IAIN KELLY

CRABBIT

Shovelling the seaweed away, Agnes was not happy.

‘Fourth time this year,’ she muttered and threw a disgruntled stare at the waves lapping against the ineffective flood wall.

Archie pulled up in the hire van. He drove over the seaweed Agnes had spent the last hour gathering into one neat pile.

‘Next lot ready?’ he called, and saw Agnes glaring at him.

‘It was.’

Not for the first time, Archie wondered what he had done to upset her.

A bewildered crab scuttled in front of Agnes, searching for a way back to the rock pools. She prodded it on its way with a mutter.

What a year.


Copyright Sandra Crook

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this weekโ€™s prompt, visit HERE.

The continuing adventures of Agnes and Archie can be found HERE.

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70 responses to “CRABBIT”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    I loved the crab

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neil, it seems to have gone down well…

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  2. Tannille Avatar

    He’s sleeping on the couch tonight ๐Ÿ˜€. Enjoyed this story, the crab was a nice touch.

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  3. ceayr Avatar

    Drat!
    I liked the crab too!

    PS Have you gone all American with Forth, or is it a subtle pun for the Leithites?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think it might have been an autocorrect US dictionary thing. Lots of love for the crab ๐Ÿ™‚

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    2. Dale Avatar

      Even the Americans write fourth…

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  4. Sandra Avatar

    Yep, loving the crab. Nice touch.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Who’s the bigger crab I wonder? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved the “prod.”

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Susan A Eames Avatar

    Oh dear, different perspectives. I felt for all of them – including the crab. Great story, Iain.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Susan

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  7. notestowomen Avatar

    They’re back. It’s great to see Archie and Agnes again. Thanks for the early morning chuckle, Iain. The crab was a nice touch ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You’re welcome. They’re never far away ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. magickmermaid Avatar

    I agree- the addition of the crab was excellent!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  9. bearmkwa Avatar
    bearmkwa

    Awesome snapshot! Love the characters. There’s more to this store I perceive. ๐Ÿ™‚
    I’m in awe that you got the picture to upload.. I keep getting “unable to upload due to security issues). Won’t download to my desktop, either. Grrr…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    Do they have a dog house? He best get his sleeping bag ready … ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Indeed, quite a year, eh?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It can only get better next year, I think…

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

        hope springs eternal … ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  11. granonine Avatar

    The crab was a wonderful bit of humor in a tense situation ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks – a lot of love for the crab today!

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      1. granonine Avatar

        It was a masterful stroke ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. Elizabeth Young Avatar

    At least he’s transporting it away, but I get why she’s crabby!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A lot of folk are after this year. Thanks Liz

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  13. Mary Shipman Avatar

    I got the picture, Lucky crab!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. Eugenia Parrish Author Avatar

    Good snapshot of a relationship. I suspect it won’t get better unless the weather does.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It does flow with the seasons. Thanks Eugenia

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  15. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    What a year indeed! I like the portrait.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you. Here’s to 2021!

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  16. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A typical white van man! It’s a good year for crabs I’m told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I’m glad someone is having a good year! Thanks Keith

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  17. Psychic-Medium-Author Ronda Del Boccio Avatar

    Aye, what a year indeed! That would be enough to make anybody crabbit.
    Ronda

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Ronda

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  18. Dale Avatar

    Love this…From the title down to the escapee!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dale ๐Ÿ™‚

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  19. Dora Avatar

    Neil,
    Frustration in a nutshell! But then there’s always perspective from a scuttling crab . . . !

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  20. plaridel Avatar

    when wives get crabby and they do, husbands don’t always have a clue. facts of life. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks – very true!

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  21. pennygadd51 Avatar

    I liked Agnes’s compassion for the crab, helping it on its way with a mutter. It must be very wearing constantly cleaning and repairing after flooding.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Penny

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  22. draliman Avatar

    Oh, Archie… Flooding seems to happen more and more frequently these days.
    Swayed by public opinion, I feel I must mention that I loved the crab ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I may have to bring the crab back, he’s been so popular!

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  23. Anita Avatar

    Crabs and seaweed have had their own freedom this year.
    Hope 2021 will grant us ours…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – me too!

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  24. subroto Avatar

    Ha! Ha! Archie is sleeping in the dog house and I too loved that crab.

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  25. Danny James Avatar

    Sounds like our New Orleans. One hurricane after another.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not quite so bad here, but we get a fair share of storms coming in off the Atlantic.

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  26. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar

    It looks like the crab got the worse of it.
    Mmmm … could he be next? ~~~ : – )
    Have a great day โ€ฆ Be Safe
    Isadora ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not the crab! Thanks Isadora ๐Ÿ™‚

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  27. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Great story. I love the crab.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  28. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    I think Archie might want to scuttle right after the crab. It seems like a good time to go into hiding.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Best to stay out her way, you’re right!

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  29. msjadeli Avatar

    What a year indeed! I echo Rochelle’s comment about who was the bigger crab. Good, realistic story.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  30. robprice59 Avatar
    robprice59

    A clever take on the photo Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  31. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh Archie! Sounds like this is a happenstance that occurs often.
    And I love the crab

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie ๐Ÿ™‚

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  32. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    Poor crab. Got the worst of Agnes’s mood.

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  33. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Iain, this was wonderful! I was going to say simply wonderful, but there isn’t anything simple about it. This feels like heart. Just wow.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha ๐Ÿ™‚

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