IAIN KELLY

MOLLY

She stood at the window looking out at the harbour.

They told her to give up. They told her there was no hope. Years had gone by.

They’d lost her Molly once before when she wandered off into the woods and didn’t return. She was found the next day in her bivouac of branches and leaves. Molly laughed at her parents’ worrying, ‘I’ll always come home,’ she smiled.

If only she had stopped her. But she could never say no to Molly, never bring herself to restrain that natural joy of life, that spirit of adventure.

Now she had lost her husband, her looks, her job. She refused to lose her Molly.

The traditional lighthouse at the end of the sea wall had gone, replaced by a metal abomination. Around their small house modern hotels crowded in. The cargo ships grew larger every year.

Still she waited and each time a sail appeared her heart would beat a little faster. Each time another little part of her crumbled.

They had never found any wreckage of Molly’s boat.

A small sailboat rounded the wall, tacking against the breeze. Her Molly would come home one day. She had promised she always would.


2018-11-november-26th-2017
Copyright A Mixed Bag

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36 responses to “MOLLY”

  1. JS Brand Avatar

    A very moving piece Iain, beautifully told.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you JS.

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      1. JS Brand Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar

    I felt myself waiting with her.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, a great compliment.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        You’re most welcome. I loved your story.

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  3. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Incredible story.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  4. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Hope keeps people going ….

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Even when to others it seems all is lost.

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  5. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    Just the thought of the waiting mother makes me sad. I wonder where Molly is.
    Beautifully written.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Moon.

      Like

  6. Susan Avatar

    A truly heartwarming tale. A mother never gives up on her child.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Susan.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Maggie C Avatar

    So sad. I could imagine being that mother.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Maggie. I do hope no one ever has to go through something like that, but of course there are those that do.

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  8. James Avatar

    I hope she does but so many small boats go down without a trace, another of the sea’s mysteries.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks James.

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  9. Fandango Avatar

    A sad, moving story.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  10. ceayr Avatar

    Very, very good, Iain, superb construction, powerful pathos

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE, appreciated.

      Like

  11. PamelaS.Canepa, Writing and Living Avatar

    I can almost feel her heartbreak. Well-done, Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Pamela

      Like

  12. Mikemike Avatar
    Mikemike

    I am looking forward to the stories which develop out of this prompt. Great start Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Mike

      Like

  13. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Very beautifully have you etched the pain of the waiting and wailing mother.

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  14. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I knew our great minds would think alike one day! Nice one Iain
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  15. patriciaruthsusan Avatar

    This story really tugs at the heart, Iain. Such good writing —- Suzanne

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Suzanne

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  16. Sunday Fiction Avatar

    Wow. That was a really moving story Iain. The constant hope through the every changing environment.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Such a sad one. I get this image of this woman waiting, suspended in time almost, waiting for Molly to come home despite the ship wreck. I can even picture her as a ghost 100 years later, still waiting. Great writing Ian your stories just get better and better every time I pop over for a read. Hope you are well and that you are your family enjoy the holidays. Cheers

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much Mandi, such a nice thing to say! I hope they are getting better. Hope you are well and are looking forward to the holidays too. I must find the time to catch up on your blog too πŸ™‚

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      1. mandibelle16 Avatar
        mandibelle16

        Thanks Ian. It’s true you know πŸ™‚

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