Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

THE SOURCE

It started with the dead fish floating in the river.

Then the cows in the fields started to get sick and the dogs started acting wild.

Then a doctor at the local hospital started noticing the cancers.

Something wasn’t right.

It was in the water. The water that they washed in, brushed their teeth with, cleaned their clothes with and cooked with. It was in the water that they drank.

They could see the smoke stacks. Ten miles up river, billowing into the sky.

The factory employed most people in the town. We took them at their word.

We shouldn’t have.

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Copyright CE Ayr

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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75 responses to “THE SOURCE”

  1. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    An all too true tale of woe, Ian. I would like to think we are more careful about those kinds of pollutants now, but who really knows.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I think many are, but equally there will still be those who are not unfortunately. Thanks Violet.

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  2. Colline Avatar
    Colline

    Love this. A perfect start to a longer story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Colline.

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  3. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    Chilling, Iaim. And all too real

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neil

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    Reads a bit like a current new story. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Afraid so. Thanks Rochelle.

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  5. ceayr Avatar
    ceayr

    Graphic description of something that has been happening for far too long.
    And if we’re not polluting water, we pollute the air.
    Nicely grim, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      We can’t help but pollute by our very existence. It’s really a matter of limiting how much.

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  6. J Hardy Carroll Avatar
    J Hardy Carroll

    Ominous beginning. Dead fish are never a good sign.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks J Hardy

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  7. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    Pollution has taken over everything.
    This will happen in the future… a reality worldwide soon…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It has already happened in places unfortunately. Thanks Anita.

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  8. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    What a scary scenario.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      And yet all too real. Thank you

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        It is!

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  9. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    Well written, Iain, catching the progression of symptoms through which the pollution becomes known. In the interests of accuracy (I used to write and enforce environmental permits in the UK) this wouldn’t happen nowadays in the UK. There are a few places in Europe where it might, as a result of criminal activity. It could happen in the USA, although it is unlikely. There are places in China where it is reported as happening.
    In fact, UK rivers have greatly improved during the last 30 years.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thankfully times have changed, but I imagine there are a lot of developing countries where this is and will continue to occur for years to come. Thanks Penny.

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  10. Snow's Fissures and Fractures Avatar
    Snow’s Fissures and Fractures

    It sets heavy on the heart, your story. Grimly good.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you.

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  11. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    An all too commonplace occurrence in recent history, but thankfully not so much now. At least, not in the west.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Let’s hope not anyway, I’m sure there will be a new scandal along sometime soon. Thanks Sandra

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  12. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar
    neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS

    A very familiar story worldwide. Man killing man by killing Nature. Very well written Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neel

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  13. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    Very well written… I thought this was supposed to be fiction 😉
    Scary situation that should never exist but does…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It seems more often than we think. Thanks Dale, hope you had a nice break 🙂

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        So true.
        It was great and, as always, never seems long enough!

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  14. The Writer's Village Avatar
    The Writer’s Village

    and that’s way I always have an RO in my house.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Very wise

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  15. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    Chilling and all too real.

    I’ve read the first two of your “State of” books. Iain. and they are outstanding. The second was better than the first, so I’m expecting stupendous things from the third 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Linda. Interestingly, of those that have read both the books, it seems to be about 50/50 in terms of which one they prefer – so I hope that means they are both decent! Editing the final book 3 now, so hopefully it will arrive in a couple of months to finish the story! 🙂

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  16. scr4pl80 Avatar
    scr4pl80

    Just watched “Dark Waters.”

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yep, saw it a couple of weeks ago, and when this prompt came along, it brought it to mind.

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  17. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    I’m thinking Erin Brockovitch.
    This is all so possible Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yes, there have been a few films that have dealt with this sort of scenario – which makes you wonder how common it actually is…

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar
        pensitivity101

        scary.

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  18. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    That template has been stamped across the globe. Just north of me they have been clear-cutting land, bulldozing it clean, and planting acres of blueberry bushes. They saturate the land with pesticides and fertilizers which sink down into the water table. The move to the creek, which flows south, through my property, a wildlife sanctuary, going to the lake a few miles down that empties into Lake MI, where the city gets its water. All water is connected. We are doomed to the fate in your story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      We have been drinking polluted water for generations now. Let’s hope it never gets this bad!

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  19. Dawn M. Miller Avatar
    Dawn M. Miller

    Dumb-asses killing off their work force.
    Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yep, and amazingly it actually does happen! Dumb indeed.

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      1. Dawn M. Miller Avatar
        Dawn M. Miller

        All-the-time.

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  20. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    the damage has been done. i wonder how they go from here? it’s a situation that becomes too familiar nowadays.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I’m afraid so.

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  21. Tannille Avatar
    Tannille

    Million bucks on a cover up!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Obviously 😉

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  22. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    They say that water is the giver of life. Sadly that’s not always the case.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Not if humans have anything to do with it! Thanks Keith

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  23. JoHawkTheWriter Avatar
    JoHawkTheWriter

    Time to call in Erin Brockovich it seems. Trust must be earned, not given freely.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Jo

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  24. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    All too close to real-world situations. Nice one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Not really fiction at all actually.

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  25. Russell Avatar
    Russell

    It is a shame that this still happens when we have the technology to prevent it. It goes to show the power of greed. Well told Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s incredible the lengths some people and corporations will go to for sheer profit over everything else.

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  26. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Oooooo this is horribly scary and probably so very very true in many places. I think those inspections are worth their weight in gold!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      If anything the regulations should be stricter, but at least we now have them.

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  27. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Ah go to sleep now, it’s all right. The man is only writing fiction.
    And doing a darn good job of it too.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I wish it was just fiction. Thank you

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  28. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    What? The factory pumping pollutants into the air is unrepentantly responsible for environmental degradation, cancer, and death? I don’t believe it. Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Some people would still deny the obvious.

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  29. michaelwynnauthor Avatar
    michaelwynnauthor

    I can relate to this Iain. As children we lived and played near a brook that changed colour dependent on what dye the shoe factories were using that day. Looking back I think we must have been lucky not to get ill. Well told

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s incredible that communities didn’t spot these dangers sooner. Thanks Michael.

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  30. Lynn Love Avatar
    Lynn Love

    Chilling, Iain. And yet this is exactly the scenario that meets so many people across the world, affected by an industry that’s poisoning them. Well told tragedy

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Lynn, based more on fact than fiction really.

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar
        Lynn Love

        Sadly, I’m sure you’re right

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  31. Russell Gayer Avatar
    Russell Gayer

    You know what they say, never drink downstream from the herd.
    Your story has been a sad truth at many places around the world. Well told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Russell – good advice.

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  32. cathrynanne24 Avatar
    cathrynanne24

    Ooh I like it! You and I had a slightly similar theme to our stories this week.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you 🙂

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  33. susanmehr Avatar
    susanmehr

    So true, sad how the world works these days.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Susan

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  34. Cheryl McCullough Avatar
    Cheryl McCullough

    Sadly happens far too often…great story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Cheryl

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  35. magarisa Avatar
    magarisa

    Scarily realistic. Haunting images.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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