REVENGE

Looking down on the busy street below, he watched the tourists gather under the café umbrellas.

He resented their presence – the noise, the litter – but most of all their happiness. Happiness had always been denied to him, stuck in his small corner room.

Today was the day he would gain his revenge against the world.

He stood at the window, armed and ready. He opened it a fraction, just enough to make his aim sure and true. Then he squeezed the trigger.

The screams and squeals filled him with joy as the people below ran to escape the water jet that soaked them from above.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

From this Friday, for one week, my first three novels will be available on Amazon Kindle for just 99p each in the UK, and in the US ‘State of Denial’ and ‘State of War’ will be only $0.99 each. I hope some of you get a chance to check them out if you enjoy a good political thriller, mystery and intrigue!

The State Trilogy and The Barra Boy available now.

All We Cannot Leave Behind coming February 2024.

58 responses to “REVENGE”

  1. You never disappoint! Loved it.

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  2. Brilliant! Reminds me of the time we collected for our boss’s birthday and bought him a bubble gun. He had great fun doing just this from the upstairs window of the office.

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    1. Ha, that sounds like a fun day at work 🙂

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      1. He had a blast, and we still managed to get the work done!

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  3. Nice twist! If you can’t be ’em, join ’em! More problems should be solved this way, eh?

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    1. If only this was how everyone conducted their wars and diplomacy!

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  4. Dear Iain,

    What a fun misdirect that was! 😀 With all the mass shootings happening this was refreshing.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Many thanks Rochelle 🙂

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  5. A rather benign revenge compared to some.

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    1. Indeed, perhaps it could start a new trend.

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  6. Thank goodness it’s only a water jet. You had me going there, but now I’m thinking it’s a child who has been cruelly trapped in his bedroom for an hour without electronics!
    Jen

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    1. Ha, no child could survive such torture! 🙂

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    A fine misdirection, and at least the street got washed free of litter

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  8. Geez, Iain, you had my heart racing for a minute there! What a relief it was only water 🙂

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  9. Nice twist, I wasn’t expecting that! Good stuff Sir

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  10. Geeez Iain, the way my heart was in my throat for the build up only to reach that last line! What a relief. Nicely designed tension.

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  11. Oooh you are so good at surprise endings! This one made my heart stop for a minute at what was coming and then breathed a sigh of relief and laughed!

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    1. Glad I caught you out 🙂

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  12. what a relief! i didn’t expect that. 🙂

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  13. Nice misdirect there. I was getting a bit worried. 🙂

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  14. Fantastic twist! I thought this story was going to turn fatal.

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  15. Oh my gosh, thank goodness!

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  16. Thank goodness it was just s water gun! How fun.

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  17. You got me with that one Iain great twist 😄

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  18. And that, my friend, is what we call a perfect curve ball. Nicely pitched!

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  19. I didn’t see that coming!

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  20. Thank *goodness* for water pistols. You got me on that one and I’m glad.

    Just bought books 2 & 3, so I’m all set for after I read book 1. Good deal, Iain!

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    1. Oh, amazing, thanks so much for buying and hope you enjoy! 🙂

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      1. I hope to read them in 2024. You’re welcome.

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  21. Now, we know why they had those large umbrellas in the street. Great twist!

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  22. Very clever, I went on a roller coaster of emotions, imagined the worst which is all too much the reality these day in the USA, exhaled at the twist at the end. Masterful.

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  23. I’m not a gun fan so I’m happy it was a water gun.
    Nice scare … haha

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    1. Thank you – me neither!

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  24. Phew! Triggered water from above!
    So relieved 🙂
    Personally, I still feel guilty to have indulged in throwing water-balloons on unsuspecting passers by 😦

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    1. Ha, I bet it was fun at the time! Thanks Anita

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  25. I thought it was my story at first - before the cold shower. Great take.

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