Frank opened his door, bleary-eyed, towel over shoulder, wash bag in hand.
The queue for the bathroom stretched down the corridor, the usual faces. He nodded to a few as he walked past and reached the end of the line.
Hot cobbles burned the souls of his feet, singeing the flesh. Others swayed from side-to-side shifting their weight from one foot to the other, trying to bring a modicum of relief.
‘Taking longer than usual today,’ Frank said to the woman in front after five minutes.
‘Newcomer,’ she replied, gesturing to the bathroom door.
After an endless wait, the door opened. A woman exited. As she drew nearer, Frank recognised her.
‘Helen,’ he called out. ‘You’re here?’
‘Oh, hi Frank.’ his wife looked surprised. ‘You’ve been here all these years?’
Frank shrugged, ‘That’s what I get. A lifetime on the 2nd floor of the Hotel Inferno.’
‘It’s horrible here,’ Helen sighed.
‘Could be worse, one up, the ‘Gluttony’ floor, they don’t even get a shower. But how did you end up on the ‘Lust’ floor?’
The door next to Frank opened. He turned and looked into the face of his best friend, Brian.
Helen shuffled off down the corridor.

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Al Forbes. For more details visit HERE.
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The first part of Dante’s Divine Comedy, Inferno, splits Hell into 9 levels of increasing sin. Level 2 is ‘Lust,’ where the adulterers go, Level 3 is ‘Gluttony,’ and so on: Wikipedia.
37 responses to “LIVING IT UP AT THE HOTEL INFERNO”
Loved this Iain. I’m looking forward to reading more contributions when I’ve done mine.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Hahaha Karma’s a bitch! Loved it!
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Thank you 🙂
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Any rooms going on Voluptuousness floor? No? Oh well.
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Not heard of that floor, perhaps it’s in the planned extension. Sounds fun 🙂
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I almost felt sorry for Frank before realizing he was sent there too!
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Yep, sounds like it was complicated 🙂
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Hell, yeah …. 🙂
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Thanks Reena 🙂
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Dante had a vivid imagination. The seven deadly sins don’t include ignorance or selfishness. I think they could use an update.
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I think he rolled selfishness into lust and gluttony, but your right, they could do with an update for the modern world and a few new circles need to be added.
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Reminds me of the Hotel California. “You can check out any time you like, but you can never leave!” Nicely done.
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thanks for the reblog.
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Thank you for posting! Have a blessed week. Michael 😉
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Cool story! 🙂 Thank you for telling it.
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You’re welcome, thanks for reading.
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Clever idea! You had me thinking you were going for “Hell is a Never-ending Line for the Bathroom”, though, LOL!
Even without the other man getting involved there’s something truly sad about a man asking his *wife* how she got onto the “lust” floor of hell!
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I guess he wasn’t very good at understanding her up on Earth!
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Nope — and too bad for him. Since he was apparently lusty himself, they could have had a better time together! 😉
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Wow. How do you think of these things? Nice one.
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Thank you Janet. I just thought who might be staying behind the doors in the picture, and why would they be there.
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Haha! And now we see why the marriage failed. I have a feeling her stay at Hotel Inferno will be just a little bit worse living on the same floor with her ex and his boyfriend. Good one!
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It may be a bit awkward, especially as they are there for eternity… 🙂
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Wow, what a great story. I love the ending and the idea that they are now stuck together forever. It all feels very appropriate. Also, I like the Hotel California association, assuming that’s on purpose. Nicely told.
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Thank you, yeah, the title was on purpose just as an extra little joke 🙂
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Very creative idea and so detailed I could imagine the scene. Hell is a long line for the bathroom!
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Great concept. Iain.
I am wondering if that cad Brian had something to do with Frank’s premature demise.
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There’s a lot of history between them. He can’t have killed him or he’d be on a different level of Hell, but perhaps he just didn’t stop an accident happening…
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Wow, that was brilliantly imaginative. Loved it.
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Great take on the prompt. Sounds like they could do with space between them – are there separate sections for ‘requited lust and ‘unrequited lust’ ? Sounds like Frank was used to being turned down.
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I think unrequited get off a little easier – maybe they get an ensuite 🙂
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Great story.
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Thank you Sally 🙂
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