IAIN KELLY

CAN I HAVE MY BALL BACK?

The chairs and table sat in the centre of the garden, with uplighters in either corner. Around the four flawlessly straight sides a selection of rare flowers and plants, all in symmetry.

The gardener snipped the last piece of grass with his lawn clippers. A smile spread across his face. He had taken the patch of poor quality soil and created perfect harmony.

He could hear the children playing nearby. The sound of a ball being kicked. He raised an eyebrow in disapproval at the thought of the lawn being trampled.

There was a louder kick. Looking up into the sun he watched in horror as the ball dropped over the wall. It cannoned off an uplighter, knocking it over, ricocheted into a plant pot that smashed, rolled across the rare and fragile Jamesia Americana, before settling on top of a miniature Chusan Palm.

After a moment the doorbell rang. He stormed to the door and flung it open, to be greeted by a small boy.

‘Please, sir. Can I have my ball back?’


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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story in around 150 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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55 responses to “CAN I HAVE MY BALL BACK?”

  1. magarisa Avatar

    Oh no! That poor gardener. I cringed in sympathy as I followed the ball’s trajectory. Your story goes perfectly with the picture.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      When I saw that picture my immediate thought was how can I mess up that perfect garden! Glad you liked it 🙂

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  2. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    How easily a “perfect” garden is disturbed. Great story!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you! 🙂

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  3. alphabetstory Avatar

    Nicely planned garden and story. Well written,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very kind, thank you.

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  4. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Like a Hollywood film I expect a beautiful relationship to start. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yes, the grumpy old man and the precocious kid!

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  5. joyroses13 Avatar

    OHHH my! And what was the gardener’s response? 🙂 Great job!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Hopefully he calmed down 🙂

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  6. Annie Avatar

    Aww man! What a perfect garden to disturb!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      All that effort!

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  7. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Oh, please don’t tell me that he yelled at the kid!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he calmed down and they became friends…. Maybe!

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  8. James Avatar

    These things happen.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      When it’s your passion and hard work that is ruined though, you sometimes lose perspective.

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  9. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Oh my gosh how horrible! But how could you get mad at such a innocent looking face? LOL! Great story Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks PJ, he won’t stay mad for long I’m sure!

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  10. John Davis Frain Avatar

    Wonderful story. You know what I love about so many of your stories, Iain? Well, I mean, besides how well written and engaging they are. So many let the reader take the ending and add a little extra scene of their own. Which is kinda cool. Nice job here, I loved it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks John, very kind. I do try to leave the reader with something to think about.

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  11. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    Goes on to prove that order always attracts chaos. Loved the characterization and build up.

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    1. apsster Avatar

      This reminds me of Mom. She used to hate those kids who used to ruin her perfect little garden.

      I think I have broken more windows than the roses in the bush LOL

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      1. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Ha, I was the kid with the ball too 🙂

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    2. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, and thanks for the prompt – your garden?

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      1. yarnspinnerr Avatar

        No. This pic is from a resort deep in the jungles of Coorg in South India.

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  12. Michael Avatar

    I enjoyed your description of the chaos.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael.

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  13. neelwritesblog Avatar

    What a perfectly relatable story. Nice one, Lian.

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  14. may hem Avatar
    may hem

    Had a gardener neighbour as a kid. He would return all the balls that strayed into his garden… sliced perflecty in half.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ouch,a harsh lesson!

      Like

  15. ladieswholunchreviews Avatar

    We, sweet story. We have a house in our neighborhood like that where the guy is out there every day doing something in the yard. It’s gorgeous, but who has the time??

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I agree,would love a tidy, beautiful garden, but just not enough days in the year to do it.

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  16. Bryan Aiello Avatar
    Bryan Aiello

    humanity would be perfect if not for all the damn humans! great detailed story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Very true! Thanks.

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  17. athling2001 Avatar

    Interesting word – uplighters. Well done.

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  18. Chris C. Avatar

    The poor gardener! Although I couldn’t help but feel a smidgeon of sympathy for the boy. A humorous take on a very common situation. Let’s hope the boy got his ball without too much of a lecture.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      A word of warning and a disapproving look – this time! Thanks Chris.

      Like

  19. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    Brought back some sweet childhood memories. Thanks for writing this.
    Best wishes,
    Moon
    https://aslifehappens60.wordpress.com

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You’re welcome and thank you.

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  20. afairymind Avatar

    Great story, Iain, that brings back many memories. My brothers were always kicking their footballs over into neighbouring gardens when we were kids. For some reason I was always the one who ended up going round to ask for them back! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, I seem to remember getting my sister to do that too!

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  21. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Great story. (I can recall a neighbor getting hostile with me when I simply stepped on her grass! I felt from then on…she was a mean old woman!) Hopefully, he calmed down when he saw the child! Perhaps he suggested they repair the garden together which would teach the child to be more careful, ability to become friends, and learn a bit about gardening. A lesson he would probably never forget. Thinking on the positive side today…. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Absolutely, I see a friendship blossoming here. Thank you for your comment 🙂

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  22. rosemawrites Avatar

    ooops, i hope the gardener won’t be too pissed off! nice take, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I’m sure he’ll calm down. Eventually!

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      1. rosemawrites Avatar

        that’s good news 🙂

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  23. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Aw, probably frightened the poor kid. It’s damaging to his garden but I’m sure the kid will be terrified of strangers if the Gardner is mean. Especially if he’s carrying certain tools around – hedge clippers?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, yes, or anything big and sharp 🙂

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  24. NJ Avatar
    NJ

    Ouch! The poor gardner. I pity the kid too. I wonder what’s in store for the lil guy. Maybe he could hug the anger out from the gardner 😁

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  25. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    That poor gardener. The kid probably had no idea that his actions could have such an impact. I wonder how he reacted to the kid’s question 😁

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he’ll get his ball back, just maybe not right away!

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        Good to know! 😁😁

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