Heading downtown, with a one way ticket out of here. Nothing left for me in this one-horse town. It’s time to go and find my fortune elsewhere. This is my destiny.

‘Yo, Mikey!’

Who’s that at the window? Julie? Man, she is hot, even in tracksuit bottoms and wet hair.

‘Hey, Julie.’

‘Where you headin’?’

‘Nowhere.’

‘You be at Finky’s on Friday night?’

Her sweet freshly-washed scent wafts down. I see her blossoming through the years we have known each other. I feel that eternal hope she might feel the same way about me.

‘Sure.’

‘See you there.’

‘Definitely.’

New destiny. I’ll hang around this one-horse town a week longer.

Copyright Alicia Jamtaas

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58 responses to “HE NEVER LEFT”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    Destiny is so much more plastic than it used to be in the days of Homer. Nice one, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A flexible attitude to destiny might not be a bad thing.

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  2. Sandra Avatar

    One more week then. Worth giving it a shot, I guess. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      No rush to be going anywhere. Thanks Sandra.

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  3. Tannille Avatar

    He’s smitten. Or maybe he likes the chase?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Smitten for sure. Thanks!

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    The town might have only one horse, but it also has that one special girl. Nice.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

      Like

  5. creatingahome Avatar

    Sweet.
    But he is too fickle in my opinion.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Easily swayed when it comes to fate, for sure!

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  6. Snow's Fissures and Fractures Avatar

    Guess there is always one more road to travel. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  7. elmowrites Avatar

    Shoot your shot, Mikey. You never know!

    Sweet story, I like the hope you’ve sown here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks so much 😊

      Like

  8. msjadeli Avatar

    Following one’s path depends on being able to read the signs. He’s right where he needs to be. Really good writing, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 😊

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome, Iain.

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  9. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Sorry Julie but I think that in the longer term he will still leave town§

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The title suggest otherwise though

      Like

  10. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Ah, the siren call caught him midstride, at least for another week. You never know, it might have been for the best.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think it may well be. Thank you.

      Like

  11. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Just one more night… Good stuff

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Might as well give it a shot

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  12. Bill Avatar

    One must be flexible, especially in one horse towns. I vote to see Julie at least one more time.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Your vote is noted 😉

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  13. plaridel Avatar

    hopefully it would be for keeps. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A fair chance I think.

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  14. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Such a sweet story. It left me smiling.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Excellent, thank you Dawn

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  15. granonine Avatar

    When destiny smells sweet and looks hot, it’s a good idea to rethink goals 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true! Thanks Linda

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  16. CGraith Avatar

    Cute! I hear the voices by the tone of your words.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  17. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    A change of plan, I hope he’ll be Julie rewarded! (pardon the pun!)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      From you, all puns are accepted!

      Like

  18. Danny James Avatar

    It will be worth it to wait around.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Here’s hoping so.

      Like

  19. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

    Lovely! She should open her eyes, and … he should, perhaps, speak up! 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They’ll get there eventually!

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar

        Yep! One hopes in this lifetime! 😉

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  20. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Destiny can be fickle, can’t she?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Especially if one decides to make one’s own.

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  21. Liz Young Avatar

    Love is a powerful thing, even if unrequited.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  22. authorfleurl Avatar

    I hope waiting around a week is worth it. Nicely done, Iain.

    Liked by 1 person

      1. authorfleurl Avatar

        You are welcome 🙂

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  23. poetisatinta Avatar

    I can see romance blooming 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 Thank you

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  24. Liam Avatar

    To quote Good Will Hunting: “I gotta see about a girl.”

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      1. Liam Avatar

        Yes! I love it.

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  25. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Yeah, might work out for him. Fingers crossed!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Hope so 🙂

      Like

  26. athling2001 Avatar

    Well done. I hope things work out for them.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  27. britcanwrites Avatar

    Hopefully it works out with Julie. Nice one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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