STUMBLE AND FALL

The sun was too weak to melt away the compacted ice. The pathway was pitted and rutted.

‘Like a metaphor for life,’ said Michael, as we walked along. ‘It’s only smooth for little bits here and there, the rest is stumbling your way through.’

‘Are those supposed to be words of encouragement?’ I was irritable.

‘Think of the divorce as one of those ruts you’ve got to get through. On the other side it will be smooth again.’

Helen’s boss getting his leg over her was the only ‘getting over’ I could think about right now.

Michael tried to grab my arm as he slipped and fell on the ice.

I felt oddly better.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more detailsย HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this weekโ€™s prompt, visit HERE.

My new novelย All We Cannot Leave Behindย has arrived in paperback and is available to order now from all good booksellers in the UK. The eBook edition will be available from Feb 28th for those around the world, and I’m hopeful the paperback will be available elsewhere soon too.

Here’s the moment I got to see the physical book for the first time:

The State Trilogyย andย The Barra Boyย also available now.

48 responses to “STUMBLE AND FALL”

  1. Great finale. Misery does love company

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  2. Simple pleasures to be found everywhere.โ€‚:)

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    1. Indeed they are. Thanks Sandra

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  3. Walking & slipping/falling on thin ice. Fragile relationship.

    “Getting over” is tough.

    Sad that Helen & her boss did this with him.

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  4. Nicely written and makes me want to read more.

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  5. Dear Iain,

    The last line made me laugh out loud. Like Sandra says…the simple pleasures. It’s like an old joke I remember, “happiness is the dentist telling you it won’t hurt at all, and then gets his hand caught in the drill.” ๐Ÿ˜‰

    Love the video. Cute kids. Congrats on the book.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Ha! Thanks Rochelle. They can be cute kids when they want to be! Good luck with your upcoming book too.

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  6. Like the last line – seeing someone else’s downfall shouldn’t make one feel better, butit does!

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    1. It’s amazing how it can help to know you are not alone in adversity! Thanks Liz

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  7. I would have felt oddly pleased, myself! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Nicely done, Iain.

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  8. Very good writing, Iain.โ€‚Everything falls into place seamlessly.โ€‚Congrats on your new book!

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    1. Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. You’re very welcome.

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  9. Love the kiddos. It’s a bit obvious how proud they are of their Dad.

    I enjoyed the metaphors in this story, Iain. Well written …

    Isadora ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Aw, thanks Isadora ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. You’re welcome ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

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  10. No-one wants some smart alec being positive and cheerful when their world is falling apart. Great ending. Congratulations on the book and thanks for sharing the unboxing.

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    1. Much better if we are all in despair together! Thanks Margaret, you’re welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. I can almost see the satisfied smile on his face!

    Another book! Congratulations, Iain

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    1. Thanks Keith ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. I love the humanity in this story. We are all a little vengeful like that from time to time.
    Congrats on the book. I look forward to reading it.

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    1. Thanks so much Dawn. Hopefully will appear in US at the end of the month, I will keep you updated.

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  13. one of your best.โ€‚truly enjoyed it.โ€‚well done.โ€‚congrats on the book, too.โ€‚:)

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    1. Thanks so much, very kind ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. LOL
    Well it seems his friend did managed to cheer him up after all. A great piece Iain. You captured both moods here really well.

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    1. Thanks Laurie ๐Ÿ™‚

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  15. Guess his friend means well but some things are tough to get over.โ€‚Congratulations on your new book.โ€‚Cute video of you and your kids ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. We can all use a little pick-me-up sometimes, even if it comes in the form of someone else falling down. Congratulations on you book!

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  17. Lovely imagery, and it caused me to smile. Whatโ€™s not to like

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    1. Thanks Michael, glad it raised a smile

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  18. Too soon for rosy platitudes.โ€‚At least Michael fell for it. (haha)โ€‚I love the video. The kids are adorable (So many pages).โ€‚Congratulations, Iain!โ€‚I’ll have to get my copy soon.

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    1. Thanks Brenda, hope you manage to get a copy ๐Ÿ™‚

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  19. Congratulations to you on your book!

    And that video is just priceless.

    It seems Michael was trying to be a good friend but there are times when it’s simply best to keep one’s mouth shut.

    Great story, Iain.

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    1. Thank you on both counts ๐Ÿ™‚

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  20. Great ending. Michael had that coming…

    Congrats on your book!

    -Angela

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    1. Thanks so much Angela ๐Ÿ™‚

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  21. I guess Michael’s downfall was just the tiny bit of laughter the MC needed for his heart. Michael overdid it there with the wisecracking just a bit, LOL.

    Congrats on your book, and the kids and you look so cute together.

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    1. Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  22. poor Michael he was only trying to be supportive, but he ended up helping in some small way at the end ๐Ÿ™‚

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