Deft touch of the keyboard.

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  21. Your efficient assassin who longs for a more fulfilling life makes for an interesting character.

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  22. Thoroughly enjoyed this. An expertly told 100-word thriller.

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  23. A sad ending but one to be expected in her line of work unfortunately. Well done.

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  24. I think she waited five minutes too long for her own good, and the couple weren’t who she thought they were. Such a big story in so few words. Excellent!

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  25. I enjoyed the juxtaposition of which life is more appealing, the adventurous life of an assassin or the innocuous, by assassin standards, couple’s night out. To each, the other’s life might seem more exciting.

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  26. Oh no … I need to know. My curiosity is up and running.

    Great build up and drama as I read your story, Iain.

    I’m hooked.

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  27. Nicely done. I’m not sure who was shot and how they went over the bridge, but I expect those lovers were up to no good. One can’t be daydreaming on the job either, the consequences could be fatal.

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