IAIN KELLY

EMBERS

Specks of dancing light floated through the dark sky, borne from the dying fire.

There was no more firewood in the barren mountain landscape. It would not take long for the cold to achieve its conquest.

Phillips had no choice but to move, to stay in the same place was to die.

How much more of this could they take? They were no longer young, yet they were playing a young man’s game. He belonged behind a desk back home with nights spent in a comfortable bed.

Somewhere out there, a half-day ahead of him, his quarry lurked. The landscape was different to Berlin or Moscow, where their paths had crossed before, but the objective was still the same: kill or be killed. They were old enough to know that what happened between them changed nothing in the world, but they played anyway.

He stamped on the remaining embers until the fire was extinguished. Once more unto the breach, dear friend, once more.

This time only one of them would return home.


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Copyright Enisa

Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story or poem in around 150 – 175 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

To read other stories based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Previous short stories featuring the British spy Phillips can be found here: THE PHILLIPS SPY STORIES.

44 responses to “EMBERS”

  1. Silent Hour Avatar

    Great, as always.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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      1. Silent Hour Avatar

        You welcome. I really enjoy your stories.

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  2. James Avatar

    If his opponent is as poor a woodsman as he, then maybe no one goes home.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They are both city dwellers out of their natural element, so always a possibility, although I never said he was a poor woodsman.

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      1. James Avatar

        Your story seemed to imply both of them were experts in urban settings and that currently both were out of their element. If he can’t find enough wood to burn for a fire at night, he could freeze depending on how low the temps got, and no amount of moving would save him.

        This might be a story worth expanding to explore how they both got into this situation and what they had to do to survive (assuming both did).

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Thanks James, getting round to writing a ‘full-length’ story for Phillips is definitely on the to-do list at some point.

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  3. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar

    I enjoyed this story. I too would love to know the back story as to why older men find themselves out in the cold (although that is where spies usually are) in a rural setting instead of a city one. Which one will survive? I wonder…..

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks for your interest Irene.

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  4. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    Now i am waiting to know their backstories. Wonderfully written. Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Neel

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  5. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Great story! There’s this brilliant sense of history and finality – it feels like an excerpt from a bigger story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, the concluding chapter to a long running rivalry for sure.

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  6. Fandango Avatar

    Ah, the old spy versus spy encounter. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A classic setup indeed.

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  7. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    Great story telling. This is such an open prompt.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It is indeed, there should be a wide variety of stories this week 🙂

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  8. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Equations change out in the wild… but what a game to play!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It does sound like an adventure 🙂

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  9. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    This reads like a teaser for a bigger story! I want more…!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Keith, I’ll let you know when I’ve thought of the rest!

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  10. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    It is no fun these days being a spy. I think the lack of heat is the least of their troubles. Especially if the Beast from the East turns up.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s not the job it used to be. Thanks Michael.

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  11. Joy Pixley Avatar

    Great job getting across the desperation, and also the sad futility of the quest.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Joy

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  12. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Oh dear! A game of kill or be killed! Doesn’t sound like this is going to end very well. Great story, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks PJ, no it’s going to end badly for at least one of them!

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  13. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    You are so talented. I enjoyed the suspense and mystery, left me wanting more! =)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You are very kind! Thank you Brenda

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  14. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Oooh, on lines of Jason Bourne vs The Jackal.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, love the Bourne films and The Day of the Jackal is a fabulous book, so I like this comment 🙂

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      1. anuragbakhshi Avatar

        Ha ha, I was actually referring to the original Robert Ludlum books featuring Jason Bourne. His arch-enemy/ bete noire in that trilogy was Carlos the Jackal 🙂

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        I’ve only seen the films, the books have passed me by somehow, maybe I should go back to them.

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      3. anuragbakhshi Avatar

        They’re nowhere like the films. Only the basic premise is the same, everything else was changed in the movies, and that too only in the first one. The second and third movies were just named after the books, but had ZERO similarity to their source.

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  15. Anagha Yatin Avatar
    Anagha Yatin

    Is that going to be the survival of the fittest or just a matter of mind strength? Oh this could well turn into a sequel and I would love to know the prequel as well…
    Great story Ian!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Anagha 🙂

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  16. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    So good. I hope Phillips makes it to his desk job. Great sense of age catching up and the tug of war between equally matched adversaries.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Sarah Ann.

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  17. goroyboy Avatar

    Very compelling Iain! The ultimate “game”

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  18. Ellespeth Avatar

    ! These days old spies aren’t having a happy ending…well done.
    I’m chuckling over here cuz I’m just realizing it’s a photo of a camp fire!
    Ellespeth

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yeah, it was a bit of an obscure photo 🙂

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  19. jacquelineobyikocha Avatar

    Intense and exciting.

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