Iain Kelly

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ELLIE

Ellie struggled along the icy path to the children’s hospital, two full bags in either hand.

‘Morning, Ellie. What are you donating today? More hats?’

Ellie nodded. Bill took the bags from her. ‘Thank you, Ellie. You have a nice Christmas.’

Ellie left silently. Bill handed the bags to Beth. ‘Put these with the rest.’

Beth emptied the knitted hats onto the table, joining the stacks of hundreds more.

‘Why does she do it?’ Beth asked Bill.

‘She lost her own child in the ice storm of ’82. Ever since, she knits hats.’

Beth watched the lonely figure shuffling away, hunched against the cold.

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Copyright Bjorn Rudberg

Happy Holidays to all the Friday Fictioneers and those that visit my blog. As always I am eternally grateful for everyone who takes the time to read my offerings. I hope you all have a wonderful break and a Happy New Year.

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Iain Kelly

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103 responses to “ELLIE”

  1. ELLIE – The Militant Negro™

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    A chewy character here. Nice one, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neil

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  3. Annie Avatar
    Annie

    This makes me sad and warms my heart all at once. Absolutely love the way you tell the story. Happy holidays to you and yours, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Annie, for all the comments and for continuing to read my stories over the past year. Happy Holidays to you as well, I hope you enjoy it 🙂

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  4. Jane Dougherty Avatar
    Jane Dougherty

    Poignant and so believable.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Jane.

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar
        Jane Dougherty

        🙂

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  5. shehannemoore Avatar
    shehannemoore

    Happy Christmas to you Iain. XXX for all the wonderful fiction all year round.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Shehanne – thank you for always reading and your supportive comments. Merry Christmas, hope you have a great time 🙂 x

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      1. shehannemoore Avatar
        shehannemoore

        You too Iain. I am looking forward to more entertainment next year x

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  6. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    A form of therapy, but I’m not sure it’s altogether working. Still, someone benefits. Merry Christmas, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sandra, a nice way to look at it, even if she is struggling to cope she is helping others.

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  7. Varad Avatar
    Varad

    Beautiful and sad at the same time. No parent should outlive their child. Nice tale, Iain.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Varad.

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    I echo Varad. No parent should outlive their child. And the holidays do seem to magnify loss. Poignant and well written story, sir. Made my screen blur.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you for such kind words Rochelle.

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  9. Balaka Avatar
    Balaka

    Happy holidays to you too. This was a nice story..made me pensive. Have a great holiday.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, much appreciated 🙂

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  10. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    Oh, poor Ellie. Such grief. So well-written.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much.

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  11. magarisa Avatar
    magarisa

    So poignant. Hopefully, the hats will be put to good use.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you. From my experience of children’s hospitals, they certainly will be 🙂

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  12. James Avatar
    James

    That must be so horrible. At least she found a way to compensate somewhat.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks James. It appears she is over-compensating, but then I can’t imagine how anyone would cope in that situation.

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  13. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    Once again you’ve knitted a delightful yarn. Hats off to you sir. Enjoy the festive season, I look forward to reading more from you in the very near future.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Keith – I always enjoy your comments 🙂

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  14. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    So very tragic . superbly written, as always.
    I loved the last line. I could feel Ellie’s lonely, cold heart.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Moon, glad you liked it 🙂

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  15. scr4pl80 Avatar
    scr4pl80

    Great tale, Iain. Hope you have a marvelous holiday! Thanks for sharing your little stories with us.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Janet, and a Happy Holidays to you too. Thank you so much for reading and all your supportive comments 🙂

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  16. bbryanthomas Avatar
    bbryanthomas

    They should pass on some of the hats

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Bryan. That’s the idea, it’s more that she keeps knitting more hats than they will ever need.

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  17. J Hardy Carroll Avatar
    J Hardy Carroll

    A sad portrait!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Afraid so – not quite in the festive mood.

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  18. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    I can so understand her. Lovely story, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Dale, that means a lot from you.

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        😘

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  19. Jelli Avatar
    Jelli

    What a beautifully touching story. No child should have to be so cold, and every child should have a beautiful hat knit with pure love, too. 🙂 ❤

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, glad you liked it – could almost be a prequel to your own story this week 🙂

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      1. Jelli Avatar
        Jelli

        That’s what I thought when I read yours! Wow, love when that happens, don’t you? Merry Christmas, lain.

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        Iain Kelly

        Merry Christmas to you also 🙂

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  20. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I hope that there will be someone buying them before the next ice-storm…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Would be nice for them to be put to good use. Thanks Bjorn.

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  21. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar
    Alicia Jamtaas

    I’m in a knitting group (I don’t knit, I embroider, but it’s the camaraderie that counts.) More than half the ladies knit hats for cancer patients or baby clothes for children that die at birth ~ so the parents have something beautiful to put their child in or layettes for children of military men and women. It warms the cockles of my heart. You brought that feeling to the surface with your story. Thank you and Merry Christmas.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Alicia – it was based on my twins who spent time in hospital when born premature and wore clothes that were knitted and donated to the hospital as shop clothes didn’t come in sizes small enough. Those little sort of things become massive gestures when in that situation. Glad it gave you that same feeling 🙂

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      1. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar
        Alicia Jamtaas

        Oh, it truly did. Thanks for giving me a little insight into your story.

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  22. Edith M. Field Avatar
    Edith M. Field

    This was so well written. I have a very powerful image of Ellie – I can see her walking away surrounded by her grief. Great story, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Edith, much appreciated.

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  23. Alice Audrey Avatar
    Alice Audrey

    I hope they aren’t throwing them away. Surely there is someone who would appreciate them.

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  24. anuragbakhshi Avatar
    anuragbakhshi

    So poignant and yet so warm. Lovely read.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  25. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    it must be tough to get over the lost of a child. at least, she’s doing something positive about it. nice story. happy holidays to you and family.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, and Happy Holidays 🙂

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  26. Fatima Fakier Avatar
    Fatima Fakier

    Oh wow, hats have inspired a sense of loss for me too in my story. She cuts a lonely figure hunching against the cold while she knits hats to keep others warm 😦

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Fatima

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  27. J.A. Prentice Avatar
    J.A. Prentice

    A very sad story. You captured a character clearly with just one moment.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  28. J. E. Kennedy Avatar
    J. E. Kennedy

    Beautifully sad story Iain, very well told.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much

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  29. Jan Brown Avatar
    Jan Brown

    A very sad but well told tale. Her coping mechanism doesn’t seem to be working too well, but how many of us would fare better under the circumstances?

    Wishing you all the best as you celebrate Christmas!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Jan. It is difficult to see how anyone would cope in such circumstances. Merry Christmas to you and yours 🙂

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  30. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    Quite sad, but sweet that she’s trying to keep other people’s kids warm after what happened to hers.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  31. Liz Young Avatar
    Liz Young

    Poor Ellie – she should donate her lovely hats to a refugee charity which will actually use them.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Perhaps that is where they get sent in the end. Thanks Liz.

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  32. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    A very believable tale, Iain. Your dialogue is lovely, really well judged, telling the story without ever stepping out of character. A sad story, but one with an undercurrent of hope.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much Penny, very kind.

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  33. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar
    Brenda’s Thoughts

    This is a beautiful story of a woman who gives in spite of her grief. Acts of kindness do bring healing! Happy holidays to you as well. =)

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Brenda 🙂

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  34. Lynn Love Avatar
    Lynn Love

    Sad but beautifully told, Iain. What a lovely thing to keep giving after your own loss. Lovely.
    All the best for Christmas and 2018

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Lynn, and to you 🙂

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  35. Vivian Zems Avatar
    Vivian Zems

    A poignant read. Good one. Ellie cuts a lonely figure.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Vivian

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar
        Vivian Zems

        😊

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  36. Susan Avatar
    Susan

    a touching tale for Christmas. I hope someone becomes the beneficiary of Ellie’s labors.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Susan

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  37. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist Avatar
    Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist

    Christmas is a hard time for many particularly those who have lost children and other loved ones. Your story was beautiful although I’m sure they could find a use for the hats somehow. Hope you have a merry Christmas and a Happy New Year Iain.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Irene, and a Merry Christmas to you and yours too 🙂

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  38. Dawn M. Miller Avatar
    Dawn M. Miller

    Sweet story Lain, Happy Holidays to you as well.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Dawn.

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  39. rgayer55 Avatar
    rgayer55

    A touching story, Iain. Have a blessed holiday.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Russell, and to you too.

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  40. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    Sad and tender. An example of not being able to move on from a loss so overwhelming.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Sarah Ann

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  41. kindredspirit23 Avatar
    kindredspirit23

    Sad and Melancholy. Not quite to depressing.
    Well written.
    Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/12/22/tend-to-your-knittin/
    Scott

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      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Scott

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        kindredspirit23

        U R Wlcm

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  42. mjlstories Avatar
    mjlstories

    Enjoyed your sad tale (poor Ellie) and also the real story behind the story. Hope your twins are thriving. Merry Christmas!

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      Iain Kelly

      They certainly are, thank you 🙂

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  43. Susan A Eames Avatar
    Susan A Eames

    That was a beautiful story! Sad but so well written. Well done.

    I’m going to resume writing stories with FF in the New Year.
    Happy Christmas!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Look forward to reading more from you then Susan. Merry Christmas to you 🙂

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  44. subroto Avatar
    subroto

    Sad story but maybe it’s time to move on. But I’ll tip my cap to her for her hard work.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you.

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  45. michaelwynnauthor Avatar
    michaelwynnauthor

    Poignant piece Iain. Merry Christmas, see you on the other side

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Michael, and to you too.

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  46. patriciaruthsusan Avatar
    patriciaruthsusan

    A heartrending story, Iain. It would be a mother’s worst fear. Good writing. Happy Holidays. —- Suzanne

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Suzanne.

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  47. Jan Vanek Avatar
    Jan Vanek

    Beautiful, sad and poignant story. I loved Ellie, though something in the words, “Put these with the rest” made me want to punch Bill. Happy New Year, Iain!

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      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Jan – I think Bill means well, he’s just a realist.

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  48. thinkthoughtstaught Avatar
    thinkthoughtstaught

    Hi Iain Kelly,
    A very heartwrenching story indeed. Beautiful and captivating. Thanks so much for sharing this. Hope to see more great works from you in the future!
    Cheers,
    💕🤗
    TTT https://thinkthoughtstaught.wordpress.com

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  49. Woman walking Max Avatar
    Woman walking Max

    Such a gentle and poignant story, told with delicacy.

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much

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