FAMILY REMAINS

After Dad had passed away, it fell to Dave to empty out the family home.

In the garden shed, Dave looked at the collection of oil cans. There was no use for them now and they weren’t worth anything.

He picked up one and opened the lid. There wasn’t oil inside, it was something else.

He put his hand in and felt the cold objects. He pulled out a human finger.

One after another he looked inside the oil cans.

Best to dispose of these and not mention it again, he thought, adding them to the skip outside.


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Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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106 responses to “FAMILY REMAINS”

  1. Thumbs up Dave – a wise move!

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    1. 🙂 excellent comment Keith 🙂

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  2. Sorry Dad, I think my curiosity would have gotten the better of me and I’d have to call the authorities. If Dave didn’t spend at least a little time going through the missing persons reports, just to see, I would think he is awfully dull…

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    1. Perhaps he was of the mind that it was too late to help these people now…!

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      1. Much too late! But I’d still be curious….

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  3. There are some things you just don’t want to know about your relatives

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  4. Dear Iain,

    After reading the story and taking a second look at the title, I nearly choked on my coffee. Very well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you Rochelle, apologies if you spilled the coffee 😉

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  5. Skeletons – or body parts – in the closet? Best kept shut! Good, grisly story, Iain.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  6. At the beginning, I never imagined the end. Some things are better left in their oil cans, buried and forgotten. =)

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    1. Exactly, pretend it never happened!

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  7. Okay, eww! I was hoping for money…silly me, I should have remembered who was writing this story!

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    1. Not so lucky as money I’m afraid 🙂

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  8. I’m going to assume that Dave is in shock and denial, which is why he didn’t rush outside to throw up. ‘Cause I sure felt like it!

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    1. Definitely denial! 🙂

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  9. Errie stuff! Dad had a second life filled with death. I’d just dispose of them too.

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    1. Yup, best to just carry on as though you never saw that! 😉

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  10. So, veins of ice were passed on from father to son? Yikes!
    Good one, Iain!

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    1. Or just plain denial! 🙂

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      1. Denial ain’t just an icy river in Egypt, ya know…

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  11. He wasn’t horrified? Throwing up? Running out of the building in fear?

    Cold-hearted dude. I hope he doesn’t have any empty oil cans of his own.

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    1. Maybe that’s why he took it so calmly…

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  12. Well, sir, that was creepy! Now I must go down to the basement and look inside the oil cans I brought home after my father died.

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    1. Oh, erm, about that….! 😉

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    1. I’m never looking in an oilcan again!

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  13. Oh Man! I thought for sure he would find some money, but should know with you to expect the unexpected! 🙂

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    1. I’m not that lucky to find money lying about 🙂

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    I hope that there are no oil drums in the outhouse,🙂

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  15. Well, dad sure led a rather interesting life… One can only imagine what other bits he might’ve collected.

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    1. Best not imagine! 🙂

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  16. Oh my! One does wonder, are these ‘family’ remains or remains collected by family … yikes!

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    1. A mixture of both perhaps?

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  17. it was strange what his dad collected. did he work in a morgue or something?

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    1. That could be one explanation, or…

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  18. Ha ha ha, loved it to bits…and pieces! And what an amazing title 🙂

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    1. Thank you 🙂 I do like the title too!

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  19. Pickle out of human organs? Preserving in oil?

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  20. Probably best to leave Dad’s dark side buried. Along with the rest of his victims…

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    1. Yes, best just pretend it never happened…

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  21. That’s taking family loyalty right to the outer limits. Good one.

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    1. Thanks Sandra. Blood is thicker than oil 😉

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  22. What a morbid tale. Shivers me spine it do. heheh!

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  23. Hmmm … it looks like my comment went into one of those oil cans.
    If I commented and it needs approval then you’ll have two. Who doesn’t love two of anything??!!
    Well, goodie that I am I’d call the authorities so they could connect the parts to whoever they belong to. Since dad is gone he can’t be arrested. He was a creepy dad. Hope he wasn’t creepy with his family. An interesting story with a bit of gruesome sprinkles on top.
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Thanks Isadora, especially for persisting to make your comment! 🙂

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  24. Such a chilling tale! You weren’t kidding Iain, I think we may have written about the same twisted family.

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  25. Every dad should have a hobby, and I agree that it is not a son’s place to interfere.

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    1. I knew you’d understand.

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  26. Brilliant title and I’m with him… best just walk away after disposal… or just walk away.
    Who wants to find out stuff like that about their kin?

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    1. Yep, some things our parents did are best left unknown 😉

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  27. He must know something about his father which makes this discovery less than surprising. Hope no e of them looked familiar. By the way, where’s mom?

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    1. Good question, no one’s seen her for a while…

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  28. OMG creepy as
    Great piece
    Undiscovered family secrets best left buried… at least hidden

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    1. Some things you just don’t want to know about your parents…!

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  29. Oh, Dad. First I thought it was his treasures. They were: just not the treasures one hopes to find. Nice piece, Iain

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    1. No, you think he could’ve just left them some money instead!

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  30. I’m thinking they always knew something was special about dear old dad.. Very nice write.

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    1. They may have had their suspicions!

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  31. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!
    Wonder if it was all of one person or a number of ones!!!!

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    1. That’s a good question – someone will have to count the fingers…!

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  32. Probably a wise move, but he’ll never be able to forget.

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    1. It’s not something you can wish away!

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  33. It appears Dad was quite the collector. Perhaps he worked for the mob and liked to keep souvenirs.

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    1. Obviously something he liked to be reminded of anyway…

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  34. We can only imagine what Dad got up to in that shed! Or perhaps we don’t want to imagine…

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  35. Oh those family secrets, best remain secret. It looks like he a finger in every oil well! I am left wondering what else he got up to?

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    1. Well yes, this could just be the tip of the iceberg…or finger…!

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  36. Some people hoard everything but a dismembered finger is a bit of a gobsmacker! Creepy and nauseous, Iain. Excellent!

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    1. Everyone needs a hobby! 😉

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  37. There is a secret best buried with dear old dad. Nicely done Iain.

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  38. Grim, what a horrible find, I’d be inclined to run away very quickly, his Dad was a mentalist

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    1. Maybe it ran in the family…

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  39. I wonder if Dave knew about this side of his father. If not, this would probably make him question everything he thought he knew about Dad. Scary, thought provoking story.

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  40. Dad was quite the collector. Loved the matter-of-fact way the story is told.

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  41. No stain on dad’s legacy then… those little mementos are always those that end up capturing them in the end though

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    1. They have to have a souvenir that gives them away! 🙂

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  42. I can not imagine what I would do!
    And that is part of the fun of your story.
    Thanks Lain.

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    1. Thank you Dawn, it’s a difficult one. I would like to pretend I hadn’t seen it, but I think I would have to report it!

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  43. Well done Iain – Something Nasty in the Woodshed’ part 2 ! I started to imagine what colour the fingers were, did they smell ? That was enough creepiness. Am part through ‘An Altered State – think it is a very good read. Well done.

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    1. Thank you, and thanks for giving the book a read, hope you continue to enjoy it, and do give me a review at the end 🙂

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  44. Well, yikes. You just never know what someone’s been up to!

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    1. We all have our secrets…!

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      1. Some are a little scarier than others! 🙂

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  45. Seems that ole dad had a little secret! Great read Iain!

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  46. Its amazing how many sinister uses a friday fictioneer can put an oil can to! Slick and disturbing Iain, well done. 🙂

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    1. Yes, I noticed that too, a lot of murder and death from the humble oil can.

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