MORNING TEA

Lady Devonshire was not to be dissuaded, ‘I hear he will be worth a fortune when he inherits.’

‘Mama, don’t be so vulgar,’ Bethany admonished.

Lady Worthington leaned forward and patted Bethany’s knee. ‘There are worse things than to marry for money, such as being a spinster with none.’

Bethany sat in brooding silence. She would be damned if she married the boorish Stapleton, fortune or not.

Across the lawn, she watched Thomas digging the flowerbed. Her mind wandered back to that warm evening two nights ago.

‘Are you feeling alright, dear. You look a little flustered,’ her mother remarked.


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Copyright Fatima Fakier Deria

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

142 responses to “MORNING TEA”

  1. Very DH Lawrence. Iain

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    1. Thanks Neil, a compliment I hope!

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  2. oooh, thats right up my street!!! I want more of that …. don’t leave me wanting. Cheeky Thomas!!

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    1. 🙂 thank you so much Viola, pleased you liked it.

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      1. Loved it!

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  3. Reblogged this on Ideas.Become.Words and commented:
    Shades of Lady Chatterley here … and right up my street!
    Iain Kelly ALWAYS delivers entertaining flash fiction, and I look forward to his pieces scrolling down through my feed.
    This is only 100 words. Treat yourself

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    1. So kind, thank you for the reblog 🙂

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  4. Stapleton. Cracking name for a boorish money hee haw. A cock wobbler as someone me planned to me. Perfect.

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    1. Haha love that term! Thanks Geoff.

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  5. DH Lawrence for sure. Hope she isn’t digging her own grave. Superbly crafted , kelly.

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  6. If I were Bethany, I’d take a chance with being a poor spinster and Thomas on the side. After all, everything’s relative, ‘poor’ wouldn’t have been poverty-stricken I don’t suppose.

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    1. I’m sure they could survive, but I doubt her family would speak to them – which may be a good thing!

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      1. They wouldn’t speak to her, they’d cut her off without a penny, they’d hound Thomas out of the county…If they found out…

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  7. I say!
    That Thomas chappie needs horse-whipped!
    Expertly done, Iain.

    But ‘ss’ in dissuaded, I think.

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    1. Good spot, thanks CE. Yes, a little disciplining may be required.

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  8. I enjoyed this very much. It definitely makes you want to read more.

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  9. Decisions decisions. Loads of money or free flowers and vegetables for life! Entertaining as ever Iain

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    1. Thanks Keith 🙂 I think her mind might be made up already.

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  10. Love it, Iain! And coincidentally I have a handsome gardener called Tomasz in something I am currently writing. I so enjoyed your story. My grandmother used to say if you marry for money bedtime comes around awfully quickly :))

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    1. I love that comment of your grandmother!

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    2. I wonder if your Tomasz attracts as much attention as mine? Thanks Jilly, and your grandmother for sound wisdom.

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  11. Bethany has secrets! And has to perhaps choose between inheritance and ‘warmth’…

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    1. It is a difficult choice for sure. Thanks Anita.

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  12. What would the world be, were it not for daydreams? Good for Bethany! 🙂

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    1. We all have to escape somehow. Thanks Jan

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  13. As she watched his muscles rippling beneath his thin workman’s shirt, her mind drifted back to…anyway.

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    1. That’s the spirit – Steady James 😉

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  14. Dear Iain,

    We know who she wants to be with, don’t we? Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. I think we can read her mind clearly enough! Thanks Rochelle.

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  15. I feel that way watching my imaginary au pair.
    Randy

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    1. Haha, nice comment Randy. Hope you manage to keep calm!

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  16. Thomas the flusterer! Hey Iain, are you taking part in A to Z this year? I just got word my job will be ending, so my future is cloudy, but I hope to give it another stab.

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    1. Hope your job situation works out Joe. Yes, I’m signed up again, with a bit of a different theme this year. Hope you can make it and see you there!

      THE A TO Z CHALLENGE 2018 – THEME REVEAL

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  17. Nice bit of dialogue there, Iain. The story infers more than it states. Job well done.

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    1. Many thanks, appreciated.

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  18. Looks like Mum is in for some shocking news. Well done 🙂

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    1. Her reaction will be priceless if she ever finds out!

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  19. I thinking running off with Thomas would be much better than being a spinster, and much, much better than a life with that boorish, what’s-his-name….

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    1. You’re a romantic at heart Trent 🙂

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      1. Guilty as charged.

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  20. Iain, I really enjoyed this and it gave me much to think about.
    What I’ve found with a lot of people in this situation, is they think they want to escape all the restrictions, social expectations, the money and they might rebel for awhile, fast forward a few years and they’re back in the “the club”. It would be interesting to track down the hippy generation and see what they’re doing now. I don’t think being a battler is a bad thing, and having the silver spoon can stop one from really achieving their best, or becoming their own person. Who they were meant to be.
    xx Rowena

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    1. Interesting thoughts Rowena, especially about later generations. I suspect a lot of the hippy generation are now settled down and perfectly content in a ‘normal’ life. There’s only so long you can survive with a carefree attitude to everything.

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      1. I noticed some of my alternative friends are now working in the money market, which to me seems like the ultimate sell out. However, there’s a lot to be said for being able to afford your own garret by the sea.

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  21. I wonder what she would do next.
    Is she is brave and innocent enough to follow her heart?🙂
    Great dialogue and setting, Iain.

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    1. Shrewd question, Moon!

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    2. Good question indeed, and is that the right choice in the end? Thanks Moon.

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  22. I think the answer lies in the soil, as they used to say on Gardeners’ Question Time. Or at least in a more earthy choice of suitor. Nicely done.

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    1. ‘Earthy’ – I like that 🙂

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  23. Yes, I thought Lady Chatterly as well. Love wins over money in my book.

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    1. We’re all romantics at heart. Thanks Janet.

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  24. It must be rotten to be brought up so that your calling is to be married – whether for wealth or for dynastic purposes. Bethany has a tough choice to make. Stapleton is bad – but is a pokey cottage full of children and no money any better, even with Thomas in the deal?

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    1. It’s not much of a choice when put like that. Fortunately in some places the world is slowly moving on.

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  25. This is delightful! Couldn’t help but smile at her warm memories. Hope things turn out in her favor.

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    1. Me too. Thanks Karen 🙂

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  26. Very historical romance of you, Iain. Of course she goes for the gardener… Money does not buy you happiness – especially with an old boor….

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    1. I just hope it ends well for them 😉 Thanks Dale.

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      1. Why not? 😊

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  27. Ah, her mind – and much more! – have already strayed elsewhere. I do hope Stapleton wasn’t smitten. Lovely tale Iain

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    1. I wonder if Stapleton might actually be relieved – I’m not sure a strong-willed independent wife would be to his liking! 🙂

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      1. Haha! Yes, she sounds like she might be hard work for a man who wans a quiet life

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  28. Love the language of this one. It made me feel like I was there. I feel like there’s two ways to take Thomas digging in the garden. Perhaps there was an evening of delights with Thomas in the garden. Or perhaps she’s really hoping that Thomas doesn’t find the body. 😉

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    1. Ha, I hadn’t even thought of the second one! 🙂

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      1. Hehe. I’ve probably read too many suspense novels. 😉

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      2. Oh! Neither had I!!!

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  29. Superb characterisation – the domineering mother, the uninspiring suitor, the irresistible gardener and the young woman who knows her own mind. A great story, Iain. I loved it!

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    1. Thank you Edith, lovely comment 🙂

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  30. Love it. Very Jane Austen-esque.

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    1. Thank you Lisa – exactly who I had in mind 🙂

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  31. I knew this would be a lovely tale the minute I read “Lady Davenshire.” I was not disappointed.

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    1. Thank you Alicia 🙂

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  32. You had me at “Morning Tea” and now my mind is wandering down the same path as Bethany’s as I’m left with thoughts of Thomas…

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    1. A wonderful comment to receive, thank you so much 🙂

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  33. Wow, Iain, that was frickin’ awesome. Leave ’em flustered, that a boy.

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    1. Thank you Russell 🙂

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    1. Thank you Jennie 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome, Iain. 🙂

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  34. Reminded me of the mother from Pride and Prejudice. Always urging her daughters to marry for money. Apt take on the prompt!

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    1. Thank you, exactly the sort of character I had in mind.

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  35. i think she should marry for money and then keep a lover on the side as it used to. 🙂

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  36. With a title of morning tea and a character called Lady Devonshire I immediately was down a track of scones, cream and jam and a nice cup of tea. Wonderful names you gave your characters in this Victorian style ? romance. The warm evening two nights earlier was the icing on the cake (if they weren’t having those scones). Enjoyed this Iain.

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    1. Haha thanks Irene, yes a little bit of Victorian era comedy of manners. Pleased it evoked the right style with you Irene 🙂

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  37. I imagine Lady Worthington is in for a big surprise pretty soon. Took me back to the era of Jane Austen and DH Lawrence, very well-written.

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    1. Thank you, that’s the style I was aiming for 🙂

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  38. I suspect one way or other spinster hood is not in her future.

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    1. It doesn’t seem so.

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  39. Lady Worthington is going to be sorely disappointed, I fear 🙂 Made me smile!

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  40. A classic take. Great write.

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  41. As, the truth comes out, at least to the reader! Well done. I hope she has the courage to follow her heart.

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  42. Bethany has someone else in her mind and her family will never allow her will to happen.
    This could go so many ways. Nicely done, Iain. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Norma 🙂

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  43. Was it lady Chatterley… maybe marry and keep her lover…

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    1. A risky strategy if she gets caught! Thanks for reading Bjorn.

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  44. I hope she marries the gardener, and sucks to her mother!

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  45. Oooooo I LOVE… intrigue and secret liaisons. The gardener huh? 😉

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    1. Always the gardener 😉

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  46. Great story, Iain. I was thinking Pride and Prejudice as well, but rather about the conversation Lizzy and Charlotte had with Lizzy’s aunt, where they speak realisticly about marriage, the why and how. Romance isn’t part of it. I’ll be a cynic and say Bethany could have both. She wouldn’t be the first.

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    1. Definitely not the first, Thanks for the flattering comparison 🙂

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    If I was the gardener I run away to America with her and make a fortune selling stories. Ps. I also enjoyed the names to gave to the players.

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  48. I think Thomas is planting more than flowers. Well told Iain. Your stories are always so complete.

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    1. Thank you Dan, much appreciated 🙂

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