IAIN KELLY

DO PUMPKINS SINK OR FLOAT?

Bill and Trevor stared at the unwanted trailer and the selection of large orange oblate spheroids within it.

‘Who attaches a trailer to the back of a pickup anyway? How was I to know?’ Trevor moaned.

‘This time of year, apparently, it’s the local pumpkin farmer.’ Bill paused. ‘Hide the pickup in the back. We’ll need to get rid of the trailer.’

They drove the trailer to the waste ground under the flyover. Together they added some rubble to the trailer and heaved it over the embankment into the river.

After the initial splash they waited to make sure the trailer stayed underwater. One by one pumpkins bobbed to the surface until a group of them were floating along the river.

‘Happy Halloween,’ Bill said.

Far above them the local news helicopter, attracted by the pumpkin display on the water, zoomed its camera in on Bill and Trevor. That night they ran the story of the floating pumpkin display as their ‘And finally…’ piece.

The local pumpkin farmer saw it and made a call to the local police.


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© Yinglan

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story, in around 150 words based on the weekly photo prompt. For more information visit HERE.

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35 responses to “DO PUMPKINS SINK OR FLOAT?”

  1. Priceless Joy Avatar

    I’m a little confused. Are they trying to steal the truck? That’s hilarious that the pumpkins floated which gave them away to the farmer. Great story, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, they have stolen the truck without realising a trailer was attached. Thanks PJ.

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Hahahaha! They deserve to be caught if they steal the truck not realizing it had a trailer attached. It’s hilarious that the pumpkins all floated to the top!

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Scientifically accurate too, they do float – I have been researching! 🙂

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  2. angietrafford Avatar

    I bet that was a crime they didn’t get away with for long!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  3. shehannemoore Avatar

    Ha ha. Brilliant

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  4. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    Glad they got their just deserts. 😋

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Mike 🙂

      Like

  5. John Davis Frain Avatar

    I love a good karma story. Or, if you’re the protagonist in this case, a bad karma story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks John. They got what they deserved.

      Like

  6. swritings Avatar

    Caught on camera! Great take! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks 🙂

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  7. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Wonderful story. 🙂 Pumpkin revenge for being dumped! I guess they learned something new….pumpkins will float, hence, a dead give-a-way.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, a silver lining for them – they learned something new! 🙂

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  8. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    I love that you found a picture of this. Seems like the two guys should have put some more thought into their thieving plans first. Great write!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They’re not the smartest! Found whole webpages about pumpkins floating – who knew?! 🙂

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      1. mandibelle16 Avatar
        mandibelle16

        It’s really neat 🙂

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  9. Joyfrida Avatar

    Very nice Iain. interesting take on the prompt 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy, I set myself the challenge of fitting it in to Halloween celebrations as it’s that time of year here.

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      1. Joyfrida Avatar

        Lol we don’t celebrate Halloween, I should google more about it and figure out the obsession with pumpkins haha

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  10. Dahlia Avatar

    A fun write Iain 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks 🙂

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  11. rosemawrites Avatar

    a clever and fun take to the photo! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks 🙂

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  12. creatingahome Avatar

    They are a silly set of thieves.
    Very poor observation on their part.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They are not the brightest. Thanks for reading 🙂

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  13. sailajaP14 Avatar

    Love your narrative. Subtle humour…the most appealing kind! 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks I do prefer subtle rather than broad humour, glad you appreciate it!

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  14. Nam H Nguyen Avatar

    I enjoyed that humour immensely!
    A good laugh

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Nam 🙂

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  15. momtheobscure Avatar

    Great halloween story. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, wanted to do Halloween bit not obviously so, think it worked 🙂

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