BUT THERE WAS A CRIMINAL

~ Iain Kelly

He felt broken. Battered. Alone.

No one believed him.

There was no body.

But there was a criminal.

Out there. A murderer.

He was sure of it.

Someone had to deliver justice.

Him.

Written as part of #MicroMondays, hosted by Varad over at Loose End Of The Thread. For more information and to join in visit HERE.

Each week we are given a set word count for a piece of micro fiction, and a quote from a book that must be included in the story. This week’s quote to be included was ‘But there was a criminal’ and the word count was 33.

Read other stories based on the prompt HERE.

Published by Iain Kelly

38 year old, avid film viewer and book reader, employed in the media industry.

20 thoughts on “BUT THERE WAS A CRIMINAL”

  1. The MC is all alone without clues or evidence and only his instincts with him. That desperation would make for a great story arc. The staccato sentences add a lot to the scene as well. Good one, Iain. Glad to have you onboard with #MicroMondays.

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  3. Pingback: BUT THERE WAS A CRIMINAL — Iain Kelly | O LADO ESCURO DA LUA

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