IAIN KELLY

LIVING IT UP AT THE HOTEL INFERNO

Frank opened his door, bleary-eyed, towel over shoulder, wash bag in hand.

The queue for the bathroom stretched down the corridor, the usual faces. He nodded to a few as he walked past and reached the end of the line.

Hot cobbles burned the souls of his feet, singeing the flesh. Others swayed from side-to-side shifting their weight from one foot to the other, trying to bring a modicum of relief.

‘Taking longer than usual today,’ Frank said to the woman in front after five minutes.

‘Newcomer,’ she replied, gesturing to the bathroom door.

After an endless wait, the door opened. A woman exited. As she drew nearer, Frank recognised her.

‘Helen,’ he called out. ‘You’re here?’

‘Oh, hi Frank.’ his wife looked surprised. ‘You’ve been here all these years?’

Frank shrugged, ‘That’s what I get. A lifetime on the 2nd floor of the Hotel Inferno.’

‘It’s horrible here,’ Helen sighed.

‘Could be worse, one up, the ‘Gluttony’ floor, they don’t even get a shower. But how did you end up on the ‘Lust’ floor?’

The door next to Frank opened. He turned and looked into the face of his best friend, Brian.

Helen shuffled off down the corridor.


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Copyright J. Hardy Carroll

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.

To read more stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

The first part of Dante’s Divine Comedy, Inferno, splits Hell into 9 levels of increasing sin. Level 2 is ‘Lust,’ where the adulterers go, Level 3 is ‘Gluttony,’ and so on: Wikipedia.

37 responses to “LIVING IT UP AT THE HOTEL INFERNO”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Loved this Iain. I’m looking forward to reading more contributions when I’ve done mine.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  2. quiall Avatar

    Hahaha Karma’s a bitch! Loved it!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Any rooms going on Voluptuousness floor? No? Oh well.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not heard of that floor, perhaps it’s in the planned extension. Sounds fun 🙂

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  4. cynthiamvoss Avatar

    I almost felt sorry for Frank before realizing he was sent there too!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yep, sounds like it was complicated 🙂

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  5. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Hell, yeah …. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Reena 🙂

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  6. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Dante had a vivid imagination. The seven deadly sins don’t include ignorance or selfishness. I think they could use an update.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he rolled selfishness into lust and gluttony, but your right, they could do with an update for the modern world and a few new circles need to be added.

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  7. Fandango Avatar

    Reminds me of the Hotel California. “You can check out any time you like, but you can never leave!” Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for the reblog.

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      1. OIKOS™-Redaktion Avatar

        Thank you for posting! Have a blessed week. Michael 😉

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  8. freiedenkerin Avatar

    Cool story! 🙂 Thank you for telling it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You’re welcome, thanks for reading.

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  9. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Clever idea! You had me thinking you were going for “Hell is a Never-ending Line for the Bathroom”, though, LOL!

    Even without the other man getting involved there’s something truly sad about a man asking his *wife* how she got onto the “lust” floor of hell!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I guess he wasn’t very good at understanding her up on Earth!

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      1. Joy Pixley Avatar

        Nope — and too bad for him. Since he was apparently lusty himself, they could have had a better time together! 😉

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  10. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Wow. How do you think of these things? Nice one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Janet. I just thought who might be staying behind the doors in the picture, and why would they be there.

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  11. EagleAye Avatar

    Haha! And now we see why the marriage failed. I have a feeling her stay at Hotel Inferno will be just a little bit worse living on the same floor with her ex and his boyfriend. Good one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It may be a bit awkward, especially as they are there for eternity… 🙂

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  12. ahtdoucette Avatar

    Wow, what a great story. I love the ending and the idea that they are now stuck together forever. It all feels very appropriate. Also, I like the Hotel California association, assuming that’s on purpose. Nicely told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, yeah, the title was on purpose just as an extra little joke 🙂

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  13. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Very creative idea and so detailed I could imagine the scene. Hell is a long line for the bathroom!

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  14. ceayr Avatar

    Great concept. Iain.
    I am wondering if that cad Brian had something to do with Frank’s premature demise.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There’s a lot of history between them. He can’t have killed him or he’d be on a different level of Hell, but perhaps he just didn’t stop an accident happening…

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  15. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Wow, that was brilliantly imaginative. Loved it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, much appreciated.

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  16. JS Brand Avatar

    Great take on the prompt. Sounds like they could do with space between them – are there separate sections for ‘requited lust and ‘unrequited lust’ ? Sounds like Frank was used to being turned down.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think unrequited get off a little easier – maybe they get an ensuite 🙂

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  17. Sally Avatar

    Great story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sally 🙂

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