THE DYING LIGHT

My life gatheredย round.

Eve, the passionate glowing flames, lightening the dark.

Martha and Olivia, flickering young embers floating playfully.

Mother and father, wisps of smoke dissipating.

The campfire warmth fades.

A life that burned brightly ends.

The coldย shadow ofย night envelops.

Farewell, sweet Earth. I drift away.


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Written for the Scottish Book Trustโ€™s monthly 50-word Fiction competition. Write a story in 50 words or less based on a photo prompt โ€“ this monthโ€™s task was to write a story featuring a camp fire. More informationย HERE

8 responses to “THE DYING LIGHT”

  1. Thank you for following my blog. As a result I found your lovely fiction.
    And you’ve gathered it together for a self-published book — Much more energy than I have!
    This dying firelight writing is so evocative. Good work.

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    1. You are very kind indeed! From your blog it looks like you have plenty of energy. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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  2. […] got the prompt for this one from Iain Kelly’s blog. He wrote a 50 word story based on the photo above in response to the Scottish Book Trust’s […]

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  3. More poetic than your usual writing. I decided to write my own bit of fiction and enter it. I’m not particularly interesting in winning anything, I just like to write.

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    1. Same here James, it’s another prompt and a different challenge in just the 50 words. I was at a bit of a loss so decided to try something a bit different. Not sure if it’s particularly good, but I enjoyed the change.

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  4. Gorgeous writing. It’s very poetic ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks, not too confident with poetry, I know you write a lot of it so I’m pleased you liked this ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. I very much do ๐Ÿ™‚ Great job ๐Ÿ˜Š

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